Xiu Erdai's daily essays

09696-Focus on key points

Little white flower elf: "Tuanxia is only this small, how many elves do you want to manage it? Only me. I am the strongest elf in Tuanxia, ​​and also the weakest."

Me: "When you say 'a little bit bigger', do you mean the size of Tuanxia, ​​the richness of the story, or the variety of the characters?"

Little White Flower Elf: "No matter how you think about it, it can't be referring to volume, right? What does volume have to do with the story?"

Me: "The volume should correspond to how many copies are opened. The more copies, the larger the scope of the world will be expanded."

Little White Flower Elf: "'This world contains five galaxies' and 'This world only exists in a glass jar' are just sentences, and their volumes only take up the space of one sentence."

Me: "When the dimensions are crossed, the concept of volume is different? The world-class volume in low dimensions may be just a matter of a few strokes in high dimensions?"

Little White Flower Elf: "I don't understand that. What do you want from me?"

Me: "I just want to ask you about Tuanxia's detailed functions."

Little White Flower Elf: "Is it meaningful to speak in the main Esperanto? I said that there are five universes in it. Does it sound like a sentence to you? You can only understand what the five universes mean by experiencing it yourself and actively immersing yourself in it." .”

Le Ge: "You just said that there were five galaxies, did they develop into five universes in a short while?"

The little white flower elf glanced at Legge disdainfully: "I'll just give you an example, what are you doing seriously? I think you read too little, and you don't know how much seriousness should be given to different books. Some books must be carefully read. , and some books can only be appreciated when they are read in their entirety, ignoring many small mistakes and omissions."

Little White Flower Elf: "Do you understand what it means to focus on the key points? You can't focus too much on legal issues in a story where the main line is about love, and you can't think too much about IQ issues in a story where the main line is counterattack. .”

Legge: "...huh?"

Me: "It's obviously nonsense. Serious love cookies who have nothing to do to break the law? The article that relies on the enemy's IQ to achieve a counterattack...Let's not talk about how many complaints it will receive, the key is Mei Shuanli Don’t write this kind. Are you really an elf raised by Mei Shuanli? Don’t some wild elves get into Mei Shuanli’s world and pretend to be the master of the world, right? Tell me, are you bullying the real person in Mei Shuanli’s world? Native elves?"

09697-Material and line

I switched Coach Wei to my left hand, and then I held Pei Jianzhuo's body with my right hand.

The little white flower elf held her heart, with a shocked expression on her face: "I just wanted to avoid spoilers, so I deliberately used a plot I'm not familiar with as an example, but you questioned me as... wild?"

I recorded the performance of the little white flower elf and sent it to Mei Shuanli, who was still discussing with the Disciplinary Department whether he should be punished.

Mei Shuanli seemed to be very idle, and immediately replied to me: "I have never seen this elf. The second son always seems to be able to discover the side of the world and stories that ordinary people can't find."

Me: "You don't know everything about your story world?"

Mei Shuanli: "Of course not. Readers have always been able to discover in my stories what I didn't realize I had expressed. In fact, it should be said that what all readers read in any article is consistent with what the author wants. What you want to express, or what you think you express, will not be exactly the same.”

Mei Shuanli: "What the author tries to write is what the author cares about, and what the reader reads is what the reader cares about. So some authors think that what they write is a simple campus love story between a school bully and a school bully. Cookies, but what parents see is that their children actually devote their energy to falling in love when they should be studying, and think, 'If you don't fall in love, shouldn't you become a god of learning?'."

Mei Shuanli: "There are some authors who think they are writing about the spirit of indomitable struggle against power, but some readers say angrily, 'Why is there so much violence described in it? What should I do if I spoil children? This author really has no sense of social responsibility. !'”

Mei Shuanli: "The author is so angry, I thought, 'When I was young, I read so many stories about the whole family dying at every turn, and I was not led so badly that I wanted to kill the whole family. I was just angry with myself for a while, and I didn’t scold back. Is it my fault that your own children don’t learn well? Why don’t you reflect on the fact that you were seen by children when you insulted innocent authors?’”

Me: "Wait a minute, I thought this little white flower elf was giving random examples, but when I get to your examples that have something in common with it... Tuanxia contains more than just the direction of the stories you used to write before you conceived a baby ? Does it include more story types? The red mist emitted by Xia Tuan only shows a small part of Tuan Xia's face?"

Mei Shuanli: "I put a lot of content that I want to express and try to describe in Tuanxia, ​​but I didn't draw a clear line for them. That is to say, I only listed what I think is interesting. The material, and finally the thread connecting the material is left to the reader. What the reader wants to see, his idea will be turned into a thread, and then the material will be automatically attached to the line to become a complete article."

09698 - not very stereotyped

Mei Shuanli: "As for the red mist created by Xia Tuan, it should be regarded as an accident. On the one hand, my target reader group is human beings, and I have never heard of any spirit beast or monster who read my article with gusto; On the other hand, I have just entered the Nascent Soul, and I can only transfer my materials at the initial stage of the Nascent Soul, and Xiatuan's cultivation level has not yet entered my consideration."

Mei Shuanli: "So when Tuan Xia entered Xia Tuan's stomach and was expelled by Xia Tuan, Tuan Xia's operating logic was temporarily broken up. Even if she received other people's ideas and obtained a story line during that period, I was also unable to mobilize the material, so I could only continue to spread it. In the end, what everyone saw was their deepest impression on me."

Mei Shuanli: "Those illusions of red mist were not intentionally created by me, they were the condensed stereotypes of me that all Yunxia Sect disciples have of me."

Me: "After Tuan Xia regroups into a ball, its operation logic will be restored, right? When someone uses Tuan Xia in the future, they will be able to see a clear story line?"

Mei Shuanli: "Because your cultivation base is a little higher than mine now, so I'm not sure if the story line will be clear enough if you use it. In addition, your impression of me is not very rigid, so...how about You want your apprentice to try? The apprentice named Lege. Pei Wuyao may not be suitable, because it is said that Pei Wuyao's thinking is a bit seriously influenced by monsters."

We really have a tacit understanding about the choice of experimenters, but...

Me: "You don't think I'm very stereotypical about you?"

Mei Shuanli: "You just connected me with meat in the meaning of the words, but in practice, you won't have various reactions such as rapid heartbeats as soon as you see me. When you are immersed in the plot of my article When you read the book, you may be excited—probably seldom boil now—but when you read the article, close the book, and see me in real life, the first thing you think of is "that's the way of Mei Shuanli" or "meat meat" product suppliers', not...juice."

Mei Shuanli: "To put it simply, the way you look at me is usually very pure and kind, so that the text is the text and does not affect the reality. Maybe this is also related to your stillness. In fact, your attitude towards the materials of the Acacia Sect is also the same. It is very academic and very objective. You can play with related memes in the chat, but you will not directly equate me and the Acacia sect with our works."

Mei Shuanli: "You don't think that what I write is what I have personally experienced, and you don't think that some of the lines that break the lower limit in my article are said by myself. You believe that there are people in the Acacia Sect who don't easily have relationships with others You believe that Sect Leader Jiang is indeed incapable of doing things sometimes."

09699-Sometimes the repair does not reflect all

Me: "Wait a minute, Master Jiang puts this sentence inappropriately."

Mei Shuanli: "It's actually the same thing. It's a question of whether you have a subjective impression of someone, or whether you are completely blinded by a stereotype. Is it a question of impression or prejudice."

Me: "Are you sure that my current cultivation is higher than yours? I think your infant formation process may be so solid that you have reached the level of the initial stage of Nascent Soul immediately after your infant formation?"

Mei Shuanli: "I don't know about this. Anyway, my physical baby has just been formed, and I haven't had time to compare the similarities and differences between my baby and other nascent baby babies at the early stage. As for what you may think, some of my Thoughts are more mature than yours, it may not be a matter of cultivation, but the influence of age. I can say that I have lived so many years longer than you, even if my cultivation is improving at a slower rate than you, but I think it is not a waste of time. My Some experiences and perceptions have not been transformed into my explicit cultivation for the time being, but in the future, when the right time comes, maybe they will be transformed?"

I ended the communication with Mei Shuanli, looked at the little white flower elf who was leaning on the surface of Tuanxia, ​​and asked, "Is the cultivation base meaningless in some aspects? Or, the scope covered by the cultivation base is too small. Can some very important things not be reflected?"

It took a while for the little white flower elf to realize: "Are you asking me?"

Me: "Yes."

Little white flower elf: "I'm not a monk. Elves don't pay attention to cultivation."

Xia Tuan: "Spiritual beasts and monsters are very particular about their cultivation, but we don't deliberately improve their cultivation. We will be happy when our cultivation has increased, but if our cultivation has not improved, there is a way to live without it. .When an opportunity to improve our cultivation and an opportunity to eat meat are presented to us at the same time, the former may not be as attractive as the latter."

Little White Flower Elf: "If the opportunity to improve one's cultivation comes instantly, without extra effort and waiting, it will be more attractive than a big meal. It's a pity that the so-called opportunity is often just an illusory cake." , Whether it can be turned into reality depends on the level of effort."

Me: "If you don't take cultivation as the only criterion, how can you judge the strength of the relationship between two monks?"

Little white flower elf: "This is a problem for you humans, we elves don't care about this. I can't beat your house spirits, so I am weaker than them in fighting; and compared to making stories, house spirits don't know much at all, so in terms of making stories, I am weaker than them. I am better than them. I play to my strengths, they play to their strengths, and I live in the same world as them without interference."