Armor: The opening lane mage saved me

The protagonist, Louis, transmigrates to the planet Ares, is rescued by Lufa, joins the Netherworld Legion, and creates the Dark Nether Division. Please read to the end. This is a bad book; the author is still learning, so please be polite in your criticism, otherwise the author will get angry! (This book only covers Armor 1 and 2. The female lead is yet to be determined.) (This is the author's first time writing a book, so please criticize if it's not well-written.) This novel only involves Armor 1 and 2; the female lead is yet to be determined. (This is my first time writing a book, so please give me your opinions, thank you.)...