Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 30: 30 Comments on "The First Sequence"

Chapter 30: Comments on "The First Sequence"

Title: "First Sequence": Elbow, you are the starting point of the first sequence
The great writer of Qidian, Talking Elbow, his representative works include "My Great Lord", "I Am a Big Player", and "League of Legends: Cataclysm Era". Among them, "My Great Lord" won many awards in 2018 and broke countless records. I will not go into details in this article and will talk about it in detail next time.

On April 15, 2019, Talking Elbow released his new book "The First Sequence".

Category: Urban-supernatural powers.

This category is also my favorite.

Judging from the title of the book, it is very ordinary. If a novice author were to name it this way, it would probably be lost in the crowd.

But the boss must have a deep meaning behind this name!

Could it be a symbol of the author's ambition? A desire to achieve a rank above the great masters?
Cover: Too exhausted to complain.

I believe there will be an even more amazing cover soon! For a big guy, this isn't important at all, right?!
introduction:
Everyone, I am the Talking Elbow, and I am back.

This is a new story.

(This introduction is definitely for big guys! If a new author dares to write like this, "Hehe" is for you. Please go out, turn right, find a trash can and draw a circle!)
Chapter 10: Poison Testing:

(The boss just released 10 chapters, which completely meets my standards for testing poison. What a coincidence, isn’t it?)
Chapter 1 features the protagonist, Ren Xiaosu (what's his relationship to Lü Xiaoshu?), a young man with a story to tell, suffering from a mental illness that causes him to faint. This chapter perfectly illustrates Lu Xun's childhood favorite game, "The Door is Full of Birds." After securing his prey, the protagonist encounters a robber, and then a magical turn of events unfolds.

Chapter 2: After killing the sparrows, they only gave Yan Liuyuan (brother or sister) some offal to eat and Ren Xiaosu some soup. The meat was to be sold. Life in the shack outside the refuge barrier was truly hard!

In Chapter 3, Liu Yuan turns out to be my younger brother! Ren Xiaosu has a palace in his mind, filled with secrets. It's definitely a golden finger. And this chapter features a woman named Xiao Yu, another woman with a story to tell. Well, there are so many unspeakable stories, I hope to write more about them.

In Chapter 4, Yan Liuyuan's ability is luck. Is this the same as in "Ou Shen"? Ren Xiaosu sells a sparrow, weighing 3.6 jin (15.6 kg), a massive bird! The protagonist demonstrates his superb bargaining skills, a true lesson for everyone!
Chapter 5, School. The protagonist has no money and can only squat on the wall outside the classroom to eavesdrop. It is rare to see a child who studies so hard nowadays!
Chapter 6, The Wall and Science. This chapter introduces the story's setting: the catastrophe, the insect swarm, the evolution of the beasts, and the towering wall. It feels a lot like "Attack on Titan" (here I go again, riding on the hype), and the erection of the wall seems to hint at a conspiracy.

Alan, what do you think?
In Chapter 7, the protagonist is promoted to a substitute teacher, but he wants to pass the position to his younger brother. What a good brother and a natural hunter!
In Chapter 8, the mercenaries asked the protagonist to be their guide, but they found out that the protagonist was mentally ill. The sentence "Father and son are safe, weighing 6.6 jins (approximately 10.6 catties)" made the mercenaries immediately confirm that the protagonist was a psychopath.

In Chapter 9, the golden finger demonstrates its terrifying copying ability, and another copy ninja—Hatake Kakashi—is born. Congratulations to Ren Xiaosu on "getting a promotion and a raise, becoming general manager, becoming CEO, marrying a beautiful, wealthy woman, and reaching the pinnacle of life!" Just thinking about it makes me a little excited.
In Chapter 10, Ren Xiaosu heroically rescues his elder sister. His movements are smooth and his moves are scientific and effective. He defeats the enemy like a storm of electric charge. The opponent's defeat is not unfair, but he may still die.

After ten chapters of testing poison, I really want to try ten more chapters. Unfortunately, Elbow hasn’t updated yet. It doesn’t matter, I will continue to follow up!

Comment:
There are too few updates, it's not enough to watch!!

Background settings:

In the world after the catastrophe, beasts have evolved and even sparrows can bully humans.

The erection of high walls is somewhat similar to "Attack on Titan", dividing the area into many areas, organizing them into many teams, and naturally dividing them into many levels (perhaps sequences in the future).

The living environment in the shack outside the fortress is extremely difficult and full of dangers, which further highlights the courage and ability required for the protagonist Ren Xiaosu to survive.

Character settings:

The protagonist's ability is quite unique and buggy—copying, making him practically invincible. His younger brother, Yan Liuyuan, also has a unique ability, with minimal side effects. The supporting actress, Li Xiaoyu, is a heartwarming character. While her source of income might be unconventional, surviving in these troubled times is a testament to her skill.

Plot setting:

Ren Xiaosu, the town's bravest hunter, lives with his younger brother. The protagonist loves reading, but gives up his opportunity to study for his younger brother. He's a substitute teacher and will soon be a guide, juggling multiple roles.

To put it simply, the protagonist is currently invincible, I like it~
Style: Very cheerful, suitable for a wide audience. The daily conversations between the protagonist and his brother are full of joy and make people laugh.

The jokes written by the great author and the jokes written by the novice author are indeed not the same jokes!
This book was uploaded in the early morning. As of four o'clock in the afternoon, there were 32 alliance leaders, including four silver alliance leaders.

Such an achievement is simply "peak at debut", which a newbie wouldn't even dare to imagine!

Finally, I wish your new book will be a great success and create miracles!

You are the first sequence!

I believe that follow-up works will emerge soon. I won’t watch any “Nth Sequence”~
I am Cang Yiwei, and I am here to speak for myself!

【Cang's Ramblings】

This article was written quite early. It was a book review written when "The First Sequence" was first published. It was also the first article to be published on the official WeChat public account.

I was flattered at that time!

There seemed to be an event at that time where someone left a message and gave away a signed copy of "My Lord, Spare Me".

So, I actively left a message, asking for the book.

As a result, the column lady contacted me quickly and gave me a copy.

That was also the first physical online document I received.

At that time, I had just started reviewing books for two months.

As time goes by, many people come and go, and I no longer hang out in the column group, but have moved to a new place.

Even yesterday a Dragon King appeared.

I finally became the person I hated the most.

It goes around in circles, just like what was said in the promotional video of "The First Sequence".

Hope is the first weapon that mankind has when facing danger.

This sentence is also dedicated to this book that is striving to be recommended!
The first on the short story new book list, "Living by Cars", is now on the shelves, with only 4 words.

The second-place book has more than 50,000 words, but has not received any information.

I don’t know what happened. Has it been forgotten by history again?
I would like to use this article to record my feelings at this moment.

I hope this book can receive one or two small blessings from God, telling me that the road of writing is lonely, but not lonely!
In addition, if there are readers who have seen this book, please leave a comment and collect it!

Am I expecting a bit too much?

Okay, that’s 2000 words!

(End of this chapter)

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