"That's another story. Sawamura-san's drawings are truly amazing. I really like your meticulous attention to detail. It really highlights the characters' personalities and makes it impossible to look away."
Then he spread out the notebook next to the screen to compare it with the painting on the computer.
Seeing her drawing book being carelessly opened, Eriri blushed and muttered softly:
"Senior, aren't you embarrassed? If you flip through the notebook in front of a girl, they'll call the police..."
Bai Ye paused, completely speechless.
"I didn't expect to hear such a girlish statement from Sawamura-san."
"What did you say?!"
Sawamura Eriri glared with her eyes as big as copper bells, and her small fangs gleamed coldly and were ready for battle!
This time, Bai Ye was not afraid of her outburst. Instead, he patted her shoulder with a smile that contained a hint of comfort.
"I'm speaking to Kashiwagi Eri-sensei as a gentleman who's watched countless movies. So, Sawamura-san, please understand the situation. Next time, if you act like this in front of everyone, and Kasumigaoka-san gets snarky, I won't stand up for you."
Eriri Sawamura sat down. She saw the seriousness in Byakuya's eyes and was trying to adapt to the sudden new relationship with Byakuya.
"After all, I'm a girl..."
She scratched her ponytails, pouted her lips, and curled up her legs, leaning back in the chair.
Bai Ye didn't want to care about her insecure defensive attitude. He was discussing the book with a serious attitude.
Time will prove everything.
Once Eriri lets down her guard against him on the topic of "book painter", she will naturally lower her curled-up legs.
"I think you must be aware of the flaws in comics, otherwise you wouldn't have been silent just now, but would have been screaming."
Bai Ye joked a little and then pointed at the notebook.
"I'm just going to brag a bit, my drawings are categorized as miscellaneous CGs, which is a huge difference compared to comics."
"That's the plot, also called storytelling."
This is why Bai Ye thinks Eriri’s book is bad.
The more social security the characters have, the worse the plot will be.
In comics, if the plot is compared to the skeleton, then the content is the flesh and blood. The two complement each other and are indispensable.
The face of a beautiful girl, the body of Optimus Prime, and a snake below the legs. How can anyone accept this?
"Sawamura-kun, are you really bad at making up stories?"
Bai Ye's words hit her most vulnerable part.
The blonde girl closed her eyes and held her forehead, as if she didn't want to read the disgusting plot of her own work anymore.
"I admit that the plot is a bit off, but it's not completely unconnected. Senior, you can understand it, right?!"
"I can..." Bai Ye's mouth twitched.
"That's right!"
"The level of jump is only from Mount Everest to the Mariana Trench, not from the moon to the Earth. Phew~ I didn't expect that reading a script can also give me the feeling of riding a roller coaster. What a great deal."
Sawamura Eriri: “…”
If you still don't understand the mockery in your senior's words, just find a piece of tofu and kill yourself.
What can I do if I can’t write a plot?
She scratched her head in annoyance, reached out to grab the notebook and hid it.
"Okay, okay, don't talk about this, don't talk about this!"
Bai Ye glanced sideways.
He said everything he wanted to say, the atmosphere returned to normal, and his goal was achieved.
"That's until you talk about what happened over the weekend."
PS: Progress report 30 (8904/10000), 0 updates owed.
Thanks to [英丽丽天外飞仙] for the salted fish thorns, [猫猫喵喵喵] for the soap, and [南志离渊] for the 3 spicy strips.
Chapter 166: Tears in the Eyes Express the Feelings in the Heart
Regarding what happened over the weekend, Eriri Sawamura originally wanted to keep it in her heart forever, and was even prepared to sign up at the risk of exposing her identity.
After thinking about what Tomoya Aki had done, she was no longer as angry as she was at first.
After all, everyone has bad moods sometimes.
But, there is still a knot in my heart that is hard to erase.
Now that Bai Ye mentioned it again, and she had someone to talk to, Sawamura Eriri felt like letting it all out.
"The thing is like this..."
. . . . . .
The first person Eriri asked for help was Tomoya Aki. Bai Ye could understand this. The identity of a "book painter" was not something that could be easily spoken out.
Originally, he was ready to help Eriri together with Tomoya Aki, but he didn't expect that the other party would refuse with a legitimate reason, leaving almost no room for maneuver.
"Preparing a book... doesn't seem like a very troublesome thing."
"That's right!" Eriri agreed.
Once the comics are completed, just contact and hand them over to the printing factory, negotiate the price and quantity, and the manufacturer will even deliver the goods to your door, so you don't have to pick them up yourself; then it's time to set up the site. If you don't want to reveal your identity, just hire an employee when selling. Anything that can be solved with money is not a problem for the Sawamura family.
The above things are not difficult as long as you are willing to do them, and the rewards you get will be unimaginably generous.
Eriri Sawamura's love and Sayuri Sawamura's approval made the Sawamura family owe someone a favor.
If Tomoya Aki was fully responsible for this summer comic exhibition, Bai Ye felt that he could give up the idea of pursuing Eriri Sawamura.
He couldn't understand why Aki Tomoya refused...
No! He thought of a possibility.
"Sawamura-kun, besides you, does Aki-kun know any other illustrators?"
"Does Renye know any other painters?"
Seeing her confused look, Bai Ye knew that he could not get any valuable information from her.
【Aki Tomoya has found a new artist】
This is still his guess, without any factual support and cannot stand up to scrutiny.
If he makes a final judgment now, it would undoubtedly be irresponsible to Eriri, and more seriously, it would be a slander against Aki Tomoya. Bai Ye's principles would not allow him to do such a thing.
This does not mean that he will let it go. "If you don't make a sound, you will be amazing when you do" is also one of his creeds.
"so what."
Bai Ye took out the application form for the Summer Comic Convention again and waved it in front of Eriri with a smile.
"You've let me in on all the secrets, Kashiwagi Eri-sensei~~ Do you still need to hesitate? This is one of the few opportunities I won't charge you for. If you miss this opportunity, you'll never get it again~~"
"Senior, you really are..." Eriri gritted her teeth and almost couldn't help but punch him in the face, "Why are you asking for a beating now? Can't you just talk properly?!"
"Because I think talking nicely will only encourage your arrogance."
"So annoying, Senior..."
Eriri grabbed the application form while holding her twin ponytails, and quickly filled in the remaining options.
Then, she raised the application form and turned her face away from Bai Ye, looking very proud and arrogant.
"It's filled out, please take it and do it, senior."
Bai Ye naturally would not spoil her. He wanted to raise Ying Lili to be the person he liked, so he had to start proper training now to reduce her arrogance.
For a happy life in the future, move forward!
After taking the application form, he still spread his hands towards Eriri with a calm expression.
"Where's the reward?"
"What reward?" Eriri turned around, confusion growing in her eyes. "Senior, didn't you say you'd help me for free?"
"I mean we won't charge any money this time," Bai Ye corrected.
"That's right!"
"I just don't charge money. I didn't say I won't charge anything else."
Sawamura Eriri: “…”
Bai Ye's actions were completely beyond her expectations, and she felt her mentality gradually explode.
She knew it was impossible to not make any effort at all, but seeing her senior's smug look made her unhappy, as unhappy as Mount Everest or the Mariana Trench!
Bai Ye suddenly moved his face closer, and one could see a flash of panic in Ying Lili's eyes.
"Are you ready, Sawamura-kun?"
The memory of being hugged in bed just now flooded into her mind like a tide, and the blonde girl's voice couldn't help but have a hint of panic.
"Senior, what do you want? Don't get so close~ It's so hot..."
"Haven't you done this before? Aren't you used to it yet? Sawamura-san's shyness is really weird."
"How can I get used to this kind of thing, Senior, this Hentai!!"
……
After a moment, Bai Ye let go of Eriri in his arms. The latter leaned weakly on his shoulder, breathing slightly through her cherry lips.
What he did, of course, was to pat her head, and the only difference from last time was that he put his arm around her waist to prevent Eriri from running away.
As for why Eriri had such a dazed look in her eyes, as if she was giving herself up to happiness, he really didn't know, but he was very happy.
When you remove the veil of "arrogance", the delicate heart inside is so tempting.
"Senior, you... this head-patting maniac... go to hell a hundred times..."
Ying Lili now didn't even have the strength to lift her fingers, only her mouth remained stubborn.
Bai Ye's hands seemed to have a strange magic. Every time he touched her, her strength was drained away a little, not to mention Bai Ye's skillful touch on her head, which made her unable to stop.
"Why is the senior so skilled? How many girls have you touched?"
white night"……"
I also want to ask you!
Why do you always ask the same question after I touch your head?
It is naturally impossible to say that Bai Ye was trained from Shi Yu, and she is not the biggest "contributor".
"I learned this from Xiao Mi."
Ying Lili glanced sideways and punched his shoulder with her little fist.
"Are you petting me like a cat?"
"No, I treat it as a little golden retriever."
Yinglili "..."
After resting enough, Yinglili vaguely heard a sound coming from the direction of the door and felt that it must be her mother returning.
She came to the computer desk, touched the cold teapot, and glanced at Bai Ye who was flipping through a notebook behind her.
"I'll go pour the tea, or Mom will complain later."
"go Go."
Bai Ye was reading Kashiwagi Eri's comics one by one with his eyes fixed on them. He found some serious problems in them and kept muttering to himself.
"My understanding of your inability to write a plot has reached a new level."
"No Road Race!"
The blonde girl came into the living room and, as she expected, her mother was walking into the house carrying a basket of vegetables.
"Ying Lili, did you treat Xiao Jun well?"
"I was bullied by my senior. Mom, you are the murderer who put me in danger."
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