Girls, welcome to the Desire Bus

But at that time, even though he had no power, he still chose to stand by Nao Kitagawa.

Both parties have lost their memories and are unaware of the past adventure and the love they expressed to each other during the process.

"Well...although there were some minor incidents during the process, everything has passed safely."

"Next, we should get down to business."

"About Anna's web novel, and Nao's illustration work."

Anna Mochizuki felt a little guilty.

It was obviously just an insignificant matter, but it ended up implicating Tianchuan Liang.

"Actually...Brother Liang doesn't need to worry about my affairs anymore."

"The urban legend just attacked you... No one knows if other urban legends will attack you."

"I'm a little worried..."

At this moment, the fairy in the mirror in Tianchuan Liang's pupils spoke.

"Don't worry, I've checked the surrounding area and it doesn't smell like an urban legend."

"And if there is, I can take you and your friends away with me."

Unlike Miss Sachiko who relies on thick fog to travel through, the Fairy in the Mirror can travel through the mirror world by teleporting.

As long as there is a reflective mirror, she can come and go freely, which is quite convenient.

"It's okay." Ryo Amakawa patted Nao Kitagawa and Anna Mochizuki on the head comfortingly.

"After this [dispute], a lot of troubles have come up, and I may be very busy from now on."

"So, I want to get your affairs in order before trouble starts."

"At least while I'm away, you have something to do and can earn some money for living."

Kitagawa Nao and Mochizuki Anna looked at each other.

The two beautiful girls saw the same feeling of immense love for Amakawa Ryo in each other's eyes.

Even though all they wanted was to stay with Tianchuan Liang, the matter had already been decided and they could only obey.

But while being obedient, the two beautiful girls were also thinking about how to improve their own strength and become an aid to Tianchuan Liang.

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An hour later.

The two came to an afternoon tea shop which was very suitable for conversation. A young woman in a neat suit was already waiting there.

After seeing Tianchuan Liang, the woman immediately stood up and waved to him.

This woman was also the target of Amagawa Ryo's midnight hunt not long ago. She was captured while attacking Yamazaki Ryoko.

After conquering her, he found that this woman was not only good at living, but also had excellent handling abilities. So after leaving the copy, he used the power of the Desire Bus to completely tame her and make her his woman.

Although you can go online anytime and anywhere, you can go online whenever you want.

But because of being too busy with time and work, Tianchuan Liang hasn't looked for her much during this period.

Tianchuan Liang greeted the woman briefly and then took the two beautiful girls to sit down.

As the saying goes, three women perform one drama.

This is the situation right now.

The young office girl sat there dignifiedly, looked at Kitagawa Nao, then at Mochizuki Anna, and then looked meaningfully at Amakawa Ryo.

"Oh~"

"Master... have you found two more female companions of your choice?"

"Haha, Master is really amazing. Your female companions are always so beautiful."

"Not only is she young and enviable, but her beauty is also unmatched by me~"

The office girl's tone was very sincere.

Ever since she surrendered to Tianchuan Liang, she has always maintained a positive attitude.

She knew that someone like Tianchuan Liang would never stay for her for long.

So all she could do was to try her best to complete the tasks assigned by her master, and then look forward to the day when her master would favor her.

Just like right now.

"Um, that..." Mochizuki Anna put her legs together and bowed respectfully to her: "My name is Mochizuki Anna, I am...I am Liang's...girlfriend."

"Thank you for giving me this opportunity to serialize my novel on the web."

The office girl waved her hand: "Hey, no need to thank me!"

"I'm just a worker. To put it in a broader sense, I just have some connections."

"You should thank the master."

The office girl's smooth long hair fluttered in the wind, her dignified sitting posture and elegant smile made Mochizuki Anna sigh in her heart.

Is this the calmness of the elderly?

Looks so elegant...

Will I be able to have this kind of temperament after I graduate?

On the other side, Nao Kitagawa also introduced herself.

"My name is Kitagawa Nao, and I'm also Brother Liang's female companion. From now on, I will be responsible for the illustrations of Anna's novels."

"Yeah, yeah, I know you." The office girl looked Kitagawa Nao up and down, then smiled: "The master often mentioned you to me, saying that you are not only beautiful, but also kind-hearted."

“There is a kind of innocence that has not been polluted.”

Tianchuan Liang smiled.

Hey, hey, hey, are you praising someone or scolding someone?

Chapter 220: Contradiction and Conflict, the Core of the Novel

After that.

The three of them talked a lot about web novels.

The work provided by Anna Mochizuki is a novel about urban romance.

The story is about two childhood sweethearts, who separate, reunite, and then fall in love despite numerous obstacles.

Although Anna Mochizuki's description of emotions is very delicate, the main storyline is too straightforward and lacks contradictions and conflicts, and it lacks the background that a long web novel should have.

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Fortunately, office girls are more professional in this regard.

When Anna Mochizuki was explaining the plot, the office girl was always there to remind and correct her.

While ensuring that there were no major changes to the main story, he combined his many years of work experience to meticulously arrange the plot content for Anna Mochizuki.

"There are many shortcomings in your story."

"The most important and core point is that you paid too much attention to the description of details when writing the plot."

“Although this delicate brushstroke can depict the inner emotions of the characters, it is also difficult for readers to focus on the plot because there are too many strokes.”

"Oh... um... I'll remember it." Mochizuki Anna took out a small notebook and recorded it carefully.

After the office lady confirmed that she had finished taking notes, she continued to explain.

“And then there’s the story conflict.”

"Your story is too straightforward and doesn't describe enough conflict."

"You know, people read novels, especially serial novels on the web, mainly to kill time and relieve boredom."

"They don't have such high requirements for writing style, and it's hard for web authors today to write masterpieces like Natsume Soseki."

“They need to satisfy their inner emotional needs more than delicate brushstrokes.”

"If you want to write out the emotional needs, you need to use the conflicts between the characters."

"Look at this part... The hero and heroine are childhood sweethearts. After they reunited, they quickly fell in love. Then they started showing their affection."

“The story is too peaceful.”

"Oh...is that so?" Mochizuki Anna poked her soft lips and tilted her head to think about what the office girl said.

"But I think this is actually fine... After all, the hero and heroine like each other, and it's normal for them to confess to each other after meeting and finding out that the other is single."

The office girl smiled faintly, supporting her chin with her hands.

"Of course it's normal. In fact, we all hope that real life can be like what is said in the story."

"May all your wishes come true."

"It's really beautiful that childhood sweethearts who haven't seen each other for a long time end up liking each other and finally confess their love to each other and get together."

"But this is not reality after all. It is a world constructed by words. Therefore, a story without contradictions and conflicts is as bland as boiled water."

"As the saying goes...Literature is like looking at a mountain, one does not like flatness."

"What do you think if we add a plot like this?"

Next, the office girl used pen and paper to change a small part of the plot for Anna Mochizuki.

"For example, in this part...why did the hero and heroine separate?"

"The original story you arranged was that the heroines were separated because of moving."

"But we can add a plot here to enrich the conflicts in the story."

"Well... for example, the hero and heroine have been childhood sweethearts and like each other, but they are too shy to confess their feelings to each other."

"Later, the heroine learned that she was going to move, so she thought about asking the hero out to confess her love to him."

"As a result, the hero didn't come that day because of some things. When the heroine saw that he hadn't arrived, she assumed that he didn't like her, so she left disappointed."

"It sounds cliché, right? Of course, we don't have to be so rigid in the actual arrangement."

"What I want to say is that this is the benefit of designing contradictions into the plot."

"With this plot, readers will look forward to how the two people will resolve the misunderstanding after they meet. After the misunderstanding is resolved, the male and female protagonists will also burst into more brilliant emotional fireworks."

The advice given by the office lady was obviously more professional than what Yamazaki Ryoko had said before.

After all, she works for Kadokawa Books and is responsible for web novel publishing.

She is professional in this regard.

Simple examples and detailed theoretical output also helped her better understand what conflicts are, and understand the readers' expectations when reading.

"So that's how it is... Thank you!"

"Hey, no need to thank me!" The office girl waved her hand, then looked at Tianchuan Liang who was drinking afternoon tea beside her with seductive eyes.

It was as if she was saying to him with her eyes: I did a good job.

Afterwards, remember to reward me well~

Tianchuan Liangze gave her a look back without saying anything, and the meaning was very simple.

no problem.

If you get things done well, you will be rewarded generously.

After receiving the signal from Ryo Amakawa, the office girl immediately perked up and continued to tutor Anna Mochizuki on writing skills.

However, Nao Kitagawa and Ryo Amagawa on the side were a bit bored.

After all, he and Nao were not good at writing, but were better at painting.

So, the two looked at each other and nodded at the same time.

"Then you guys continue chatting, let's go for a walk around!" Kitagawa Nao pulled Amagawa Ryo up and winked at them.

Office girls naturally don't have many emotions.

After all, she didn't expect to have Tianchuan Liang all to herself. As long as he had time to favor her, she would be satisfied.

But Mochizuki Anna's expression looked ugly.