Macho Harem Paradise Project

Yangming Xiuyi was quite puzzled.

"Really sorry!"

Seeing that they already had a rough idea of what had happened, Tomoya Aki bent over and trembled again, then spoke with force.

The Japanese just love to play this game. No matter what they have done and what irreparable consequences have occurred, they will just bend down and bow to apologize. If all else fails, they will kneel down. It can be called a smooth little combo, as if a sincere apology can wipe out the consequences.

"I know, I know."

I had almost forgotten about this matter and Kasumigaoka Utaha waved her hands helplessly.

"Then, Kasumigaoka-senpai, there is one thing I want to change about the script."

"what?!"

Shiyu, who had been looking bored, suddenly became anxious. Are you kidding me? Although I didn't put much effort into it, I took time out to complete the script while writing it. Can you, the client, change it just because you want to?

Besides, I'm not like Ying Lili, where we have an A-B relationship with compensation. Aren't you being too greedy?

"No, Senior, the script is still the same as before, I just want you to change the subsequent plot in all the heroine routes."

"Tell me."

It would be best if he could add a little plot based on the original. This request is acceptable. If he changes everything from the beginning to the end, Shiyu would scold him harshly.

"The previous script was purely love-oriented. My idea was to see if it could be changed to NTR-oriented."

"..."

Yang Mingxiu met Kasumigaoka Utaha's puzzled look, and the meaning revealed in his eyes was: Is this guy stupid?

"I'm not kidding. I mean, I hope that all the routes will eventually become someone else's wedding dress."

"...I see."

Seeing how serious he was, Shiyu didn't ask any more questions.

Anyway, I didn't write it very seriously, so how this work will turn out in the end has nothing to do with me.

"Thank you very much!"

Aki Tomoya finally stood up straight after a long period of bending over. His quadratus lumborum muscles must be sore.

Yang Mingxiu watched all this with an expressionless face. To be honest, he wondered if this guy had lost his mind.

XP is the most fundamental and basic habit of human beings. What happened to make it undergo such a change in a short period of time?

I’ll ask Shiyu later.

"Next is Sawamura-san."

"Eh? Me?"

If all the routes of the script are added with a small plot, that is acceptable. Just put the plot in at daily nodes. It is a small matter for a skilled author.

If Eriri, the illustrator and character designer, wants to make any changes, then all the previous drafts will be scrapped.

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"Sawamura-san doesn't need any changes, I just want to add a character."

"If the money is in place."

"Add a male character. As for the character design, let's follow Senior Yangming."

At this point, Yang Ming Xiuyi finally understood.

So the game he wanted to make has now become an NTR work? And the yellow-haired guy in the picture is me?

"Senior Yangming, do you have any opinion on this matter?"

"That's not there."

To be honest, Yangming doesn't care what Amaki's game will look like in the end. It doesn't matter whether it can be completed or not. His purpose in this club has been achieved. All the beautiful girls have been eaten by him, and Amaki Tomoya, who has been used up, naturally has no surplus value.

In Yangming Shuichi's heart, Amai's value has changed from a relatively useful rag to a rag that can be discarded at will.

"If it's an Ntr production, then the role of the protagonist may have to be changed."

Kasumigaoka Utaha suddenly spoke.

"Yes, that's it."

After briefly discussing the plot, the group of four left Fengzhizaki.

“I don’t understand what he’s thinking.”

Kasumigaoka Utaha frowned. If the script was changed according to his ideas, the game would become very strange in the end.

The protagonist is just a pure tool. After the heroines gathered together by some coincidence, he had no sense of existence. Instead, the new character took over the position of the male protagonist, developed feelings, improved favorability, and finally had various ending CGs.

If this is the plot, then why not just set the protagonist to be the yellow-haired character at the back? If a player who can't stand being stabbed plays this game, he will be so angry that he will have high blood pressure.

“It’s a bit like the 18X version.”

In other words, it is a game that is only used for rushing.

"If that's the case, then why not make the protagonist a narrator, and just watch the rest of the story from his perspective?"

Ying Lili gave her opinion.

"It seems quite novel. In this way, players should not feel cheated. It is still a pure love work in essence, but it just sees the love between the male and female protagonists from the perspective of others."

Shiyu thought about it, but soon felt strange again.

Galgames are basically narrated in the first person, because the most important thing about this kind of game is to provide players with a resonance of sight, hearing and emotion. When you can have the same emotions as the protagonist in the gal, players can immerse themselves in the story.

If it is a third-person perspective, it is called a metagame, which means that the male and female protagonists are observed from the player's perspective. Even if it is a meta-type game, it will use the first-person perspective, and when the third-person perspective is used, it is basically implied by the first-person perspective of the in-game character.

Can a gal who uses the third person pronoun throughout be still called a gal? It's hard to imagine.

"Then why not further reduce the original male lead's role, have him leave the stage quickly, and then introduce a new character to take over?"

After pondering for a while, Yangming Xiuyi gave his understanding.

"In this way, players will find that the previous plot is just an introduction to the prefix."

Now, even Kato Megumi understood the beauty of it.

Many works have similar writing methods, using a character who is not closely related to the main plot to introduce the main plot character, and then cutting the perspective back to the main plot character.

"alright."

Kasumigaoka Utaha edited the ideas discussed and sent them to Aki Tomoya.

"Great! Let's do it this way!"

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"Fortunately, the plot is easy to change. We just need to change the characters that interact with each other."

Shiyu breathed a sigh of relief, thinking that her workload had been reduced.

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"Bye~"

After bidding farewell to his three dear girlfriends, Yang Ming Xiuyi walked alone on the way home.

I ate the three of them, but tragically found out that no one was with me today.

Shiyu has work to do, while Xiaohui and Eriri are still recovering their strength.

It’s all because of my strong and powerful body. Sometimes, even if I think about being gentler before starting, once I see them getting lost in the action later, I can’t help myself.

This is a pitiful man.

cough cough. .

After learning the whole story of the quarrel from Shiyu, Yangming Shuichi no longer planned to cause trouble for Aki Tomoya.

If he had known about it at that time, he would have been beaten up. His girlfriends were all his precious daughters. Yangming himself couldn't bear to lose his temper, so how could he, an outsider, have the turn to point fingers at others?

As a result, I found out today that the other party apologized sincerely, so it’s not a big deal, so I’ll just let him go.

Be thankful that he is a good person. Apart from his unclear self-positioning and excessive self-awareness, Tomoya Aki cannot be considered a bad guy.

It would be fun if Yang Ming Shuichi identified me as a bad guy.

The countless victims can attest to this.

When I took out the key and prepared to open the door, I noticed something strange.

Today's cookies are exceptionally quiet.

If it were before, it would have come to the door to greet me with a meow.

Cats have limited IQ and are not as smart as puppies. They can clearly know that they and their owners are two different creatures. To kittens, humans are "giant cats" that walk upright on two feet, and leaving home means leaving their territory to go hunting.

Their welcome is actually an expression of their happiness that you have returned safely from your "hunt", even if you come back empty-handed.

After opening the door of the house, Yang Mingxiu stood up and saw an empty entrance.

If there was anything extra, it was only a pair of small leather shoes left at the entrance.

I already have the answer in my heart.

He unbuttoned his Zhongshan suit, walked into the living room naturally, and casually draped the coat over the chair.

"How did you come?"

I have entered the living room and it is indeed the tall and short-haired Michiru Hyodo, who is having a great time playing with cookies.

He held it in one hand and held a strip of fur in the other hand for it to lick. It seemed that it was already very familiar with it.

"Why can't I come? They are all from the same school as you, except me. Can't I come?"

Michiru was not satisfied with his reaction. She heard the door open but didn't go to greet him. The result was too dull.

"Meow~meow!"

When Cookie saw his real owner coming back, he immediately started barking to greet him. He was licking the woolen strips that Shiyu bought, making strange noises.

"I saw your shoes. Remember to hide them next time if you want to surprise me."

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"Ah! I forgot about that!"

Michiru Hyodo was wearing a pure white vest and a pair of ultra-short jeans that revealed her healthy, white long legs. She was sitting cross-legged on the sofa and replying, and it seemed that she had really forgotten.

Her school uniform was thrown on the chair in the living room.

And a guitar.

"Have you brought all your equipment? Are you planning to stay here for a long time?"

"No, but I do want you to take me in for a few days."

Michiru curled her lips, apparently thinking of something unhappy.

He put the cookie down, then sat up straight and looked at Yang Ming Xiuyi.

"I had a fight with my parents and now I'm homeless."

"That's fine, just remember to pay the rent."

"Ah!? Shuichi, you're not going to take money from me again!"

Miss Bingtang was shocked. It was already a bit embarrassing to come to her boyfriend's house to stay overnight after having a quarrel with her family. But the even more embarrassing thing happened because her boyfriend wanted to collect rent.

Then she reacted, lifted her beard and smiled.

"Shuichi-senpai~ We don't have money to pay the rent, can we pay it in other ways?"

As she spoke, she pulled up her already highly revealing vest, revealing her snow-white cleavage.

"If you pay in this way, you have to be prepared."

"What? What mental preparation? I'm already here, how can I be afraid of you?"

Michiru patted her chest, causing a wave of flesh.