Tokyo Rebirth: Start From Picking Up Sayu

[From picking up Sayu who ran away from home and starting to reborn in Tokyo] []

Explain the situation:

I try my best to pursue a reasonable transition of the plot and not make the characters OOC.

Is it difficult for Sayu to restore Tokyo's memory?

It's not difficult. I can even explain it in one sentence and directly tell you that she has recovered her memory, and the causes and consequences are also explained in one stroke.

——Is this enough? (It would be so easy for me to write like this)

One of the older brothers felt uncomfortable and there was no need to watch it.

I can consider your reasonable suggestions, and I can change the plot if you have any good ideas, but I really have nothing to say about this.

Everyone has read pirated books, but please respect others a little and don't take the lead in the original version, okay?

Thank you.

Let’s talk about the male protagonist issue.

Some readers think he is getting worse and worse. The reason is that I can only think of two directions.

1. The male protagonist remains indifferent and closed-off. I have been writing about the development of his career and weakening the plots of other female characters.

2. Let him be a bit scumbag, maintain interaction with the female character, and reduce the depressing atmosphere.

As for whether the male protagonist is a scumbag or not, you can decide for yourself.

At least I haven't let him deceive other people's feelings. It has always been everyone's free choice.

Finally, there are the conflicts and positions between the female characters.

This is a realistic novel. How can others allow you to maintain a harem safely?

If Hui and Shiyu don't resist, then they are not themselves.

Again, if you have any good suggestions, you are welcome to give them. I can change the plot as you say, otherwise I will still write my own.

To be honest, I initially thought I would be satisfied with writing one million words, but the more I wrote, the more I wrote.

By now, I only feel pain.

I really didn’t want to forcefully squeeze money (besides, there is no money for this achievement), I wanted to complete it more than anyone else.

There are two types of completion:

1. Completed successfully.

2. Bad ending.

I'm really sorry if I let you down.

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