【Jiu Ci】It's all true love, don't compare

After posting today's update, Jiu Tun looked back and found that this article has written more than 9 words without knowing it, and nearly half of the content of the outline has been completed.Although it was written for fun during the break, he also tried to write according to the rhythm of the day, so as to maintain a good sense of text.Sometimes I write less, and most of the time I can write more - because unlike commercial works, this story does not require too careful and rigorous planning, and does not need to maintain constant communication with the editor. It can be said that it is completely a product of letting go , It is naturally very smooth to write.

But flying too far is always easy to get off the track. Relying on himself as the original author, he directly followed the original book's character design and character, and did not redo the character relationship plan. In addition, the content of the article is mainly the group portrait story behind the original timeline, cp It is also based on the original work, and at the current progress, he has to face a very important problem:

How to deal with emotional lines?

There are tens of thousands of writers in the world, and each of them has a different style of work. Take Shuten as an example, he will devote himself to constructing a perfect background setting, pursuing rich details and a sense of reality, and the story structure is also relatively large. The description of the emotions of the characters is relatively concise. At best, it leaves enough room for readers to speculate. At worst, it is strategically exploiting strengths and avoiding weaknesses. This is the original summary of the big tengu. I have never dealt with it, and I have to admit that this is a fact.His understanding of human beings seems to be concentrated on the naked reality. The actions of the characters in his works are driven by conflicts of interest. Occasionally, purely emotional-oriented characters appear, so the writing is not so brilliant. Love is something he tries to avoid in his works. For the part, the couple group either comes out as a lover, or there is another purpose behind the relationship. For the rest, it depends on the old-fashioned hero to save the beauty and rejoice with the enemy to trick the readers.It’s hard to write a pair of CPs that are popular with the masses, but it’s unintentional. Although the reader’s reaction is different from the author’s expectation, it’s normal, but he still has a bit of a grudge, otherwise he wouldn’t be able to write the book. Tangled character relationships.

In the novel "Da Jiang Shan", Ibaraki Doji is an emotionally oriented character. From the moment he met, he wholeheartedly followed the "ghost king" Shuten Doji, tracing his every move, and the motives behind him were all related to his ghost king. Relational, which is also the main reason for the skyrocketing of wine stocks - a pure and loyal relationship is always moving.

Originally Shuten refused to arrange this kind of role into the main line, but looking at the legends all over the place, all the other subordinates of Lord Oni Wang are in a state of soy sauce, only Ibaraki Doji is very active, and in some versions he is even the adopted son of Shuten Doji Even the lover's story, although it does not rule out the possibility of the story being embellished in the spread, but the fact that such a rumor can be produced is enough to show that the two are close. This is also the only one among the many evil legends that can glimpse the heart of the evil spirit place.

That being the case, the shaping of the character of Ibaraki Doji is crucial to the shaping of the whole story and Shuten Doji.Since the story is a human story, the age difference between the two should not and cannot be too large, and finally they are set as friends. In this way, Ibaraki Doji's force value should be high, at least not far from Shuten Doji, In the same way, the mind must be clear enough, so that it is possible to get the approval of the ghost king. It is best to be warm and straightforward in character, and complement Shuten-doji.And as the core character of the whole novel, Shuten-douji is naturally calm, rational and powerful, possessing the key qualities necessary for a leader, and a little hobby that is harmless and can enrich the character's image...

"Mindless and unhappy?"

Big Tengu laughed at him after watching the character design: "You didn't like to write about this type of partner before."

"It's so boring to stay in the comfort zone all the time," Jiu Tun shrugged, "When the time comes, put on a vest, no one will know it's me, and if it's rotten, it won't smash the signboard."

The Big Tengu was no stranger to his operation, and just said "Don't be too controlling on the character", and let him fend for himself.

When Jiu Tun really started to write, he realized that the actual difficulty was higher than he imagined: he was really uncertain about the motivation of the character Ibaraki Doji, and he always tried to add rational thinking behind his actions, which led to the rivalry between the two. No matter how you write it, it's boring.

He quickly stopped writing, and thought about the outline for a long time, until the words of the big tengu came to his mind, and he didn't understand what the problem was.

In fact, as a loyal follower, Ibaraki Doji's thoughts should not be complicated, he just regards Shuten Doji as his friend, target, idol, king, or something else, a sake with multiple expectations Tun Tongzi naturally became the most important person in his life... In short, everything is due to the incredibly thick fan filter at work.

But no one is perfect, and if Shuten-douji has a heart, there will naturally be gaps. As the story progresses, the closer Shuten-douji and Ibaraki-douji get to each other, the more fragile and unstable they will be exposed in front of each other, and Ibaraki-douji will gradually Realizing that Shuten-douji is not as perfect as he thought, and then the invulnerable idol in his heart will slowly collapse, he will be greatly shocked, and at the same time have to learn to accept the real partner: fresh, emotional Shuten Doji.

... Now it seems that this story really has its own problematic attributes from the beginning of its birth.After all, the essence is to recreate historical legends as blueprints. Naturally, character creation must refer to legendary prototypes. There is no way for the growth trajectory to become like this.But no matter what the novel itself is, the purpose of the article in hand is that the more it is written, the less clear it is.

Jiu Tun had a headache thinking about it, and cut the interface to harvest comments. There was a very, very long, densely packed one, which stood out among the short comments.Jiu Tun laughed, copied it and pasted it into the document to count the words.

Yes, it is more than twice as much as before, and it is not so fake. I finally know the content of the review.better.

He picked up his phone and opened the private message.

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"(?_?): My wife is here, I have something to discuss with you."

Ibaraki accidentally crushed the milk carton. Fortunately, there was not much left in it, but a few drops were still splashed on the neckline of the pajamas.

"Driving without a license: ...Miss, how do you know that I'm online again??? Are you going to catch me in the comments of passers-by's wife???"

"(?_?):……………"

"(?_?): Take it as it is."

"Driving without a license: take it, what's the matter?"

"(?_?): Well, I also watched today's update. It should be in the middle of the plot now, but the protagonist group has never had any emotional lines."

"Driving Without a License: Umm, So?"

"(?_?):...very curious, aren't you curious about the next development?"

"Driving without a license: Curious, but I will read whatever my wife writes, just wait with peace of mind."

"(?_?): ... In this way, I thought you liked this pair of CPs, and you should look forward to their relationship development."

"Driving without a license: hmmm... That's what I said, but my wife's article is not a CP article, and it is delicious enough as an original work. I just hope she can finish it smoothly."

"(?_?): Speaking of which, how did you fall in love with this pair of CP?"

"Driving without a license: Wow, who else could be cute in this work?"

"(?_?): Like kappa and carp spirit? Frog porcelain and rain girl?"

"Driving without a license: ... Don't get me wrong, I don't have any objections to BG, it's just that the relationship between these two pairs in the original work is relatively established, the tension is not as strong as this pair, and there is little room for expansion."

"Driving without a licence: And how cute are they? I vomit three liters of blood just thinking about the ending..."

"(?_?): ... So, you want candy because the ending is too cruel?"

"Driving without a license: It's not... it's just that the relationship is very attractive. For example, although two people quarrel a lot, they can make up. The feeling of trusting each other is really great."

"(?_?): Yes, the ghost of Rashomon is a very sincere character. Although he often does bad things with good intentions, people can't get angry with him."

"Driving without a license: Yes, the ghost king is much more mature than him, he is a good guide, and he seems to be used to the character of the ghost of Rashomon, most of the time he looks at Luo with indifference. It's funny to think about Shengmen flopping around!"

"(?_?):……puff."

"Driving without a license: Hey, that's the best way to get along with me that I can think of."

"(?_?): But to be honest, this kind of feeling is really hard to define."

"Driving without a license: I think this is pretty good. Rashomon's ghost has almost nothing in his eyes except his best friend. Although the king of ghosts says he dislikes him, he will still invite him to drink with him."

"(?_?):...So you are stamped with double arrows?"

"Driving without a license: It's just my personal understanding. No one knows the original author's thoughts, right? Besides, with the character of Rashomon's ghost, who only knows strength every day, it will be very difficult to develop something. "

Having said this, Ibaraki suddenly had a flash of inspiration.

He quickly typed a few words, jumped up from the sofa and turned on the computer, turned around and poured himself a glass of water, quickly sat down at the table and held the pen, and a series of actions were done in one go.

——Then the tip of the pen hung above the board, and it couldn't fall down.

"...Huh?" He widened his eyes, "What the hell did you want to draw just now????"

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"Driving without a license: I'll go paint and see you later"

Shuten read the conversation again, and put down the phone expressionlessly.

What the painter said seemed to make sense. Thinking about it carefully, the Ibaraki-douji he wrote was indeed a single-minded personality. Because of his abnormal appearance, he was called a devil by the people around him since he was a child, and he was treated indifferently. I haven't experienced many positive emotions, so I have developed the wrong perception that love makes people weak.However, Shuten-douji, who was also not accepted, could live a chic and happy life only by his own strength. It was from him that Ibaraki-douji saw a different life, so he made up his mind to follow him. desire, and the desire to find a place for oneself.

...Although the way he confirmed it was "hoping to be dominated by the strong", it is indeed a bit bad, but if there is a chance to advance the relationship, wouldn't Ibaraki Doji become the one who is not enlightened?

It was the first time that Shuten realized this problem. He used to focus on "should" and never thought about "can".Only now did he suddenly realize that even if he wanted something to happen between the two of them as his own father, he seemed to have a long way to go.

——Are you kidding, he is the original author, so of course it must be done well.

Feeling challenged, Shuten immediately began to seriously think about how to make these two guys fall in love smoothly and reasonably, completely forgetting that half an hour ago he was still struggling with what their relationship should be.

It was late at night, and most of the residents in the apartment had turned off the lights, only two lights were still on, looking at each other from a distance through the darkness.

There are such lights that only exist in the dark night and cannot meet in the world, but if you know that you are not the only solitary light in the night, you can burn more powerfully until the dawn that you are waiting for together comes.

tbc