HP Dawn Night

"Night of Dawn" was published on April 2015rd, 4, and it took me more than two years to complete this unsatisfactory fanfic, so I have to say sorry.As of yesterday, this article is officially finished, so now is the time to post plans for future revisions.

This (and only) repair will be a huge project, I expect to start around September 9th, but I'm not sure how long it will take to complete. [Highlight] Here is a preview, the plot direction, general framework, character ending and CP pairing will not be adjusted after the revision, so everyone can selectively decide whether to continue to jump into the pit.The specific places that need to be modified are as follows -

1. Fix bugs such as typos, common sense mistakes, and different settings before and after.

2. Delete the protracted dialogue and narrative, and fine-tune some plots to avoid the slow progress caused by the No.1 narrative.

3. Sorting out the plot line, adding some new plots to make the previously incoherent parts reasonable, while controlling the number of words in each chapter to maintain an even level.

4. Clear supporting roles.For example, make Bubpan's emotional development smoother; highlight Millicent's character; highlight the contradictions between the Greengrass sisters; lay the groundwork for Crabbe's rebellion; make the communication between Gryffindor and Slytherin more meaningful Wait a minute.

5. Make the article fit the original work more closely, and add some details while making the timeline coincide to make the existence of the original heroine less obtrusive.Try to shape and describe the Iron Triangle more.

The above is the general direction of revision.

There will be no new episodes in this article.In fact, it is the first fanfic in my HP fanfic, and it is also the only fanfic about the sub-generation.If you click into my column, you will find that I am also writing "Midnight Light" and "If Youth Has an Ageless Face" about my parents. "Night of Dawn" will undoubtedly be the book with the most words.In order to ensure a series of coherence, I overturned a large number of original settings in my fan, so I need to leave enough space for my other works to play-this is the main reason for the limitations of the extra episode.

Finally, thanks to everyone who followed the article!I am sorry that this article has been interrupted so many times. I know that it also has many unsatisfactory places, so if you have any suggestions, please put them in the comment area. I will try my best to take them into account in the process of revising the article.In addition, welcome to bookmark my other articles and author columns. Since there is a safe guarantee for the current manuscript deposit, the situation of breaking updates will not happen again-I swear! ! !

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