A little sweet through the fragrant

Before the end of the month, the manuscript of "Return of the Prostitute" finally took shape.

Shopkeeper Liu of the study came to Yuncheng with a few trial manuscripts, but the author's name was concealed.

Just like the imperial examination, a little book boy was also hired to transcribe it, and the handwriting seemed to be consistent.

Yun Cheng said that it doesn't need to be so troublesome, "If I really prefer Liu Wenbai, I don't need to cooperate with your study, I just ask him to write. He gets the finishing fee and gives me the money, and I will give him the follow-up outline."

With his backing to the Cheng family, Liu Wenbo didn't dare to renege on him.

And if you really want to cheat, Liu Wenbai can tell him the content directly, where handwriting is needed.

Shopkeeper Liu was blushed and embarrassed by what he said, "Actually, the manuscript was scribbled, so we had someone copy it."

Whether this is the case is free to testify.

The men and children at home are not here, and it is Aunt Pingzhi who is here to accompany Yuncheng with the review of the old and the new.

While he was reading the manuscript, Aunt Pingzhi served tea to the two of them.

He also asked Yun Cheng if he wanted Qin Xue to come and write.

After his belly got bigger, he couldn't sit on the table well, and he seldom draws or writes. Recently, he only writes letters.

Yuncheng said no, "They haven't finished writing this manuscript, and they will take it back and continue writing later."

They are all screened, Yuncheng just follow along.

The manuscripts try to imitate his style, and try to write in plain language. At first glance, there is no problem, but the details and the rhythm of the story cannot withstand scrutiny. The author focuses on the use of words and sentences, and the setting of the plot is It was exaggerated, blurring Su Shuang's feeling.

In general, efforts have been made, but there is a lack of opportunity to understand the differences.

He really wanted the taller one among the dwarfs, but found that he might as well write to Yuan Mo.

He gave it away for nothing.

From his expression, shopkeeper Liu knew there was a problem, and said that it could be changed, "This is also the first attempt."

Taking "The Number One Scholar" as an example, it took half a year to finalize the draft of "The Number One Scholar".

Yun Cheng was speechless.

How can this be the same?

The plot of "The Number One Scholar" is fine, it's literary drama.

Except for Yuan Mo's own writing, and Du Zhiqiu's asking for help, all the poems used in it were written by Mr. Du and Du Zhichun.

The scholars of the academy also helped, brainstorming.

In an article, there are those with high talents and those with low talents. These materials are all taken from people around us.

It took half a year to finalize the draft, such a fixed method, where is the beginning of grinding.

Shopkeeper Liu asked Yuncheng if he could give some suggestions for revision, and then go back to ask someone to make adjustments, "It's been a month or two of trial draft."

Yun Cheng asked, "Which volume was written by Liu Wenbai?"

Shopkeeper Liu said awkwardly: "What he wrote is not here."

Yun Cheng thought for a while, and asked him to leave all the manuscripts first, "It will take some time for me to write my revisions, and I will let the book boy send them back to you another day."

This is not even a single volume.

Shopkeeper Liu wanted to say something else, looked at Yuncheng's stomach, and thought about the thickness of these volumes, it would be really embarrassing for someone to write them out immediately, so he nodded and left.

Aunt Pingzhi asked him if it was okay, "If you can refuse directly, he won't say anything."

Yuncheng said to wait, he asked Zhixin to go out, "See if I can find Liu Wenbai and ask him to show me his manuscript."

At that time, he agreed to introduce it, but it was deleted by the study. He also looked at what Liu Wenbai had written and was deleted by others.

This is also worthy of the big hen.

Zhixin ran back and forth and brought back an initial manuscript to Yuncheng, "It is said that the copied version was taken away by the study and has not been returned."

It won't be paid back either.

The content of the trial draft will not be circulated, it will be kept, and the one that has not been destroyed will be destroyed.

The temperature dropped and it got dark early.

Before finishing Yuncheng's book, Cunyin came back from work.

He has resumed his half-day work now, and he will be there after lunch.

In the morning, I still do embroidery at home. Half of the mandarin duck quilt has been embroidered. After he gets used to it, he embroiders faster. Counting the days, it may end a year ago.

When I came back and saw that there was a new book on Yuncheng's desk, I thought it was a new book.

When he opened it and saw a familiar name, and found out that it was "My Son Returns", he let out a happy cry, and then nestled on the sofa to read it. After reading a few pages, he felt weird.

"Sister-in-law, I don't think this book is good-looking."

Yuncheng's back was sore, and he sat with him, saying that these books were not good-looking.

Liu Wenbai's writing is okay, but it's too rustic.

The business district is really too difficult for them. Others can't think of wealthy households. Liu Wenbai handles the details well. At least there must be differences in eating, drinking and clothing. Even in the village, the difference is obvious.

Some people can eat meat every three to five times, and they can feel the richness by smelling it.

Some people gnaw the bark every now and then, and they can feel the poverty when they look at their energy and spirit.

"When your elder brother comes back, I will discuss it with him."

Ye Cunshan came home late again recently, Yuncheng can understand, it's counting days, the final exam is coming.

He also kept his promise, and would accompany Yuncheng to walk around the house every night when he came back.

A little earlier today, it was said that Mr. Peng was unwell and ended early.

Yes sir, be concerned.

"Catch a cold and have diarrhea, it's not a big problem."

Let's see if it gets better tomorrow, if not, ask the doctor to have a look.

It ended early, and he didn't have dinner in the Lu's courtyard, so he came back to save money and showed him off.

He is still learning from home-cooked dishes, as he would have done in the first place, with adjustments and changes in some steps and seasonings, the dishes he makes have different aromas.

The green vegetables are picked from the yard and grown by Cunyin himself. They are crispy and sweet, and the fried green is very beautiful.

I also made boiled pork slices, which are not too spicy and very delicious.

Yun Cheng also added half a bowl of rice, "Your skills are improving very quickly."

Cunyin hehehe, "I also think, brother Oda said I'm very talented!"

Not only talented, but also more passionate about cooking than embroidery.

Yuncheng thinks that Cunyin was injured by embroidering mandarin ducks.

He boasted about saving money, and took advantage of Ye Cunshan's meal to talk about today's manuscript review.

Ye Cunshan said the timing was good, "Isn't Cousin Wen Rui coming over? Just ask yourself the possibility of going it alone."

Yuncheng laughed, "Who said that this matter will be discussed after the birth of the cub after the year?"

Ye Cunshan: "At that time, there was no reliable person from Kyoto."

indeed.

Ye Cunshan also cared about Liu Wenbai.

Yun Cheng sighed, "In comparison, he is the best writer."

Liu Wenbai himself has a bit of talent, and Yuncheng specifically asked him to study the Shuangwen routine.

It is a pity that the writing is poor.

It's not the vulgarity of old stalks and old plots, but it's very rustic in every way.

The amount of money is too small to let go of the imagination, the food and drink are also very rough, and the dress is not bad for women-it was developed by writing about demon goddesses before.

When it comes to men, it starts to look shabby.

It's not about how rich and noble the clothes are, but the shabby words used in all aspects.

Liu Wenbai is also abbreviated when he is used to describing things about down-and-out scholars and rising to the top.

He lacks knowledge in this area and cannot imagine it.

Yuncheng took a sip of soup and said, "Poverty really limits imagination."

Cunyin nodded wildly, "Really, I used to dare not think that I would play games made of paper and throw colored paintings on the ground. If I played a few more times, I would become wrinkled and unacceptable. Someone in our village used to have it." The paper should be kept separately!"

Especially when you go to the county to buy food, the oil paper wrapped with pastries and candied fruit can be used repeatedly many times.

He also said that he could go to Xie Yanqing for information, "His family is a merchant, and the business is quite big."

The word "source" is learned from Yuncheng, and some materials will be used in writing the script.

Cunyin still regrets that his face cannot be "taken as material", and he still envies that Cheng Wenjie can be printed in so many albums.

Although the album is gone.

Ye Cunshan asked Cunyin if he knew Xie Yanqing well, "Can I talk to you about this?"

Cunyin was puzzled, "Why not? If you get together, it's just what happened to your house and what happened to my house, what you ate and drank."

He doesn't know how to read, so he can't talk to others about his studies.

Elementary school students say that they don't count, and they can't make decisions for others.

Yuncheng was thinking that there were many businessmen at the pier, and when they went to inquire, they might not necessarily tell the truth, it was fine to listen to what they were bragging about.

This is the life that rich people yearn for, and you can feel it when you write it.

So it was Cheng Wenrui who would give them another chance before arriving in Fucheng.

Tomorrow, ask Qinxue to go over and tell them about the main improvement directions.

It is impossible to change it all at once, it is better to write it yourself.

Take some materials from merchants and others, and write according to your own style, that's all.

Passed over the news, saying that Liu Wenbai would also write together again.

Shopkeeper Liu's face was not very good-looking, and he agreed.

So after the feedback, Yuncheng missed Du Zhiqiu even more.

What a partner.

These days, not many people are serious about making money and doing business.

Annoyed by this matter, after lunch the next day, Yuncheng went out with Cunyin to sit with Liu Xiaotian.

There are helpers at home, Liu Xiaotian only needs to go to the kitchen to cook new soup base, and can usually do other things at home.

When Yuncheng came, he was making shoes. They were tiger-toed shoes. Depending on the size, they were for babies.

It's not that Yuncheng is narcissistic, this look is for the little baby in his stomach.

Liu Xiaotian said: "It's cold in winter, if you hug her down, put shoes on her little feet, so as not to catch the cold."

It is difficult for children to be cured when they are sick, and adults feel distressed when they see it.

Yun Cheng thanked him, and also sat on the edge of the kang, with a quilt on his back, so he could lean on softly.

She is six or seven months pregnant, and because of Yun Cheng's height and shape, her belly looks very big and bulging.

He said it was already very heavy, "Now I can't walk for a long time continuously, and my waist is very sore."

Liu Xiaotian told him not to rush to exercise in the past few months, it is even more difficult to exert strength after hurting his waist.

He knew that Yuncheng was a person who didn't like to go out, and he ran towards him with a big belly, probably because he had something to say, and when he asked again, he found out that it was something about the study.

Liu Xiaotian couldn't understand, "They open a shop for business, don't they earn money for favors?"

Yuncheng: "It's all my guess, not sure."

Even a child who saves money can see that the words are not good, but shopkeeper Liu can actually get them in front of him.

Hey.

By the way, I sighed, "Because of this relationship, I can't let go when talking to Rou Niang."

Rou Niang was sincere to him, and she would always mention something in the past, if it wasn't for the fact that there were many things that were hard to say, even in Fucheng, they still haven't seen much.

Liu Xiaotian didn't know that his family, Yuan Mo, was still relying on the Du's study for food.

So Yuncheng just came to talk, not to say what he planned to do alone.Because he did it alone, it didn't affect Yuan Mo's continued writing in Du's study, he just transferred the share here and transferred it to a partner.

Saying it now would be embarrassing.

Liu Xiaotian patted his hands and asked him not to worry, "Your family is not in a difficult situation, you are not in a hurry to earn money, take care of yourself, give birth to the child first, and then you can do anything conveniently. The family is complete, and you can do whatever you want." power."

The number of people can't be complete now.

Yuncheng took Liu Xiaotian and talked about the three treasures of one child again, which is extremely stress-relieving!

And he finally told a story that Liu Xiaotian didn't show any subtle eyes after listening to it.

Liu Xiaotian, Love Meng Baowen!

Yun Cheng: "Mr. Yuan wrote it?"

""The Number One Scholar" is too useless, write about three treasures of one child, take it easy!"

Liu Xiaotian was obviously very moved, but he said: "Yuan Mo and I have different preferences, what I like, he may not like."

Then, Yuan Mo still needs to read the imperial examination books, because he wants to prepare to be a scholar.

It's a pity for Yuncheng.

Liu Xiaotian also sighed.

Yuan Mo sneezed as soon as he entered the door. Seeing Yun Cheng was inside, he backed out.

Liu Xiaotian asked Yun Cheng to wait, and went out to talk to Yuan Mo for a while.

He roughly talked about the unsuccessful review of "The Return of the Concubine", and told Yuan Mo a brief story about the next child, the Three Treasures, and asked him if he thought it was cute or not.

Yuan Mo's mood was light, and it was too difficult for him to be tempted by this brief introduction, but he casually glanced at Liu Xiaotian's belly and said it was cute.

"What does Brother Cheng want to write?"

Liu Xiaotian shook his head, and asked Yuan Mo if he could write, "I can change my mind."

Yuan Mo thought about it briefly, Mengbao is raising children, and raising children is a parent's fault, and a parent's fault is making money. He and Liu Xiaotian are quite experienced in making money. They both lived through hard times, so they nodded, "Okay, I try."

Liu Xiaotian was shocked.

"Do you want to try?"

"Ah."

Liu Xiaotian went back to the room in a daze, and was still surprised when he talked to Yuncheng, "He actually agreed to write this, and I didn't say anything."

Yuncheng was not happy, "What's wrong with this? The cute baby is so cute."

Liu Xiaotian said that Yuan Mo didn't seem like someone who could write this.

Yun Cheng chuckled, "Maybe he's trying to make you happy? If you like it, I'll write it for you."

Liu Xiaotian and Yuan Mo were not so grumpy, they blushed when Yun Cheng said it.

He is a little different from Qingyang. Qingyang lived with Yuncheng for a while at that time, and his private conversations at night would be very bold and direct.

Liu Xiaotian has never experienced it. After several times, he still hasn't gotten used to it.

He would only respond to Yuncheng dryly: "You usually talk to your husband like this?"

Yun Cheng smiled with crooked eyebrows, "Yeah, my family Ye Xiaoshan and I are very tired. He likes to listen to stories, so I tell him one every now and then."

Liu Xiaotian asked: "What you wrote, he is a bit..."

He swallowed the four words if he couldn't appreciate it, and Yun Cheng also understood.

Yuncheng said: "I know what he likes to hear, I'll just talk about what he likes, it's just for deceiving people, it's not about making money."

Liu Xiaotian is a pragmatist, he began to worry, fearing that Yuan Mo was really writing Mengbao to make him happy, and if he didn't make money then, it would be a waste of pen and ink, the truth is that people are tired.

Yun Cheng reassured him, "Mr. Yuan has strength, and what about this subject matter, just watch it, it won't be bad."

The subject matter that has been popular for more than ten years can stand the test.

Since Yun Cheng hadn't read the entire Meng Bao Wen, he didn't make random comments on the structure, so as not to mislead Yuan Mo, so he gave him a few key points of commercial writing, and went to "Salted Fish Scholar" That book relies on the above, emphasizing emotional satisfaction, don't be influenced by "No. [-] Scholar", and continue to portray details and characters with rich ink and color.

Writing in this way is not relaxing writing, and it consumes a lot of Yuan Mo, and the gain outweighs the loss.

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