Peach Blossoms

I haven't clicked the end because I still want to write nonsense.

Recently, I have been addicted to eating chicken. I started playing after get off work. When I looked up, it was 11:30, and I was about to go to bed after washing up. I didn’t have time to talk nonsense.

The promised dog food actually contains water, hahahahaha...haha.....

In the beginning, this article was actually a small clip I left in the writing folder, which is what I posted on Weibo.

Later, sister Ziying said to me on Weibo: "Let's write another article about Lily."

I looked at it and decided it was it.

The controversial but powerful heroine No. [-] of the Black Rakshasa, and the No. [-] glamorous woman who is extremely beautiful and scheming.

From the very beginning, Hua Luo was called Liang Luoer, who knew how to do business and was a master of martial arts. She was set to be the eldest lady of the Liang family, the pillar of the Liang family, who was forced by her mother to help her younger brother, and sold herself to the No. [-] Ye family as a daughter-in-law. Exchange resources for younger brothers.

Ah Yin is a bullied sect disciple whose identity is a mystery. He was almost bullied to death when he was young, but fortunately he was rescued by Liang Luoer, and he always remembered this kindness in his heart. Really made a friendship.

Lin Zhenzhen was originally set up as a kind but savage young lady. Although she liked Ah Yin, she was spoiled by her parents. At first, Ah Yin really believed what Lin Yi said, and really thought that she would have A father never thought that Lin Yi liked Lin Zhenzhen more than her, so when his life was dying, he still asked her to die for Lin Zhenzhen.

Lin Zhenzhen was very kind to her, so Ah Yin was willing to suffer this crime, but because of this, Lin Zhenzhen knew Ah Yin's true identity. So far, she was dissatisfied and jealous, and called her sister sweetly, But he tried to torture her.

While torturing her, at the same time, she has a desire to possess her. This is her elder sister, her servant alone. She said that Ah Yin cannot go west, and Ah Yin has no complaints because of her elder sister. pay.

When she was about to send Zhenzhen to Yue's house, she met the proprietress of the shop, Liang Luo'er, when she was staying at the shop on the way.

In order to escape from the Liang family, Liang Luo'er secretly acquired the identity of Hua Luo, the owner of the Promise Palace. She sent Jingfang to dig the wall, but Ah Yin was too honest and failed to dig, so Hua Luo let it go. She didn't expect to see her in her own store where she was about to check the books.

Ah Yin remembered Liang Luo'er, and when he saw her at this moment, he fell in love with her even more.

This is Zhenzhen's initial character design, and as I wrote it later, I don't think Zhenzhen is like this, and Zhenzhen shouldn't be such a person.

Besides, all the people Ah Yin met along the way were bad people. People who treated her badly, why couldn't they really be good people?

Make Ah Yin's contribution worth a little?

Don't let her life be too gloomy.

Although this design will leave hope for Liang Luoer's appearance in the future, I still feel that I should be gentle with Ah Yin, he is really a good boy.

Changed Zhenzhen's character design, and later wanted to change Hua Luo's appearance time. The part of Lin's family is quite a long story. Although Hua Luo appeared before, the role of the heroine is not important enough, so let's add it. When Ah Yin was expelled from the Zongying Gate, Hua Luo, as the owner of Wuji Palace, offered to help.

The original setting is that Ah Yin has been stalking the beautiful young lady of the Liang family, and finally got a sentence from Liang Luoer: "My parents asked me to marry the most beautiful person in the martial arts, can you do it?"

Ah Yin said, "You wait for me."

Afterwards, she took half of the head of the Lin family to suppress the Zongyingmen, and re-established the Zongyingmen that belonged exclusively to her.

Seeing that the wedding date of Liang Luoer and Ye Fengnan was getting closer, Chu Yin crazily nibbled away all the big and small forces in the martial arts world, and finally achieved the number one position in the martial arts world.

On the day of the wedding, Chu Yin came to snatch her in the red dress of Zongyingmen.

According to the original setting, Lin Zhenzhen should have found that he had lost Ah Yin. Ah Yin was unwilling to join the Yue family with her, and fell in love with Liang Luoer again.

Lin Zhenzhen turned back and tried to torture Ah Yin even harder, wanting her to turn back.

Ah Yin has been tired of Lin Zhenzhen for a long time, and never talked to her again.

Later, in order to save Ah Yin, Lin Zhenzhen blocked the knife for her and died in her arms.

She said, "I let you not forget me even if you hate me."

This is the original setting, which has been changed and changed later. Chu Yin's personality will not be like this, Hua Luo's personality will not be like that, and Zhenzhen will never be like this.

The Liang family is still miserable, but I like Hualuo very much, and I don't want her to suffer any more.

Lin Yi is a scumbag, Yue Mengluo is a bad person, but a good mother.

I thought that this story should be more comfortable, not so dark, not so bloody, and as I wrote it, it was far from the original setting, so I started to think again and re-edited the outline.

The task of the really vicious female supporting role was handed over to Tata, and Tata girl shouldered the heavy responsibility and worked hard.

Having said so much, this article is really coming to an end.

To be honest, this is my third finished article. I still feel that what I wrote is nothing. The writing is bad, the characters are broken, and the logic of the story is completely broken. When I wrote it, I felt like a genius. After I finished it, I turned around Take a look, wow!What monsters are these!

If you can read the text that you can’t even read, I admire it.

I am really grateful to those who have been with me all the way, without you I really couldn't make it through.

Love you Tan Yujiu

January 2018, 10 8:22

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