change god

"You can't sleep again?" Xie Yingzhou opened the door and came out just after dawn. Yinshan Jun, who usually sleeps in the yard at night, raised his head and asked lazily.

"I'm very energetic, you are too worried about me, I'm not a child." Xie Yingzhou walked over and rubbed Yinshan Jun's head, "I'm practicing spiritual energy now, and I'm fine if I don't sleep much."

But you still have to eat, even if you really become a god, Xie Yingzhou will definitely keep eating and bathing, this is what she likes to do.

The morning air in the mountains was fresh, and Xie Yingzhou yawned, doing morning warm-ups according to her past habits.

"Who knows?" Yinshan Jun also got up from the grass ball, took a few steps forward, then grabbed the ground with his fat paws, pressed his waist forward, and then straightened his two fat hind legs , Stretching.

"Your tone of voice is becoming more and more like Ye Wujian, don't imitate her." Xie Yingzhou stretched her hands towards the sky, stretched her back and arms, and glanced at Mr. Yin Shan next to her.

"Where do I have it?" Yinshan Jun tilted his head, but after thinking about it carefully, it seems that Ye Wujian's tone of voice is not bad, because the master has a calm temperament when he speaks, and he doesn't care about the person next to him. Tiao's little master is completely different, because she always makes him feel uneasy.

"Okay, after stretching, go wash up!" Xie Yingzhou picked up Mr. Yinshan who was still stretching, and walked to the creek.

Yinshan Jun, who was obediently let her hold her, yawned again, showing her small canine teeth. After Xie Yingzhou patiently gave countless psychological counseling, and after being lured with food, it was very satisfied with Zhao Rang who was going to go today with a lot of people. Cheng is no longer as resistant as before, but he is still a little uneasy, because his parents were killed and skinned by immortal cultivators right in front of his eyes, that is the pain it will never forget, except for Xie Yingzhou and Ye Wujian, it I feel that no matter who I meet in the future, it will hate it.

Even the current Xie Yingzhou and Ye Wujian, it actually doesn't like it that much, just because it has to rely on them. When the ten-year appointment comes, it will definitely leave them without hesitation, and now it wants to go with them A city where humans live, although it is afraid, it already knows it. This is necessary because it cannot stay in the forest forever. If that is the case, it means that it cannot avenge its parents, nor can it Take back the parent's tiger skin.

Under Xie Yingzhou's deliberate teaching, Mr. Yinshan also gradually learned some principles of human beings.

When they arrived at the stream, one person and one tiger began to wash. In this era, there is no rubber hair rope. When you lower your head to wash your face, your long hair will always slip down involuntarily. This makes Xie Yingzhou feel very inconvenient, and immediately considers whether to cut it short.

"How about cutting it short? It's enough to reach the shoulders." Xie Yingzhou pulled her hair in front of her body, and asked Yinshanjun with her fingers.

Lord Yinshan, who was squatting on the rock by the stream, glanced at her, leaned over, and continued to drink water. He had no interest in human appearance.

"Just pretend to be a man. If someone bothers Ye Wujian, I might be able to drive them away." Xie Yingzhou felt that with Ye Wujian's appearance, there should be many people who don't have long-sighted dreams, and she might be able to do it by then. Make fun of those people, for example, say that you are Ye Wujian's lover.

Talking to herself, entertaining herself, Xie Yingzhou pulled out a hundred dragon scales from her waist, and was about to cut off a section of hair.

"Can you pretend to be a man?" Mr. Yinshan licked his wet nose a few times, purely curious, because from the perspective of human appearance, no matter how he pretends, Xie Yingzhou has a delicate and delicate appearance. If a man It will look very strange when it grows up like this.

Besides, even Mr. Yinshan, who is not familiar with the world, can feel it. From the perspective of temperament and appearance, Xie Yingzhou, who is always smiling, may be more annoying than Ye Wujian, who looks like ice.

"..." Xie Yingzhou looked at herself reflected in the water. After swallowing the crystal of the white forest bird, her hair turned gray, and her face also changed slightly. Although overall, she did look better, but ...

"It's really not suitable." If a man looks like this, it will not be able to drive away the same sex at all, but will attract the attention of the "same sex".

Xie Yingzhou had no choice but to put the dagger back into its sheath.

Yin Shanjun nodded, turned his head and began to lick the soft fur on both sides of his back, and took care of himself.

"Change my hairstyle, I think I can be an elf princess." Xie Yingzhou started braiding her braids by the stream for fun again. After all, she was going to the city, so she had to make herself look more comfortable.

According to the memory of watching the movie in her mind, Xie Yingzhou combed her hair back, then braided two small braids on both sides of her hair, then pulled it to the back, and braided the hair combed back into a small braid.

"Qiang Qiang, how are you? Little Tiger." Xie Yingzhou pulled the braids on both sides, turned around and asked Yinshan Jun who was waiting for her.

"I don't understand." Yinshan Jun, who had already combed his animal hair, waited patiently for Xie Yingzhou, and blurted out immediately when she saw her braiding her hair excitedly and looked at him.

"It's pretty good, go back and show Wujian." Xie Yingzhou looked at her reflection in the water again.

"Master likes you very much, she won't say anything if you don't comb your hair." Yinshan Jun tilted his head and said, considering the standard of good-looking human beings, because the human beings he has seen are really limited.

"She told you?" Xie Yingzhou had a smug smile on her face, and turned to ask Yin Shan Jun, even though she knew that Ye Wujian could not say such things to Yin Shan Jun, but the dull Yin Shan Jun could say such words , still made her inexplicably happy.

"She often sees you, and she is willing to do troublesome things for you. She teaches you more knowledge than me." Yin Shanjun expressed his true feelings.

"That's because I'm smart, and my brain is bigger than yours." Xie Yingzhou grinned, and poked Xia Yinshanjun's head with her hand.

Yinshanjun tilted his head, frowned and thought about the capacity of his brain. After a while, he said dissatisfiedly, "Are you saying that I am stupid than you?"

"Yes." Xie Yingzhou said simply.

"I'm not stupid! Master said that my understanding is higher than yours." Yin Shanjun immediately raised his head and chest.

"What!?" Xie Yingzhou was furious, "She clearly said that I am highly talented and a good embryo for cultivating immortals."

"But my understanding is higher than yours!"

"Is it true that a simple mind is savvy?"

One person and one tiger made a few more noises, and then packed themselves up and collected some wild fruits and vegetables along the creek. Xie Yingzhou is the kind of person who feels uncomfortable after eating irregular meals, so she plans to stay in the hunter's cabin. Prepare to have the last breakfast before setting off to Zhaorang City.

"What's the name of the song you've been humming?" Xie Yingzhou brought the cooked vegetable broth to Ye Wujian, who suddenly asked.

"Our side." Xie Yingzhou was stunned for a moment, she just hummed a few words casually, Ye Wujian wanted to ask, her curiosity didn't match her iceberg-like appearance at all.

"Is it a language I don't understand?"

"It's an English song, you really won't understand it, the song is called Fly Me to the Moon."

"Moon?"

"It's the moon."

Ye Wujian nodded and took a sip of the soup. No matter what, Xie Yingzhou's cooking was much more delicious than her own cooking.

Seeing that she stopped asking, Xie Yingzhou also drank the soup.

Ye Wujian, who was sitting on the other side, suddenly hummed.

"Is that so?" Ye Wujian asked.

"Yes, but do I sing it often?" Otherwise, how could even Ye Wujian remember it.

"Because it's easy to remember."

"I can only sing this song. If you like it, I will sing it to you next time." Xie Yingzhou is happy to share with Ye Wujian or Little Tiger what she thinks is beautiful and harmless.

"Do you miss the world you traveled through?"

"Uh... It's okay to get used to it here. The job I do there is relatively dangerous, and the follow-up has been arranged. It's a certain degree of accident to travel over here. Anyway, pay the money on time, and the nursing home will take care of Kara. "

"What if she misses you?"

"She won't." Xie Yingzhou replied immediately, her voice was flat without any fluctuation.

Ye Wujian fell silent.

"She had problems after her brain injury, so she won't miss anyone." Xie Yingzhou explained again.

Ye Wujian nodded, and the two chatted for a few more words. After breakfast, the two packed up and prepared to leave.

Usually she didn't pay attention to her words, but when Xie Yingzhou sang, Ye Wujian was sensitive to the fact that the damage she suffered from being wrapped around her neck by Jushang was greater than expected. Xie Yingzhou used to speak normally, but when she was happy, her voice would change. Especially energetic, but now her voice is always limp, soft and hoarse.

If you don't know her true face and have preconceived ideas, you may still think that Xie Yingzhou is a gentle girl like water.

"Is your throat uncomfortable?"

"It's a little hard, but it's not uncomfortable, does it sound good?" Xie Yingzhou sat on the back of the horse, hugged Ye Wujian's waist and asked.

"Hmm... it's the most special song I've ever heard. What do the lyrics mean?"

"It's about the man exploring the moon."

"Are you lying to me?" Ye Wujian asked, but he didn't care too much.

"Guess." Xie Yingzhou imitated Ye Wujian's usual tone of voice

"Iloveyou means that I like you?" This sentence has left a special impression on Ye Wujian since it appeared, because it seems to be emphasized every time it appears.

No way?This can all be guessed.

Xie Yingzhou was surprised, wondering if Ye Wujian was a little too clever.

"No." But she answered immediately.

"What does that mean?" Ye Wujian tilted his head to look at Xie Yingzhou.

"The meaning of goodbye." Xie Yingzhou said calmly and firmly, and it was impossible to see that she was telling lies.

Ye Wujian nodded, stopped talking, and clamped his horse's belly.

The bay red horse sped up suddenly, Xie Yingzhou subconsciously hugged Ye Wujian even tighter, and the latter could feel her violent and steady heartbeat.

The author says:

The first volume is over, hey, the number of words is 14w+: the number of favorites: 209, really few, these 209 readers, you are all my friends! The list of the first week of "Becoming God" was good, and the collection is also good for me. It has risen by more than 150. It seems that the list of the second and third weeks is the corner of the PC side, and the collection is not much. It has risen, the fourth week, that is, this week's bye is not on the list, and the increase in collections is similar to that of the second and third weeks.

But I still plan to continue writing this story, and it will be longer, because it is still interesting to write, at least I have the interest to continue writing.

Don't compare, write slowly.

The first full-length novel "The Queen of Godsend" written in Jinjiang, although the beginning was not bad, but after writing, I was obsessed with the "beautiful" interaction of the two heroines (not good at it), and I was obsessed with the choice of words (not too good at it). Good), I didn’t think deeply enough, and I didn’t do a good job of laying down the line, so that the following plots can only be written wherever they go. Although this is also a way of writing in many novels, for me, this has become a boring one. The story, I myself am very dissatisfied.

As a person who loves unexpected plots, I don’t like stories without suspense, and I find them boring, which discourages my enthusiasm for writing, so in this story, I try my best to pave the way for the plot that will unfold later , the ambush line, after the attempt, it can have the effect of detonating and igniting, which will bring surprises to readers. Of course, whether it can be successful will not be known until the story is completely over.

Writing a novel is an interesting and painful thing. I am also slowly learning and perfecting myself. To tell an interesting story, you must measure it from a high place. During this period, I discovered a lot of shortcomings in myself, even including weaknesses in character. For example, if it was me in the past, when Ye Wujian encountered a close companion who was possessed by Bai Linniao and wanted to strangle him to death, he might let She only acted to protect herself, being on the weak and passive side, taking care of the other party without complaint or regret, and waiting for the other party to wake up, but later I re-examined the paragraph I wrote, thinking how could Ye Wujian be so passive, the environment she lived in since childhood , She is not allowed to be so passive, even if facing Xie Yingzhou who is a little fond of her, she can do it well. Even when Ye Wujian is not strong, he will be a strong man who holds his destiny tightly in his own hands. She is not the Holy Mother, she is the same as Xie Yingzhou, if she wants to survive in such a cruel world alone, she should be stronger in the face of emergencies.

It was changed later.

In this way, even if she is the second female, the plot is not as much as the female first, but the light will not be overshadowed.

Then I reflected on the heroines I wrote in the past. Sometimes they are too cowardly and passive, which may also be part of the reason for my personality. Although the real personality cannot be changed, at least the story can be told better.

It’s good to be able to reflect on myself when writing novels, otherwise even I myself would not know, I don’t know, I have such shortcomings when I tell stories.

The other unsatisfactory part of the story is that I am not satisfied with the setting of the world view in the story. First, I am not too interested in the upgrade setting similar to male novels. Second, it is probably because my brain power is not enough, but I think growth and upgrade The setting is necessary, it will make the story have continuity, and the protagonist's heart will also grow. In the process of telling the story, this aspect will be adjusted slowly, based on whether the story makes me feel interesting, until everything in line with your own intentions.

My dear friends, you can also leave a lot of comments and comments, this can also stimulate my brain~

Thank you again for the readers who subscribed. Next, I will come out at the end of each volume and explain the results of each stage of "Bian Shen". Our goal is to have 5000 collections at the end! (Is it too demanding?)

The second volume: The man in the cage will not be as "quiet as the years" like the first volume, because Xie Yingzhou has walked out of Shenmiao Ridge and will start to face more people and more complicated relationships in this world, the second volume The length of the book is also longer than the first volume, it should have 20-30 words, rest for 2 days, sort out the following plot, update on Thursday, please look forward to it!Salute!Thank you all.

Volume Two: The Man in the Cage