nameless country

Because I feel that the story is not well written, after careful consideration, I decided to reject it and rewrite it (overhaul)

I will connect the previously buried dark lines with a narrative structure

If you like the previous version, I will repost it.

Now change the narrative line of this story, the emotion may be a little fuller, and it will not be so abrupt.

In the evening, I read what I wrote again, because I was quite irritable in the previous two days, and it was inevitable that I would bring personal hostility when I wrote it.I'm really sorry for the readers who read this novel (bow), so I just drove and let myself go.

Reason for revision:

[-]. I think □□ serves the plot, but what I have written in the past two days has the feeling of driving for the sake of driving, and when I re-read it, I also feel very pretentious.Sure enough, I am still suitable for the stream of consciousness? ? ?

Well, without further ado, the next meeting will be the new Bluebeard.Originally, it was because I didn’t like many articles I read, so I entertained myself.If I don't even like myself, maybe no one will.That's it, so I decided to change this poorly written story.

[-]. Because I have already made the whole outline, but I only write the specific fairy tales every day temporarily.Because the time is relatively tight every day, and sometimes there are messy things, so when writing, I may not pay attention to explaining the protagonist clearly, which will produce a kind of male protagonist who plays horror games and has no personality that can be automatically shifted.I will expand the information of the two protagonists as soon as possible in the modified Bluebeard to pave the way for the following stories.

[-]. The most important point is not to change today.The new Blue Beard [-]z the day after tomorrow, and then I will write more manuscripts, and I will write according to the manuscripts every day.

See you on Friday.

The author has something to say:

I still prefer a better story.

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