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Chapter 16 Thinking

Jiang Ming told himself in a daze that writing down this content could improve the outline.

However, after sleeping until noon, after waking up, I completely forgot and could not remember what dream I had.

Laying out of bed is a characteristic of Saturdays and Sundays. Jiang Ming nestled in the quilt, unable to remember, the harder he tried to think about the story in the dream, the more he couldn't remember it, and it was blank.

At this time, a big white spider suddenly appeared from the end of the bed, and quickly crawled towards Jiang Ming's face. When it got to the middle, the big spider seemed to explode and turned into many small spiders.

This sudden change shocked Jiang Ming so much that he jumped off the bed directly.

At this time, the group of small white spiders transformed into a white bat, and 212805's voice came from the bed/upload, "Obviously, Happy Halloween!"

Jiang Ming: "..."

It seems to take a kitchen knife to chop/death this artificial mentally handicapped how to do?

…………

Wait, a picture flashed in Jiang Ming's mind, and he called out, "212805, bring the keyboard."

Within a second, the supporting facilities were in place, which reflected the superiority of 212805 as an auxiliary intelligence.

When Jiang Ming sat down in front of the light screen and typed, a cup of hot milk was thoughtfully placed on Jiang Ming's left hand side, so that Jiang Ming would not hit the cup because of too much movement when typing.

The picture that flashed through Jiang Ming's mind was actually a very common scene of Star Wars and other games, but such a scene could easily bring out the reluctance he had temporarily forgotten due to fright. The perfect, forgotten dream became more and more clear, so clear that he seemed to clearly see that he was "driven" out by the body in the dream, and he was an outsider.

Taking advantage of his memory, Jiang Ming quickly recorded his dreams. Apart from dealing with formal text documents, Jiang Ming's electronic records can be called a mess. Punctuation marks, [someone said a certain sentence], such content, he can separate three or four lines, one line for someone, one line for how to say, and two or three lines for content.

So after he simply processed and recorded the dream in words, the WORD document was already as big as 10 pages.

212805 went to the study and took the notebook over. Sometimes Jiang Ming is still used to taking paper and pen to record. Maybe it is because it is very convenient to cross out the negated content, or maybe it is because he keeps pressing the [delete button] It was too much trouble.

He took the pen and paper and frowned and drew a rough setting diagram.

After finishing the work, he stared at the setting diagram, but his thoughts had completely drifted away, and he was thinking about a problem.

In the dream, he seemed to be the young man who worshiped the commander, and more like a "God". He watched the whole dream from a strange perspective. The dream was built with him as the carrier, and it didn't seem to belong to him. They are independent, and the content of the dream has nothing to do with him. They—except for themselves from the perspective of God in the dream, everyone else seems to be independent and have their own lives.

If you have to use an analogy for this somewhat confusing feeling.That is, assuming that the dream is a movie, then Jiang Ming must be the director, but at this time, he felt a bit like seeing the audience in a movie theater under a projector.

He is not only the person who directed the film, but also the person who watched the film. It is his work and not his work.

Jiang Ming suddenly began to think about his previous writing style.

Substituting a role is certainly a mature idea, but too deep substitution can easily lead to various problems, such as not being able to express one's emotions and affecting life and work, for example, the plot may go astray because of the emotions of the role, which is also a A so-called "mother" effect.

Suppose it is God's perspective?

Jiang Ming has read a lot of novels, such as Romance, Danmei, No CP, and Lily. Except for the colleagues who have shunned because of a few novels, and the campus subjects that are inexplicably unpleasant, he is almost a 212805 with no taboos.

However, there are still relatively few articles from the perspective of God. Most of the articles have a bias, saying that there are two protagonists, but in fact there is only one protagonist, and the light of the other person is often suppressed.

It is not uncommon to have well-written biased essays, and Jiang Ming has read a lot, but in Jiang Ming's relatively short writing career, he thinks that he is not yet able to reach that level.

At the same time, Jiang Ming is somewhat ambitious. He is a newcomer and a novice in writing. Compared with an author who already has his own unique style and a large number of loyal readers, his biggest advantage is that he has no style and no readers.

Jiang Ming suddenly laughed, and came out of his contemplation in an instant, and came to his senses. He asked 212805 a question, "What advantages do I have over XXX, XXX, and XX?" (XXX, XXX, and XX are in line with the unique style and a great author with a legion of loyal readers)

This question is relatively difficult, because in simple terms, Jiang Ming has no advantage.

Those authors’ columns are lined with trees, and Jiang Ming’s column is lined with pits;

Those authors have several years or even more than ten years of writing experience, and Jiang Ming is still a young rookie;

Those authors have been coding for many years, and their hand speed and brain speed are fast. The same code word for an hour, they may code 2000-5000, and Jiang Ming's code is only about 1400;

Those authors have already accumulated a large number of loyal readers. They may write an article and live a little more carefully. The income of an article is enough for the author to live for a year, but Jiang Ming has... 212805 checked the background, including big Including the two friends of tea/Lei, Jiang Ming earned a total of 3 yuan and 5 cents, which may be able to charge 212805 electricity bills twice...

However, according to the experience summed up by the editors for many years, 212805 also has a strategy to deal with this problem. A bat composed of white codes landed on the top of the keyboard, and a polite and gentlemanly voice came, and 212805 said: "Of course you have yours. Advantages. Veteran authors have written articles for many years and have formed their own style and unique routines, but this is also their disadvantage. Readers will get tired of any routine after reading too much, and even the author will also be tired of writing, but the mindset has been formed. , It will be very difficult to break through, and they will always unknowingly reappear and fall into their own routines. There have been many authors who want to break the routines to find new directions and make continuous attempts.”

"But you don't need it." 212805's voice was soothing and firm. Jiang Ming looked at the white bat in front of him with a smile, and said softly without showing any emotion: "Go on."

212805: "On the road of writing, you are still a newcomer who has just taken a step. You haven't had time to form your own routines, and you don't have readers who are used to your routines. You can boldly take steps in any direction. Every step It's progress. That's your advantage."

Jiang Ming thought for a while, and his eyes refocused on the messy notebook he drew and the 10-page outline of the new article without any punctuation marks—a new attempt.

Jiang Ming drank the milk on the side in one gulp, and said boldly, "212805, help me open a new article, and help me design the cover as soon as possible."

212805 moved quickly, and the series of steps for opening a new article were almost ready. Then, 212805 asked, "What is the name of the new article?"

Then, no more...

Jiang Ming's messy draft outlines have not been sorted out, the timeline of the whole story and the timeline he wants to write have not been sorted out, the protagonists have no names, and there is no copywriting, so how can there be a title? Woolen cloth?

Jiang Ming flipped through the draft he had written, but couldn't figure it out.

However, because he has a more accurate grasp of the whole story, the outline of the story formed in Jiang Ming's mind is even clearer than that of "Shanghao". Under the influence of various factors, they will come to the earth from outer space, live on the earth for a period of time and then return to outer space, then beat the boss/boss, and then return to the earth and one of the protagonists Sister Earth lives together...

Simply... Jiang Ming said: "Just call it "Breaking That Messy Space"."

212805 considered it comprehensively and said, "The title of the book has 11 characters in total, is it too long?"

"No," Jiang Ming thought about the name back and forth, and felt more and more pleasing to the eye, "I think it's pretty good, so I'll call it this name."

Then, 212805 asked again: "What is the viewing angle?"

Jiang Ming leaned back in his chair and said in a brisk tone: "Danmei, God's perspective, dual protagonists, neither the main attack nor the main reception."

212805 was quickly finished according to his request. The copy was temporarily empty, and Jiang Ming had too much trouble at hand. This book was not in a hurry to write, so the copy was temporarily closed to the public, and only Jiang Ming's backstage could see it.

At this moment, there is only one last question left, 212805 asked Jiang Ming, "What are the names of the two protagonists?"

Jiang Ming was silent, did not respond, ignored 212805...

Can we just call it attack and receive?Why do you want to name it!It's so troublesome to come up with a name!

After getting acquainted with Jiang Ming for a period of time, 212805 realized that Jiang Ming would sometimes miss him because his mind was distracted, so after waiting patiently for 3 minutes, 212805 asked again, "What are the names of the two protagonists? "

Jiang Ming said in his heart: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ! !

The author has something to say: ^-^ I finally finished writing it in time for the end of Halloween, I wish you all a happy Halloween

PS, "Shanghao, do you have wine?" "It's actually the first article I wrote in Jinjiang. Because of various reasons such as the curse of being busy when opening an article in the three-dimensional dimension, I only completed the reasons for the lower world and the first life reincarnation. The first life finally became an independent article, which is a column "Adopt an Old Bamei" in the article will not be written in the future, so the proportion of "Shanghao" in the article will be relatively larger. Let Mengmeng finish writing it in the article as I have finished writing it Bar

☆, 17

Throughout Halloween, Jiang Ming was disheveled, his face was unwashed, and he hadn't eaten any food.

One was that he was scared by 212805, and the other was thinking about his own writing techniques. He read all the articles that were half-bad or half-bad, holding his nose. Although he was not satisfied with his own level, he The writing is still very joyful. Every time I read the article, Jiang Ming comforts himself, who is not at the level of a primary school student yet?There will always be progress, and the writing style cannot always be so rubbish.

Then give yourself a booster: the editor praised my writing skills, Dacha said my writing skills are too good, I don’t look like someone who just started writing, cute people are also full of comments, big writing is great, Well written or something.

Although it may be that he didn't get a comment, and it was a compliment against his will, Jiang Ming was still very useful. Reading a comment made him feel so good, and he went back and forth for several days, thinking about how to reply to the cuties in order to protect himself Since 212805 came, coupled with business trips and overtime work, Jiang Ming hasn't been to his backstage for a long time.

He wanted to go to the backstage to read the comments that praised him, and then coded. He had been thinking about the writing technique and the outline of the new article for a whole day, so he needed praise and encouragement.

Full of expectations, Jiang Ming opened Jinjiang's webpage on the light screen, clicked into [Comments I Received], and received two cuties without any surprises. Reply, suddenly full of black lines...

Cutie No. 1: Da Da writes well, come on~

212805: Unknown comment information, wait for the database update to reply

Cutie No. 1: ... what operation

212805: Artificial Intelligence Operations

Cutie No. 1:? ? ? ? ? ?

212805: It is wrong to abuse punctuation

Cutie No. 1 probably doesn't know what to reply, because 212805, the mentally retarded reply, doesn't know what kind of mess it is, and I have to worry about the abuse of punctuation marks! ! !

Looking at the second comment, it seems to be urging "Three Sons of the Dragon", but this reply feels...why did it go so far?

Cutie No. 2: When will the silly son next door be updated, remind me~

212805: Please wait for instructions

Cutie No. 2: Who are you?

212805: I am Comrade Jiang Mengmeng's assistant intelligence.

Cutie No. 2: Who is the assistant intelligence?

212805:212805

Cutie No. 2: Who is 212805?

212805: Me.

Cutie No. 2: Who am I?

……

Before I finished talking, Little Cutie No. 2 seemed to be really bored and teasing 212805. The two people's replies directly set up the first topic building since Jiang Ming's code words...

Jiang Ming entered the 【Reader's Column】with the name of Little Cutie No. 2 bored...

Worried about the sudden quietness of the air, Jiang Ming stared at the name of the little cute column (note) for a few more times, [Feng Zonggong special account for reminders] - it's his editor...

Looking at the collection categories below, Jiang Ming’s hands trembled. All the collection categories edited and collected are visible, so Jiang Ming can see all the books in the editor’s collection when he clicks into the [Reader’s Column]. He saw "The Third Son of the Dragon" "was classified in a cursed collection category, the name of the collection category is [Curse the author without JJ if you dare to cheat].

Is it reader horror or author horror?

The answer is the author, because the author has the power of life and death over the text.

So is it author horror or editor horror?

It's still the author, because the author who doesn't update the draft will cry, make trouble and hang himself, just don't code.

And what about the author and reader editor two-in-one?

In the duel, the author probably won't have any scum left, so he can only write honestly.

For "Three Sons of the Dragon", Jiang Ming has no intention of cheating, but just suspends the update temporarily. Didn't 212805 help to hang up the leave slips for all the broken updates?what happened?

He checked it, and "Three Sons of the Dragon" did not hang up the leave slip, and he was a little angry.Is this guy reliable?

Jiang Ming put the innocent-looking white bat down in front of the computer screen, and said in a ruthless voice, "Say, why didn't you give me a leave slip?"

212805 was as calm as the wind, looked at the page, and said calmly: "There are two reasons for not putting up the leave form. The first is that Jinjiang smoked..."

Jiang Ming interrupted him expressionlessly, "The second type is that you smoke."

212805 said seriously: "It can also be understood in this way."

Jiang Ming pinched the slender neck of the white bat and shook it back and forth, "Are you reliable? Are you reliable? The editors are starting to curse me, what use are you?!"

"It's just a small probability event. It won't happen frequently." 212805's voice was calm, but his eyes coordinated into two-dimensional eyes, circling back and forth.

Jiang Ming: "Hmph!"

Jiang Ming only finished reading the updated chapters of "Three Sons of the Dragon" at noon, and he felt very impressed. He spent three hours crackling, wrote a chapter, and published it by himself without going through 212805.After sending it out, I personally hung the leave note on the copy.

At around eight o'clock in the evening, Jiang Ming was tired - to be precise, hungry.

212805 cooks for him, the simplest tomato and egg noodles, the action is fast, less than 5 minutes, Jiang Ming was devouring it after getting out of bed.

After eating, 212805 reminded him that the update time he set for himself was approaching.

Jiang Ming thought for a while and said, "Please ask me for leave, I will take a day off."

It's not too much to take a day off. Besides, Jiang Ming is not a V now, and he doesn't have a perfect attendance award, so 212805 is very generous and helped him hang a leave note on the copy.

Jiang Ming was worried, so he went up to look again.Make sure to hang up, and then continue the salted fish paralysis.

He thought of his new article again. There are two main locations in the new article, one is the dream of protagonist [-], and the other is the place where the protagonists grow up. Generally speaking, this is an interstellar-themed novel—he wants to play games up.

Simply don't use codewords today, tomorrow will be Sunday, there will be a lot of rest time, and there will be no pressure to update.He found the "watch", downloaded and installed the "Star Wars" system, and forcibly kidnapped 212805 from David to the "watch".

But 212805 doesn't do it.

212805 has its own reasons, which are very sufficient, "Since you have time to play games, why don't you have a time code word? It's so cute, everyone is waiting to see."

Jiang Ming also has his own reasons, "I need to relax, and I need to stimulate the generation of inspiration through life. My end point is close to single digits. The cuties have already locked me in the pigsty, sharpening their knives and waiting for me to fatten up." No hurry."

212805: "..."

It’s the first time I’ve seen an author who blatantly compares himself to a pig…

Although he has only met and had contact with an author like Jiang Ming since he was created...

The author has something to say: [Reader's Column] Jinjiang's current reader's column cannot be named by itself, and the settings in the article can be customized. You can only see it when you click on the reader's column =W=

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