Colorful years

Chapter 104 Finding Confidence in Writing

How could Teacher Hu possibly know? Congcong is not just someone with powerful ancestral genes; what's even more astonishing is that he is actually a magical person from a future intelligent society who has successfully traveled back to his past life!

His astonishing rate of growth is something that ordinary people can hardly hope to match!

Just as Mr. Hu was filled with doubt, he began to carefully read Congcong's article.

He would sometimes furrow his brow, sometimes nod slightly, and when he encountered brilliant sentences, he would pick up his pen without hesitation, draw eye-catching little circles below them, and make careful annotations.

After reading the entire article, Mr. Hu was surprised to find that he couldn't find a single typo, and the excellent parts he marked out actually accounted for more than 60% of the article!

"What a true prodigy!" Teacher Hu closed Congcong's composition book with satisfaction, and couldn't help but let out a long, heartfelt exclamation.

Time flies, and in the blink of an eye, it's time for Teacher Hu to teach her students Chinese class again.

That day, Teacher Hu walked briskly onto the podium with an undisguised smile of satisfaction on her face.

He immediately began his critique of the previously assigned essay topic, "My Mother":

"Students, the first essay topic I assigned you was 'My Mother.' Judging from the current progress, it's no exaggeration to say that this is the most satisfying assignment I've submitted in my more than 30 years of teaching!"

He glanced around the classroom and continued, "All students have submitted their compositions. More than 70% of the students have written more than 500 words, and the language is generally fluent, with a relatively prominent theme, establishing the image of a mother's selflessness and greatness. Although a few students did not reach the required length, they still expressed their feelings for their mothers."

Teacher Hu took a deep breath and continued, "Today, I want to give special praise to a student named Zhang Cong. His composition not only exceeded the allotted length, but it was also fluent, beautifully written, clearly structured, logically sound, and focused on a prominent theme. The great image of the mother leaps off the page, deeply moving the reader. Zhang Cong, how did you do that? Please stand up and share your thoughts."

Zhang Cong stood up immediately and began to answer with great confidence.

"Teacher Hu, this is a piece of cake for me! My mother is the closest and dearest person in my life. Her gentle and kind voice and smile, as well as her every move and word, are deeply imprinted in my mind and will never be forgotten."

Whenever I gently hold the pencil in my hand, those beautiful memories of my mother flood my mind like a tide, making me feel as if I have an inexhaustible source of inspiration.

Under the pen, words bloom like vibrant flowers; as thoughts race, the text flows naturally, like a clear spring gently gurgling. Therefore, I don't need to rack my brains to think about how to express myself; everything comes so effortlessly.

Zhang Cong's mother held a supreme place in his heart, like the most dazzling star in the night sky. Whenever the topic of his mother came up, he was instantly enveloped by a strong emotion, like a burning flame, overflowing with passion, and he spoke a long, heartfelt speech.

"Zhang Cong, I fully understand your deep feelings for your mother. Please sit down." Teacher Hu said with a smile, slowly picking up Zhang Cong's composition book and reading it aloud with a deep and expressive voice...

The moment I was born, it felt as if I had traversed endless darkness and arrived in a completely new world.

As I slowly opened my eyes, the first rays of light gently fell on my face, and I saw my mother.

Her face looked slightly haggard, a mark left by the pain of ten months of pregnancy and childbirth, but her smile was like the warmest sunshine in spring, overflowing with endless kindness and love.

That smile seemed to possess magical power, instantly dispelling my unease and fear upon first arriving in this world, and making me feel an unprecedented warmth and peace of mind.

From that moment on, my mother became the most important person in my life. She was like a beacon in the darkness, illuminating my path and guiding me through every moment of confusion and uncertainty.

……

In that instant, the entire classroom seemed to be muted. Apart from Teacher Hu's clear and emotionally reciting voice, no other noise could be heard. Even the slightest sound of a needle falling to the ground could be clearly heard.

The students sat up straight, their eyes all focused on Mr. Hu, listening intently to every word and sentence he read.

Everyone's expression was so focused and serious; without exception, they were all immersed in the wonderful article that Teacher Hu was reading aloud, and deeply moved by the emotions within it.

Some students nodded slightly, seemingly savoring the beautiful words and phrases in the text; others closed their eyes, their faces showing an intoxicated expression, as if they had already followed Teacher Hu's voice into that charming literary world.

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