The title is a bit strange, and seems to be inconsistent with the environmental protection theme that Lu Qingfeng originally wanted to write about.
But she soon understood the meaning of the title.
"After a typhoon, the sky is clear.
In the suburbs not far from the city, a village was damaged by the typhoon. However, the damage was not serious. Only the small temple at the foot of the mountain was completely swept away by the typhoon..."
The opening is concise but detailed, describing the cause of the incident while leaving suspense.
After a typhoon, a hole appeared near the small village. The hole was so deep that it seemed to lead directly to the center of the earth.
A young man yelled into the hole: Feed it out.
This is the first time the article states the topic.
The subsequent plot development is smooth but logical.
The existence of the cave became known to the outside world, and reporters, experts, and businessmen all came over.
The reporter who wanted to risk his life to get big news saw that the weight tied with a rope fell down and could not be pulled up, so he quietly untied the rope on his body.
After various studies on the cave entrance but with no results, the experts suggested that the cave be buried directly to maintain their authority.
The cave was eventually exchanged by merchants for a brand new temple with a square.
The businessman used the hole to open a business and dumped all his garbage into the hole.
At the end of the story, because of the existence of the hole, the sky is bluer, the sea is clearer, and the city is cleaner.
A construction worker was resting on the roof when he heard a strange sound.
"Hey—come out."
This is the second time such language description appears in the entire text.
The whole story echoes the beginning and the end, combined with the stones falling from the sky later, although the article ends here.
But the room for imagination left behind is meaningful.
"Did you write this?"
Teacher Chen took off his glasses and couldn't stop exclaiming in amazement.
The quality of this article was so high that she felt it was a shame to enter it into the New Concept Writing Competition.
The article has unique ideas, rich imagination, and vivid portrayals of various characters. Therefore, she was deeply impressed even after reading it only once.
The beginning seems to deviate from the environmental protection theme, but the reversal at the end is very coherent and is the most amazing part of the whole article.
It is no exaggeration to say that Teacher Chen got goosebumps.
"It's mainly because of your guidance, teacher. I gain a lot from every discussion with you."
Lu Qingfeng spoke with high emotional intelligence and was glad that he had been prepared.
Teacher Chen nodded slightly when she heard this. Indeed, Lu Qingfeng would consult her almost every day about the entire article, from the initial conception to the setting in the middle, and then to the final conclusion.
So, there is nothing to doubt about it.
The main thing is that the setting is the setting, and the effect that can be presented when it is put on paper also depends on the writer's writing style.
Teacher Chen had higher expectations for him, after all, it was his article that was signed by the magazine.
But I didn't expect that he would be able to produce such a high-quality masterpiece in the end.
This kind of work will have no problem passing the preliminary round, let alone the semi-final.
“You can come to my place at noon today, transfer it to the computer, and then we can submit it directly.”
Teacher Chen said.
"it is good."
Lu Qingfeng agreed immediately.
"And one more thing."
Just as he was about to say goodbye and leave, Teacher Chen called him.
"Your homeroom teacher came to see me once before to discuss your writing."
"Big Xiong, no, Teacher Xiong?"
Lu Qingfeng was a little surprised.
Because the head teacher almost never took care of him.
"Your head teacher is a good teacher who does his job conscientiously."
Teacher Chen patted him in amusement.
Lu Qingfeng smiled embarrassedly.
"Teacher Xiong means that since you have a talent for writing, you should stick with it. I will also reduce your burden in other areas."
"The college entrance exam is not the only way to get into university. Many universities also recruit students who are talented in other areas, such as sports, art, and writing."
"This New Concept Essay is an opportunity, but it's still not a sure thing.
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