Comprehensive film: the sweet daily life of urban drama
Chapter 97 Guidance Damai, Doudouer, isn’t your body too weak?
Da Mai has been carefully observing Chen An's expression. Seeing him frown, he couldn't help but wonder, could it be that Xiao Wu Ge was thinking of something sad? But thinking about it, it seems that this possibility is really not small? Could it be that Xiao Wu Ge's master is no longer here?
Chen An thought for a long time but couldn't find the answer to the question. He shook his head and gave up temporarily. No matter what, whether it was past life or present life, it was his own life. There was no need to worry about it. Even if his personality changed a little, it didn't matter. As long as he had feelings and concerns, it felt good.
Da Mai looked at Chen An, frowning and shaking his head. He couldn't help but feel a little worried. After thinking for a while, he changed the subject and asked, "Brother Xiaowu, what do you think of the novel I recommended to you a few days ago? Do you think it's boring?"
Chen An shook his head. "No, the three books each have their own characteristics, especially the one called... which is very interesting."
Da Mai's expression froze. Chen An was talking about her work. She forced herself to calm down and said, "Well, I think that book is a little bit worse and the performance is not as good as the previous two. The main reason I read it is because there are relatively few articles on this subject."
Looking at Da Mai's expression, Chen An felt amused. "I can't really say that. I just think this author is fun and interesting."
"Eh?" Da Mai looked at Chen Anli with confusion.
"You see there's a scene where the heroine is trapped and thinks she's going to die there, so she swallows the evidence, hoping that someone will find it during the autopsy later."
"There are some logical problems in this paragraph. First of all, the situation has not reached the point of despair. The description of the heroine's mind is not good enough. Secondly, swallow the evidence? What if she was rescued in advance? The evidence is equivalent to being destroyed. How to get it out? I think this paragraph must be described to the point where there is no way out, in order to be logical."
"Also, the emotional line is not well described. I feel like this book is always trying to be a love story. In many cases, the hero is deliberately described, hoping to show that the heroine is attracted by his charm and ability. However, many details are not so good. In fact, more scenes of the heroine and her growth can be written. This will make it more attractive..."
Listening to Chen An's analysis, Da Mai's expression gradually changed from ugly to thoughtful. His logic was indeed flawed in many places. Besides, since he was writing a female-oriented story, there was no need to deliberately describe the male protagonist. A female boss, a strong and courageous female policewoman, it seemed that it was not impossible. His eyes became brighter and brighter...
Looking at Da Mai's expression, Chen An made a summary speech, "Overall, the story is not bad, the writing is remarkable, and it can be seen that the author is not a novice, but the problem is still in the emotional line. It can be seen that this author is definitely a novice in emotional writing..."
Da Mai's face turned red. How could Brother Xiao Wu be so smart? He could see all this. He really had no experience in this area. Many of the plots and understandings were gained from watching TV dramas and reading novels. No wonder he always felt that something was missing. It seemed that the root of the problem lay here.
"Thank you, Brother Xiaowu."
Chen An looked at Damai in bewilderment, "Why are you being so polite to me? This fruit is yours, the yogurt is yours, I only paid for an ice cream, and you paid the price with blood, I should thank you, right?"
When Da Mai saw Chen An's expression, he suddenly felt a little happy. As expected, Xiao Wu Ge didn't notice it. Oh, he was so scared...
After eating the iced fruit salad, the two returned to their rooms. Da Mai began to conceive the plot and perfect the portrayal of his own character, while Chen An lay on the bed with his mind wandering.
The next morning, Chen An opened the window again and looked at the chicken coop next door, wondering if he should find an opportunity to help this rooster that disturbed his sleep every day, wrap it in lotus leaves and put on armor to see if it could be reborn from the ashes?
I walked to the bathroom and started to wash up. Xu Hongdou next door also had a look of resentment on her face. She had planned to sleep until six o'clock and get up for a morning run, but things did not go as she wished. She was woken up by this guy a little after five o'clock. It seems that I have to buy some earplugs later, otherwise a good night's sleep will be a luxury.
I tossed and turned in bed for a long time, but in the end I didn't get a good nap, mainly because I was worried that I would sleep until the sun was shining on my butt. Like a dying old man, I got up slowly until the cold water splashed on my face, and then I really woke up and my body functions slowly recovered.
I washed up, put on some light makeup, changed into new sportswear and sneakers, opened the door and breathed in the fresh air. This feeling was really comfortable and my head was very clear. I sniffed again and sure enough, there was a faint aroma of food coming from the air.
A scene automatically appeared in her mind. She imagined Chen An being woken up by the crowing of a rooster early in the morning, just like herself, and getting out of bed and busying herself in the kitchen. As a member of the gang, Xu Hongdou couldn't help but raise a happy smile at the corner of her mouth. It felt really good.
Xu Hongdou walked into the kitchen, and the fragrance became even stronger. "Brother Xiaowu, are you up so early?"
"I can't help it. There are people here who get up earlier than me. When it calls, it's hard for me to fall asleep. But you, who have trouble getting up, why are you up so early today? Aren't you also affected by it?"
Xu Hongdou nodded depressedly, "I originally set the alarm for six o'clock, but it seems that I bought too many alarm clocks..."
Chen An rolled his eyes and smiled, "Don't worry, you can use it tomorrow..."
"Why?"
“I can’t tell you yet…”
Xu Hongdou glanced at Chen An and asked, "Do you need my help?"
"Everything is ready, except for the red bean and barley porridge, which will take some time to cook on low heat. It's a good opportunity for me to go out for a run."
Xu Hongdou blinked, not knowing whether Chen An was deliberately DISSing her, "Well, this won't be a problem, right?"
"It's okay. I used a rice cooker on low heat. Red beans are very difficult to cook. It takes at least 40 minutes..."
Xu Hongdou rolled her eyes and said, "Whatever you want."
Chen An ran all the way to the village entrance without getting red in the face or out of breath. To be honest, this amount of exercise was really nothing. But Xu Hongdou was not so good. Her breathing was obviously heavy and her steps were a little shaky. "Hongdou, your physical fitness is too poor, isn't it? You are dying to run such a short distance? Your body is too weak, isn't it?"
"You, do you think everyone is as strong as you, as a bull?" Xu Hongdou felt that breathing was a bit difficult. She had never realized before that she was so weak.
"Come, I'll take you with me. Otherwise, I'm worried that I'll have to carry you on my back when I come back. I feel that choosing to do morning exercises with you is a very wrong choice..."
"No need... It's all because of you. I remember to do some warm-up exercises..."
"I have done it. I got up early and made it. Then I was busy in the kitchen..."
"If you don't speak, no one will think you're dumb..." Xu Hongdou had just finished speaking when her elbow was dragged, "Stop talking nonsense, shut up, adjust your breathing, and keep up with the rhythm..."
When the two returned to the courtyard, Xu Hongdou felt like she had just been fished out of the water. She looked at this bastard with a very resentful look. Every time she wanted to take a break, this guy would provoke her with words... He shouted at her at the top of his voice, "Come on, Xu Hongdou!" Although she was unfamiliar with the place, she couldn't afford to lose face in front of him...
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