The Supreme One
Chapter 002 I sent it by mistake again and can’t delete it. I deleted it and just chatted for 2 sent
I've already written 1.5 million words without realizing it. I can only say that I've connected the water pipe to the sea, and the water flow is a bit small! d(?д??)
Although I have designed a lot of content in the later part, I have no experience in the early part and I don’t want to change it in the later part. After all, the workload is too heavy, so I decided to start another one. However, this one still needs to be slightly edited and completed seriously. After all, it is better not to leave it unfinished?? ?˙?˙? ??.
This book plus the rest of the book probably won't make more than 500, so sad????﹏???????
I can only say that it is purely out of love.
However, after so much hard water, I have accumulated a lot of experience. I hope I can grow in the future novels and bring you a better reading experience.
Because each chapter is at least a thousand words, I cried my heart out. It was a good opportunity for me to reflect on my shortcomings and strive to improve myself in subsequent novels.
First of all, I feel that the biggest problem is that the story is too weak, or it can be said that there is not much story at all.
Because there are no villains, and even if there are villains, they have little presence, because the protagonist is set to be too intelligent, and it seems that the problems can be solved easily.
There is no conflict, just various settings, details and extensions of Hard Water, but the main plot has obviously been diluted too much.
In addition, I myself have insufficient academic ability, and the system I designed may not be logical enough, so I just force it!
If it is too watery, it will fail to arouse the emotions of the readers and naturally it will be difficult to read. This is also a level that subsequent novels must break through.
I can’t just say I’ll try my best, I must do it!
After all, Ben Hengheng really wants to continue on this path, so he must work hard to correct his shortcomings and improve himself in order to be competitive.
In addition to the watery plot, the character settings are obviously not good enough.
Although I also think that the role is about quality rather than quantity, the problem is that I have only achieved neither quality nor quantity!
Of course, this point is actually linked to the previous point. The characters also need to be shaped in the plot, rather than just being introduced. That is too plain and simple. This needs to be further improved in the future.
At the same time, I have read a huge number of novels, and I do feel that many novels become less and less interesting the more I read them.
It may have been interesting to watch before, but it became boring because there were too many similarities later on. After a lot of research, I feel that the key lies in the setting.
In fact, the protagonist is important, but not the only one.
From my personal point of view, when reading novels, what we want to see is not just the protagonist showing off and being amazing, but also seeing a different world in the novel and experiencing a different life from the perspective of the protagonist.
Therefore, the background setting of the novel is also very important.
It’s not that homogenization is not possible, the key is to constantly throw out more new settings with reasonable continuity, so that the protagonist can see more new worlds.
Instead of seeing a quagmire at first glance, rolling around in it and finally becoming the king or something.
However, due to the limitations of Ben Hengheng's writing skills, he is unable to come up with anything completely new, so he can only try to stitch together the existing settings. But as long as it is stitched together well, using different protagonists to see different worlds and experience different lives, it should also be a story worth watching.
However, because I prefer rational and intelligent characters, I will probably follow this route in the future. However, I can't be as amazing as Xia Xian, and I can't create any reasonable conflicts.
That’s all, no more nonsense. Thank you all for your continued company. Seeing that there are still people reading this every day is my biggest motivation to keep going!
Come on, thanks!
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