I am the vice-chief of the service club

"Well, it's well written." Hiratsuka Tsubasa looked at Zaimokuza with a smile.

???

After hearing this, Yui, Yukinoshita and Hikigaya immediately looked at Hiratsuka Tsubasa with strange eyes.

"Hehehe, I didn't expect that there would be a mortal who understands me in the Service Department. Tell me what's good about it. I'm all ears!"

He didn't expect that someone would actually praise his novel for being well-written. Zaimokuza got up from the ground again with a look of anticipation on his face.

"Alas, you didn't have to ask the last sentence. At least you could leave happily..." Hiratsuka Yu sighed.

"How, how do you say that?"

Zaimokuza, who had little experience, suddenly had a bad feeling...

"To be honest, the good thing about your manuscript is that it can actually cure my dislike for watching variety shows!

After reading your manuscript yesterday, I even found such shameless variety shows as "No Reaction Challenge" very interesting!"

After successfully fishing, Hiratsuka Yu is ready to make up for the damage that Yukinoshita didn't finish and complete the harvest!

"Well!"

Zaimokuza fell off his chair again with great expectation.

"Besides, after reading it just now, I can't help but want to take a closer look at the textbooks. Even the physics book that I hate reading the most is more interesting than your manuscript!

No wonder Yui said that you know a lot of rare characters. Which father taught you to name the male protagonist with a female name like "Xuan"?

That's fine, but why did the heroine involuntarily fall for the hero after two episodes? Is she really a fool without any brains?"

Hiratsuka Yu flipped through the manuscript of the novel and directly pulled out the problematic page. After thinking about the subsequent impact, she resisted the urge to throw the manuscript in his face.

"That's fine, but tell me why the male lead has to have his mouth twisted when he appears! Did he have a stroke because he didn't close the window when he slept at night?

Besides, we live in a society ruled by law now. If the male protagonist starts beating people up, shouldn’t a normal person call the police?

The villain's family is like a fool. When the son is beaten, the father takes over. When the father is beaten, the uncle takes over. When the uncle is also beaten, the grandfather takes over! What the hell is going to be killed one by one? Calabash Brothers save grandfather? "

After finishing this rant, Hiratsuka Tsubasa turned the page again, glanced at it and prepared to continue speaking.

“I can tolerate the aura of lowering the intelligence of all the characters, after all, you are writing a refreshing novel, but how come you changed from an urban novel to a fairy tale?

And you did a great job in making the connection seamless. A harem appears in just ten chapters. Can you remember the names of so many people?

The heroine in Chapter 95 and Chapter 12 has the same name. Does the name match the plot? I spent a long time reading before I realized that you had used the same name! "

"Yes, that's what I wanted to say just now~"

Upon hearing this, Yukinoshita also took out the mark on the manuscript and motioned for Zaimokuza to look at it carefully.

"Hmm~ Maybe I remembered it wrong..."

After being scolded, Zaimokuza collapsed on the ground in grievance, looking like a fat man weighing over 180 pounds.

"You guys are really merciless, your complaints are so harsh~"

Perhaps he felt that what these three people said was indeed too harsh, so Hikigaya took a deep breath and looked at Zaimokuza with extremely gentle eyes.

"Hajima~ If it's you, you should understand~ The world I depict, the charm of light novels, you know~

These foolish people simply cannot understand such fascinating words!"

Feeling that he could still be saved, Zaimokuza looked at Hikigaya expectantly.

"I said, where did you copy it?"

Hikigaya looked at Zaimokuza with a smile on his face, and delivered the final blow in a very gentle tone.

"puff!!!"

Zaimokuza's last blood bar is completely reduced to zero, it's GG now.

"Xiao Yu, is it really okay to just let him roll around on the floor like this?"

Looking at Zaimokuza rolling on the floor, Yui looked at Hiratsukaha worriedly.

"That's totally fine. The floor of the office needs cleaning. It would be nice to have him help mop the floor. That's his reward for coming here to do the job."

Hiratsuka Hane, who had never properly cleaned the club room, was very grateful to Zaimokuza for sharing his worries.

Hearing what Hiratsuka Hane said, Zaimokuza was even more shocked and stopped when he bumped into the wall.

There were still crystal tears on her face and she was speechless for a long time.

Seeing Zaimokuza in such a miserable state, Hiratsuka Tsukasa felt a little guilty. After thinking about it, he decided to help him up.

"You're really merciless, even more vicious than me." Yukinoshita looked at Hikigaya with disdain.

"The most important thing is the illustrations. No one will read the content."

Perhaps feeling that his words were indeed a bit vicious, Hikigaya patted Zaimokuza and consoled him.

The last straw that broke the camel's back

"Next, are you willing to continue reading next time?"

After struggling for a long time, Zaimokuza finally regained his spirits, brushed the dust off his coat, and looked at the four people from the Service Club with anticipation.

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The office is quiet...

"Would you like to read it next time?"

Looking at the stunned crowd, Zaimokuza repeated it again.

"Big brother, are you a masochist? I feel embarrassed for what I just said, and you dare to let me see it?"

Yukinoshita looked at Zaimokuza in shock.

"Where did you come from, you masochist? How can you bear this?"

Yui hid behind Hiratsuka Hane and looked at Zaimokuza with disdain.

"You dare to come here after we've scolded you like this?" Hiratsuka Yu was speechless for a moment...

"Yeah, should I say you have a big heart or that you have no heart~" Hikigaya looked helpless.

"After hearing all your harsh comments, I feel like I should die to atone for my sins, but I am still very happy~

It’s great that someone can read what I wrote out of interest and give me some feedback. I’m really happy that someone can read my novel seriously.”

Seeing the four people's merciless words, Zaimokuza smiled.

Looking at the carefree Zaimokuza, the people in the service club felt a little guilty. They didn't expect that the very middle school-aged Zaimokuza also had something that he had been insisting on in his heart.

Even if no one agrees, he will continue to write firmly. From this perspective, Zaimokuza doesn't need others to change him at all.

"I'll criticize you mercilessly next time." Hiratsuka Hane regrouped and patted Zaimokuza's shoulder encouragingly, answering with a smile.

"Okay! I'll bring it to you when I have new work."

Zaimokuza nodded, feeling refreshed, and turned around gracefully.

"We agreed to write more about school life. I love reading that now." Hiratsuka Tsubasa watched Zaimokuza leave.

"Xiao Yu, is this swordsman general really not hot?"

Yui glanced at Zaimokuza's woolen coat and asked helplessly.

"Well, if you have determination in your heart, you won't care about these external things!

But this is only on a spiritual level. It would be strange if it wasn’t hot on a physical level. Look at the sweat on the floor.”

Hiratsuka Hane glanced at the wet ground and answered helplessly.

"Oh, Hiratsuka-san is on duty today. You've worked hard to clean the floor before you go back. Anyway, let's just call it a day for today." Yukinoshita put down the paperback and used force again.

Damn! You should have let him clean the floor before leaving!

Feeling overwhelmed with regret, Hiratsuka Yu had no choice but to take out the cleaning tools from the back of the classroom and prepare to work...

...

“This looks pretty good, right? It’s a big improvement over the previous crappy article. But you need to polish it up a bit more, and then you can try submitting it to the website.”

A few days later, Hiratsuka Hane looked through Zaimokuza's new work again in the club room and gave it a high evaluation.

"Hahaha, is that so? If this is a big hit, I can probably marry the voice actor."

"The novel must first be adapted into an animation, and then it will be possible to meet the voice actors. You should sign the contract on the website first, and proofread the wording carefully.

Hiratsuka-san, please don't speak against your conscience just because Zaimokuza-san is doing work for you, okay?" Yukinoshita continued to finish off the enemy mercilessly.