Immortal Mansion Royal Beast
Chapter 383: Climbing to Immortality and Showing Heavenly Talent
Open a single chapter to explain the issues in these two chapters.
Some friends were unhappy with the plots of the last two chapters, and I felt a little regretful that I shouldn't have written this subplot, but for the sake of the follow-up plot, I still wrote it.
The old lion will definitely show off his power. According to the future development of the Baishan Beast Control Sect, Lechuan and his Baishan Beast Control Sect will definitely be destroyed. This newly emerged descendant of the transformed god is the one who can block the gun.
As for Dabai's revenge, Fang Qingyuan also wanted to avenge him, but he was no longer a disciple of the Beast Control Sect. Even if he wanted to stand up for Dabai Bear and start a death duel, he was not qualified.
And this was something Lechuan did not allow. Due to their different positions, the two eventually had differences. Lechuan valued the sect's rules and refused to engage in assassinations. This was not pedantry, but a tacit understanding that arose during the fight in everyone's hearts.
For example, if a company is running for the position of branch boss, you can play dirty tricks and build relationships, but you can't just assassinate the opponent's right subordinates. The Beast Control Sect is not so chaotic yet.
If Fang Qingyuan hadn't stopped Lechuan, he probably would have fallen in love himself. Unfortunately, he also had a family and a career.
Well, within ten chapters, how about I speed up the plot and kill all these annoying guys to ensure that the family is reunited?
Please bear with me. Those who are willing to read this and express their opinions are my parents. I will definitely listen to your opinions and correct them if I make a mistake.
The first book with more than a million words, the pacing problem is a mess. After writing various plots, I couldn't stand it, such as helping Zhan Zhi'er, wandering around the Jindan battlefield, and stealing babies for the Liu family. , as soon as the three things came out, I couldn’t catch up on reading them.
It's not that it shouldn't be written, but it's too rushed, too tight, and Fang Qingyuan's ability is not enough, so it's out of time.
Xiong Feng, this matter is a hook. I will try to handle it well and try not to write about such terrible things in the future.
Jin Feng thanks you.
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