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"An extra character?"

Bumi explained: "The characters in your play, everyone actually has a very complete plot line, not only complete, but also refined, so imposing more details will easily distract attention. Since it is not good in their Adding content to the plot line, why not add an additional plot line?"

Immortality even helped her think of several ways to add independent plot lines.

"For example, you can add a genius hacker with disabled legs. For some reason—you can think of the reason—he has collected a lot of information about the disqualification of his parents and specifically targeted these disqualified parents; genius boy The setting of the script is in line with the characteristics of the protagonist group of the script, and hackers and the Internet can be connected with various side stories."

"Or you can set an additional adult role, which can be set as a policeman or a charity person, trying to assist and assist these children as an adult, as a reliable person similar to a 'guardian' It is a symbol of adulthood, and secondly, it can also narrate the story from another angle."

Stories without adults are more fantastical and fairytale, but with adults involved, they are more realistic and less scary.

Immortal said: "However, if you set this adult character, you have to set him as strong as possible, preferably with the reliability of the omnipotent 'dominant president' in female video novels. Because it requires It symbolizes not only a benefactor, but also an 'adult society' and a 'government'."

Yin Lian was thoughtful, then nodded.

In fact, what Immortal really wants to express should be "Superman", but as we all know, Superman is not omnipotent, but the domineering president must be omnipotent.

Immortality also gave several examples of characters that could be added as clues, and Yin Lian recorded them one by one. After thinking over and over again and discussing with Ji Xiangjun, he finally chose to combine the first two.

A genius hacker who was born as a handicapped child, he was recruited by Skynet as an adult, and his latest project is to track down a human trafficking organization, and thus has a relationship with the children in the plot.The hacker's childhood experience and the various cases he came into contact with during his work can arrange a lot of plots.

But this is easy to say, but not so easy to do.

The character setting suggested by Immortality is very useful. If you just insert some events and ideas that need to be involved, then Yin Lian's writing and logic ability can complete it very well, even as long as you add some special and interesting characters. Features can make this character look very vivid and recognizable.

But in the final analysis, this kind of person is just a relatively vivid paper man, and his behavior motives and character formation trajectory are incomplete.This would make him appear much weaker than other characters, but if you want to use him to express a core, hopeful, even spiritual core, then such a weak character is not appropriate.

Of course Yin Lian can write.With a little more time and effort, she made sure she could write a character arc that was good enough and likable enough.But you can't do it at a higher level.

Stories with exciting ups and downs are easy to tell, but touching stories are hard to tell.What the former needs is writing and skills, but what the latter needs is inspiration, or experience.

Inspiration, which sounds mysterious, is actually the perception accumulated by people when they experience related life and emotions, and then explodes in a specific period of creation.

So the two are actually closely related.

Yin Lian lacked the necessary experience and understanding of the identity of the hacker in the story, and couldn't even find a part that both sides could resonate with.Of course, she can describe him in a bright and pleasing way based entirely on an audience's imagination and preferences for such images.

But such a role cannot really be engraved in the hearts of the audience.

Yin Lian is sure that every main character in the original work will leave a deep impression on the audience, but she has no confidence in writing a character by herself.

She even suspected that if she handed the notebook and pen directly to Ji Xiangjun or Yin Changning, what they wrote might be more moving than what she carefully compiled.

But that being said, Yin Lian didn't really intend to give up.She has never been a person who is afraid of difficulties. It is better to say that if there is no difficulty at all, she has no interest.A certain amount of challenge is motivating for her, because she is more rewarded in this way.

What's more, the lack of inspiration and experience is not an insurmountable problem for Yin Lian.

Without inspiration, she collects.Without experience, she went to someone for advice.

Time is a bit tight, so Yin Lian temporarily arranged a schedule for herself, and planned to use available manpower and relationships, and then complete the actual creative work in other worlds, which can almost shorten the process a lot.

In this case, she entrusted Ji Xiangjun with part of the preparation work for "Children of the Moon".First of all, Ji Xiangjun has been doing related charity work, so he should be very thoughtful about the set design and location arrangement.Secondly, this film is essentially a subject that belongs to a field that Ji Xiangjun himself knows very well, and it is more interesting than Ji Xiangjun's usual charity activities.

It cannot be said to be more meaningful, because the meaning of film and television culture is different from the meaning of grassroots charity work. One is the meaning of the spiritual level, and the other is the meaning of the life level, which is not suitable for comparison.

But Yin Lian thought that her mother would like it.

Real charity work is actually very tiring, especially if you want to do it well, many times you work hard, but it may not be thankful at all.In contrast, Yin Lian’s side has actually arranged most of the things. Some troublesome data and financial management tasks are managed and handled by rigid AI. There is no need to worry about someone messing with it. Ji Xiangjun needs to be responsible. Those are the parts that require more subjective initiative.

This part of the work is actually not easy, but Yin Lian thinks it is more interesting and rewarding.

Later, Yin Lian paid attention to Ji Xiangjun's work status while revising the script. After several exchanges, he found that Ji Xiangjun was fine, so he began to devote himself to revising the script.

It didn't take much time for Yin Lian to establish her personality.Although this character design is not so easy to determine in various senses-first of all, although this work is not a children's play in a pure sense, in some respects, it is childish and unreal.

In reality, children who encounter the blows in the play will definitely leave psychological trauma.However, the original set the children as a group of "extraordinary" children. Relying on their natural resilience and extraordinary IQ, they finally broke through all the shackles and suppressed the tragic atmosphere of the plot itself.

Therefore, in terms of setting, in order to unify the style of this drama, it is best for the hacker to maintain unity with the children.

Speaking of Yin Lian, I couldn't help but think of Lu Dongci.

Great, prototype obtained.

This hacker must be a person who, although already an adult, still maintains a child's nature.The reason why he maintains this mentality... Yin Lian feels that it needs to be further shaped, but the core is coordinated.

But other than that, it is difficult for Yin Lian to create all kinds of detailed settings based on imagination alone - different people have different ways of thinking.Of course, Yin Lian can shape him in her own way of thinking, but she is not sure whether the character created in this way is real.

After all, her life experience is actually quite limited.Although I have contacted many people over the years, they are not in-depth, and the level and field of contact are also very limited.

But you don't have to be a fool to have prototypes.

She went directly to Lu Dongci.

Lu Dongci was in Hongyuan's laboratory near the Paradise Islands, and Yin Lian quickly found someone.In fact, the base said that it was letting Lu Dongci change jobs, but in fact it did not give up completely.But because Hongyuan's main clients are the government and the military, Lu Dongci is not completely divorced from the system, so the higher authorities reluctantly accepted it.

Even so, his treatment in Hongyuan is much better.Compared with the various political tasks at the base, when he was in Hongyuan, Yin Huai let him choose freely from the existing projects to study from the beginning.The main direction of Hongyuan's current research is mechanical vehicles that can communicate with spiritual power, including Gundam in a theoretical sense. Of course, at present, it is only a stage goal for spiritual driving and multi-functional vehicles.

There are many types of technologies contained in it, and there are many contents that Lu Dongci was interested in before, so he is actually happier working than at the base.

Moreover, Yin Huai and the black technology that Yin Changsheng smuggled over with the help of Yin Changsheng are occasionally mixed into the technical achievements of the current stage to fool researchers.Lu Dongci is a smart person, but not very scheming. He was not very good at getting to the bottom of interpersonal relationships before, so even if he found a new technology, he would sigh that his colleagues were of a high standard and would not doubt.

So he was quite happy in Hongyuan's research institute.

It was already lunch break when Yin Lian went to look for him, but Lu Dongci hadn't come out yet, and he was holding a bunch of strange materials in the laboratory and didn't know what he was observing.

He ground some materials into powder. There are various ore blocks and glass cups filled with various powders on the experimental table, while on the experimental table are many solutions and film sheets that seal the solutions. Lu Dongci himself Facing the film, he made a pee-holding expression.

Yin Lian: "..."

She knocked lightly on the door of the laboratory: "It's time to get off work!"

The moment Lu Dongci looked back and saw Yin Lian, there was an expression of joy on his face as if seeing his sweetheart.He stood up straight away, pulled Yin Lian over, pushed her to the test bench to finish, and said, "You take this test piece!"