crush the rich

The topic drawn by Happiness Code is definitely not very difficult under normal circumstances, but when it is highly consistent with the previous contestant's work, it is a big problem.

Naturally, there are no identical questions in the question bank, but the brainwaves of those who can't stand it just match up with the latecomers.Moreover, Yin Lian’s previous stories were well written, leaving a strong impression on the brain of Happiness Code. This is the time when the story itself has the strongest impact. If Happiness Code writes a story with the same theme at this moment, it will be very It's hard not to be influenced by Yin Lian's works.And if the two stories have a certain degree of similarity, as a latecomer, his evaluation will definitely drop.

Happiness Code frowned tightly, apparently in annoyance.But he is considered a relatively skilled professional writer, so he forcibly suppressed the touch of Yin Lian's story, and prepared to find a completely different entry point to start telling this story.Although a large gap in the entry point cannot guarantee that the core of the whole story is different, it will at least increase the difference between the two stories.

Then he began to tell his own story.

He told a story with a rather special subject matter.

In Yin Lian's view, the story's foothold is a bit like "Les Miserables", but there is a big difference. The overall style is not as realistic as "Les Miserables", and it has more drama, but on the other hand, it is not so heavy-most Obvious performance in the ending and the background of the story.

This story is about a young man who made a mistake when he was a teenager. He accidentally did a bad thing, and then made one wrong step and another wrong step, and his life began to be messed up.When he wants to turn back to the shore, either he is not determined enough, so he is pulled back by the people around him again, or because of various past karma, there are things he can't let go of, so he has no choice but to keep getting stuck.He seemed to be standing on a cliff, being pulled by forces from two different directions, one was the person who loved him, and the other was the completely depraved companion from the dark side.

In fact, the two will occasionally switch roles. For example, when he was young, he was encouraged to indulge together at the beginning, but in the end he was pushed to save himself.

Because the background of the story itself is relatively dark, it is not set in the modern era of Xia Kingdom, but in fact, the time is not too long ago, probably not long before the formal development of work liberalization, and it may be at the same technological level as Earth.

The brighter point than "Les Misérables" is that the young man finally survived and saved himself, and at the end of the end, he began to help those friends who wanted to get out of the sea of ​​suffering to save themselves.This is also the difference caused by the social background of the two - in fact, in "Les Miserables", Jean Valjean actually succeeded in saving himself in the end, although only his soul, not the body, succeeded in saving himself , but the change in the mind is actually far more meaningful to the stock market itself than sex.

It is true for the protagonist, it is true for the author, and it is true for the reader.

But the ending of the happiness code here actually reflects to a greater extent not the gap in the core of the story, but the difference in social background and people's spiritual feelings.

If you have to say it, Yin Lian feels that it is not as shocking as Les Miserables.

After all, Happiness Code himself lives in modern times, not more than a hundred years ago, so although his story uses the background of that era, it is not realistic at all, but more like the content of a TV series.The fabricated plots are always not so real and shocking, and because of the tight time, he also used a lot of routines when writing the story, although it is sensational, it is not delicate.

Yin Lian has never been so deeply aware of the difference that writing skills and writing skills can bring in the creative process.

If Code of Happiness lived in the era in which the protagonist lived more than 100 years ago, he would be able to understand the true appearance of the surrounding environment naturally without his skills and experience, and integrate it into the story to write a true era image.

But if there is no such life experience, then if they are at the level of Wei Yue or Ke Ke, they can naturally shape the logic of the characters and the plot of the story very delicately, and even use some skills to achieve the scene that I don’t know at the time. However, through high-end storytelling skills, the era and characters at that time can be portrayed to a lifelike level.

Happiness Password obviously can't do it.

His story is a little rough.

In fact, when Yin Lian wrote, she was not delicate enough.But she has just entered the industry after all, and she is a fan of the authorities, so she doesn't understand how "not delicate enough" will affect her works.When creators are creating, most of them are fully devoted, and they cannot rationally observe and examine their own works.

But at this moment, watching the story of the completion of the happiness code, Yin Lian suddenly realized it.

Sure enough, sometimes it is important to learn from others.Not only from good works, but also from the flaws of others to examine yourself, so as to see your own shortcomings.

In fact, under normal circumstances, although the story of Happiness Code is a bit rough, but the degree of completion is not bad, it should be able to get a point.But his story is still Yin Lian's story in a contrasting state. The referee believes that the core of the two is similar, but the story of the happiness code lacks real emotion and touch. The plot is too old-fashioned and even patchwork Suspicion, then ruthlessly deprived of this point.

When this result came out, Wei Yue's fans instantly rejoiced - no one would think that Wei Yue might not get this point.

In fact, he did get three points.

Counting Yin Lian's topic is different, but the core is similar, Wei Yue is actually the third person to talk about this topic, and unlike Yin Lian, he was prepared for the failure of the happiness code from the beginning, so he still started from happiness. Ideation begins when the code finishes telling the story.

But his story is completely different from Happiness Code. What must be told is that the structure is ingenious and the emotion is delicate.

The span of his themes is wider than that of Wei Yue, and both the entry point and the core are completely different from Yin Lian and the happiness code.

Both Yin Lian and Happiness Code talk about how the protagonist becomes his own hero, but Wei Yue talks about how a person becomes another hero in his heart, a completely imperfect hero.

There was a boy who was from a wealthy family, but he couldn’t learn anything, and because of the bad character of his environment and social partners, he made only pig and dog friends. If this continues, he is likely to become a human being in the end Scum, and then ruin the family wealth and endanger the society.

But at this time, by chance, he met another person in a disguised form.

That day when he was a teenager, he was forced by his mother to dress decently to meet his elders for various reasons.At that time, he was confused and self-doubting because of a bad conscience he did with his friends, but at this time he met a little girl who was in urgent need of help.The little girl was born with a genetic disease and needed a lot of money for treatment, but the childcare school she was in failed to apply for this huge sum of money, so she could only suffer from the pain all the time and barely survived with conservative treatment. living.

The coincidental encounter turned the teenager into a girl's hero.Perhaps the feeling of being a hero was too good, and then the boy kept visiting the girl, pretending to be completely different from his usual appearance.The young man is usually dissolute, because his family was rich since he was a child, so he behaved lawlessly and did many things that dogs hate. However, in front of girls, he turned into a good boy in a blink of an eye, covering himself with a layer of skin, trying to maintain this kind of attitude image.

And as the two got closer and closer, the teenager even began to change himself step by step in order to maintain such an image.There are more and more lies, but at the same time, because of his efforts, the lies are slowly becoming reality.

But if you tell a lot of lies, people will always find out.Especially as time passed, in the eyes of the boy's friends, there were more and more flaws in his actions, which became more and more obvious.Finally one day, another wave of rich kids who had a grudge against the young man discovered his secret and began to try to threaten him with it.In order to protect the girl, serious conflicts occurred between the two sides, and the boy's true face was revealed in front of the girl.

However, this did not change the girl's mind.She still thinks the boy is a hero.Even though many of his past actions were not heroic, the things he did for her will not change because of other things.

He is still her hero.

The girl didn't know that at this moment, to the boy, she was actually his hero.Because of her words, his life may have finally gone on a completely different path from now on.

Although Wei Yue approached the theme of "The Hero of the Heart" from a completely different perspective, he perfectly grasped the core of the theme and told the story very vividly and deeply into the hearts of the people.Many characters in the story actually only have one or two lines of lines, but these lines can vividly express the character and feelings of the characters.

And this is actually the delicacy of the story that both Yin Lian and Happiness Code lack.

As soon as Wei Yue's story was told, he won thunderous applause and cheers.His fans didn't even need the referee to announce the result, they were already pretty sure that Wei Yue had scored the three points.In fact, this was indeed the case. The host then directly announced that Wei Yue had scored the three points.After that, it's his own turn, no matter if he gets one point or three points, as long as A Yin doesn't continue to make mistakes, then Yin Lian will not be able to surpass Wei Yue.

But that's not the case.

Because right after, Su Bei got a topic called "The Ghost of the Human Heart", but no problem, the topic was passed on to Ke Ke.In fact, ghost stories are what Ke Ke is best at, but she has talked a lot before. Although her ghost stories have always been outstanding, just talking about them can arouse the emotions of the audience, but after all, the density is too high. There are good rounds.But the referee's requirements are not low, and they are not as easy to fool as ordinary audiences.

The more horror stories are told, the more demanding they will be of Ke Ke's kind of stories.

In fact, the title of "The Ghost of the Heart" doesn't necessarily have to be a horror story.

It's a pity that Ke Ke is good at horror stories or love stories, not this kind of philosophical stories, so although she told a good ghost story this round, when the host announced the result, she still didn't pass it.

And when it was A Yin's turn to answer this question, Yin Lian had already cheered up.

Ayin told a bloody family story this time, which was roughly the plot of the best relatives, and then it was a matter of course.

The referee's evaluation of her is: lack of human portrayal, and the image of the villain is paper.Since there is no complexity of human nature, how can it be regarded as the ghost of "human heart"?

The audience did not expect such a change in the plot at all, and they cheered up after being astonished—the competition team soon realized that such an anxious battle situation had attracted a lot of attention, and immediately revised the title of the live broadcast And stepped up to edit the new commercial.

At this time, Yin Lian had already spent enough time to conceive a complete story.

A comic story.