We all have golden fingers (Douluo + Onmyoji)
Chapter 35 Chapter 35
From the beginning of the copywriting, I said that this is my first time writing, and there will definitely be gaps in my writing without logic. I can accept it humbly if anyone criticizes me. I also said that I will make adjustments and deletions in the future. But there is absolutely no need to attack my plot.
I wrote the essay for AiDeng in my spare time. I didn’t want to pursue a logic. I just wanted to write out my fragmentary inspirations in series. This was my own attempt, and I just wanted to find similar people on the platform. !You don’t have to satisfy someone’s ideas!I don’t care about readers like you!Do you understand?So there is no need to leave me a message saying you don't like it or even give me a negative score, although I don't care.
I'm just happy to write like this, right?If you don't like watching, please leave voluntarily. Thank you.
Sorry, it should have ended here. I should be an elegant and generous author, but sb is shameless and speaks too ugly. I thought about it over and over for more than half an hour and still got angry. After all, this is the first time I met someone and I couldn’t speak properly. Doorkeeper, don't blame me for being rude, lest you keep blabbering all day long thinking that you are still being reasonable.
The person who left the message in Chapter [-] seems to be unable to distinguish between fantasy and reality.When talking about "Are you worthy?", I am not worthy, and neither is the protagonist. Would you rather be?What kind of guy is Ning?Ning is so powerful, he is one of the top fighting masters in Onmyoji, right?Is it a god's mansion in Douluo Continent?Awesome in real life, right?
What "waste, coward", what happened to this warrior?Have you never been taught by society to be so lenient?Don't be cowarded. Just give it a try. Don't say hello to someone with a deadly weapon. If you see a thief committing a crime in real life and dare to speak out on the spot, I will respect you as a "man"!
What's the point of "just coming out with an SR"? Do you look down on SR?Then can you still use the R-card Yingcao?You're still vomiting. What do you have to vomit? Swallow it back. Baby, don't spill the three ounces of soup in your stomach on the ground. How can I afford it if you get hungry~
How old are you that you can’t even speak clearly?Are you arrogantly cooing like a leprosy in the comment section?Besides, are you blind or disabled and don’t know how to click the cross to exit?Also, for the sake of being a fellow Onmyoji martial artist... I'm okay with that? ! !Do I care about your rat shit?I entertain myself, produce food and enjoy myself, it’s none of your business! !
Oh, by the way, I have to emphasize here that those who come here to feel disappointed should never use curse words in their comments. I will listen to normal bug-catching suggestions and criticisms, but don’t show me hardcore Onmyoji players, I don’t care how thoroughly you understand the spectrum of brain-dead fans in Douluo Continent and this kind of secondary disease? !How about you come!Pen for you!Write it yourself! ! Damn it! !I am also a salty person in Onmyoji. I play it just to draw cards. I am also just an anime fan in Douluo Dalu, and I don’t have any deep emotions in it. Writing articles is just a hobby!There is absolutely no need for the circles of these two Two-dimensional products to cause any trouble because of my small, even unpopular article.
So, your inexplicable sense of superiority based on your familiarity with the "spiritual core" of game novels is really ridiculous. Please be more sober. Who would pay attention to such a transparent person like me?If you don’t like it, just leave and leave you empty and lonely. Do you have to leave two epitaphs?
Is it okay for some people to calm down?Otherwise, I would think that you are a junior high school student who has not graduated yet~~ It is wrong to be immersed in your own world and feel that the whole world is not going your way. You should be blamed and belittled by others. Who is more disgusting?Is it wrong for me to write quietly?ah?You prostituted yourself for nothing and you got resentful about it, didn’t you?Aren’t you rare for things given to you for free?
So, don’t come up and tell me something like a stinking sewer. I won’t accept it!Don’t accept it, you hear me? !
But I accept all normal readers, or readers who come in unexpectedly and want to give suggestions, as long as you speak politely, I am a very soft-spoken person.
right!I'll name you!If you see it, leave a message if you can!Yo yo yo ~ Going to leave a message?Didn't I write that you were disgusted and speechless?Then you still keep the books I wrote, but your collection is really dirty~~
I don’t expect many people to like it, but there are many readers who read the article with a normal mind, and many readers silently peek at the screen without leaving any comments. Whether you like it or not is entirely up to you. There’s no reason why you don’t like it. Slander, why are you so angry?Why do you feel disgusted?If you don't like it yourself, just don't read it. Everyone has different ideas, so why should you expect others to be the same as you?But since the first person jumped out, I will explain it to the fans who stayed.
I would love to write a cowardly protagonist.How can real ordinary people not be cowardly?I analyze and imagine it from the perspective of an ordinary person. In such a high-risk world, there is no plot cheat, who wouldn't be afraid?Oh you?Then I wish you a happy journey. ——You wouldn’t really think of yourself as the protagonist if you traveled through time, right?Then I am the best in the world and no one cares about me?Are you out of your mind or am I out of your mind?Are you treating readers like fools?This kind of cool article about Mary Sue killing everyone in the old days is on Xiaobai's channel. Oh, Bao'er, don't read the mindless cool article under the banner of hoping to be a strong woman, okay?The brainless novel is also written on the premise that the protagonist is a human being - what do you mean, you don't want the protagonist's morality and the rule of law?Oh, that's not possible. For a while, my heroine has to brainwash the protagonist. How can she be in a relationship with the protagonist who has wrong views and kill everyone? Don't you think so?
Also, not everyone who has a golden finger will be able to fully use it. You can use it as much as you have.Not only is the concept of the protagonist different from that of the original protagonist of Douluo, but also the protagonist I wrote is inherently good?And, did Zhao Wuji offend you?Is he ugly to your eyes?Why do we need to use ultimate moves when competing with teachers?Want to fight hard?What logic?The protagonist has no plot cheats. Everything she does is, I think, a reasonable response that a normal person would come up with.
If you want to read the kind of standard cool heroine who kills everyone or is so smart that she is almost a demon, then you should ask those great gods to write a novel specifically for you. With your imagination and plot support throughout, maybe you can Selling copyrights~ Who told me, a novice, that my writing skills are so poor that I can’t even catch your eye on plot arrangements and character settings? I don’t have a high vision and I really can’t write the big scenes in your mind.
The battle description is poor, indeed, I admit it. That’s because I can’t write well. I will try to improve myself. I have never heard of anyone who is born with such a brilliant writing style. His writing style is mature and makes everyone like it. I am a girl. Before this, There are really few fighting articles I have come across (because I like to read farming and infrastructure articles, and fan fiction is limited to English, American or HP, and there are really not many descriptions of fighting scenes), and I will work hard to learn and improve.
Let me emphasize again, this is the first time I have written such a long article of more than [-] words, in any style, novel, and has nothing to do with study! ! !I'm still a liberal arts student!I never expected that I could write a paper but not a novel!But doesn’t everything start from the basics?Everything about novels is unfamiliar to me. I was trying to find something to add to my strengths out of interest, but I ended up receiving comments like this? ?Was my expression not clear enough at the beginning?Used by students to kill time!Newbie!Poorly written!Don’t spray if you don’t like it! ! !Do I have to ask you to read the copy that says "If you're a good picker, go away"?
No matter what the situation is, this is not a reason for you to leave a malicious review.I don't care if you get negative marks or even report it. I'm just curious - how can there be such a person who, even though it's such a big deal, still uses the keyboard to show off his presence?
If you simply leave a comment like "I don't like the heroine's character, the plot is not good, the writing is extremely bad, the author is not good at writing, it is lower than expected", I won't be so disgusted - really, I never do I thought that small and transparent ones were the most stable, and only those big guys would get such sharp and detailed long reviews. I didn’t expect that someone would actually criticize the author.In fact, to put it bluntly, if the book is listed in V, I will not reply to another [-] people who say this about me - you are the one who spends the money, and if I want to make money, I must cater to your preferences.But the fact is that I write articles just for fun and I don’t get paid, so don’t mention “freedom of speech and acceptance of criticism” to me, I don’t!Don't accept such criticism!I'm still aggrieved!I am a person who leaves my homework until evening and has to squeeze out time to write essays. Why can’t I write what I want to write?
As for the last point, I want to say thank you to all the little cuties who silently read the article. Thank you for your likes and comments.And I'm sorry, after reading this chapter of my useless nonsense, I know that some readers are students, please don't learn to curse from me, don't let me teach you bad words.
Now that I see comments like this, I have no intention of writing them. I am an ordinary person, even a little sensitive. I post on the platform to find recognition and not to be angry, so I don’t like to see such sharp comments.
My writing is not good. This is not an earth-shattering matter. If readers don’t like it, they can find other books. There are so many books that you will like. It doesn’t matter if I don’t make progress, because this is not my main business and it doesn’t matter whether I make progress or not.
If you are disappointed, you will be disappointed. Please leave silently and stop looking for presence in the comment area. I don’t need your approval. What I wrote and how I changed it later have nothing to do with this kind of person. I hope you have left. No more bubbling.
I will not abandon the book. After all, I have written so much, but sometimes I am just lazy - I don’t want to update it at all. Besides, I haven’t read the original work, and I don’t know much about Shikigami’s biography. It takes time to look up all this information. .Furthermore, I haven’t done any writing for a long time during the recent exam week. I plan to do some more writing and then take advantage of the holiday to do a major revision.
What I want is to find my own writing style and determine my position as soon as possible. I have many ideas waiting for me~
Definitely not V. If I really want to make money by writing novels in the future, I will open a new account and I will never let you suffer in this account!I may put some ideas in the future, and those who are interested can check it out.
PS: This book will be updated as time goes by. Collect it and see what fate brings.
Really, it was a waste of my morning when I encountered this problem as soon as I went online.If you need to study, study. Leave it alone.
I wrote the essay for AiDeng in my spare time. I didn’t want to pursue a logic. I just wanted to write out my fragmentary inspirations in series. This was my own attempt, and I just wanted to find similar people on the platform. !You don’t have to satisfy someone’s ideas!I don’t care about readers like you!Do you understand?So there is no need to leave me a message saying you don't like it or even give me a negative score, although I don't care.
I'm just happy to write like this, right?If you don't like watching, please leave voluntarily. Thank you.
Sorry, it should have ended here. I should be an elegant and generous author, but sb is shameless and speaks too ugly. I thought about it over and over for more than half an hour and still got angry. After all, this is the first time I met someone and I couldn’t speak properly. Doorkeeper, don't blame me for being rude, lest you keep blabbering all day long thinking that you are still being reasonable.
The person who left the message in Chapter [-] seems to be unable to distinguish between fantasy and reality.When talking about "Are you worthy?", I am not worthy, and neither is the protagonist. Would you rather be?What kind of guy is Ning?Ning is so powerful, he is one of the top fighting masters in Onmyoji, right?Is it a god's mansion in Douluo Continent?Awesome in real life, right?
What "waste, coward", what happened to this warrior?Have you never been taught by society to be so lenient?Don't be cowarded. Just give it a try. Don't say hello to someone with a deadly weapon. If you see a thief committing a crime in real life and dare to speak out on the spot, I will respect you as a "man"!
What's the point of "just coming out with an SR"? Do you look down on SR?Then can you still use the R-card Yingcao?You're still vomiting. What do you have to vomit? Swallow it back. Baby, don't spill the three ounces of soup in your stomach on the ground. How can I afford it if you get hungry~
How old are you that you can’t even speak clearly?Are you arrogantly cooing like a leprosy in the comment section?Besides, are you blind or disabled and don’t know how to click the cross to exit?Also, for the sake of being a fellow Onmyoji martial artist... I'm okay with that? ! !Do I care about your rat shit?I entertain myself, produce food and enjoy myself, it’s none of your business! !
Oh, by the way, I have to emphasize here that those who come here to feel disappointed should never use curse words in their comments. I will listen to normal bug-catching suggestions and criticisms, but don’t show me hardcore Onmyoji players, I don’t care how thoroughly you understand the spectrum of brain-dead fans in Douluo Continent and this kind of secondary disease? !How about you come!Pen for you!Write it yourself! ! Damn it! !I am also a salty person in Onmyoji. I play it just to draw cards. I am also just an anime fan in Douluo Dalu, and I don’t have any deep emotions in it. Writing articles is just a hobby!There is absolutely no need for the circles of these two Two-dimensional products to cause any trouble because of my small, even unpopular article.
So, your inexplicable sense of superiority based on your familiarity with the "spiritual core" of game novels is really ridiculous. Please be more sober. Who would pay attention to such a transparent person like me?If you don’t like it, just leave and leave you empty and lonely. Do you have to leave two epitaphs?
Is it okay for some people to calm down?Otherwise, I would think that you are a junior high school student who has not graduated yet~~ It is wrong to be immersed in your own world and feel that the whole world is not going your way. You should be blamed and belittled by others. Who is more disgusting?Is it wrong for me to write quietly?ah?You prostituted yourself for nothing and you got resentful about it, didn’t you?Aren’t you rare for things given to you for free?
So, don’t come up and tell me something like a stinking sewer. I won’t accept it!Don’t accept it, you hear me? !
But I accept all normal readers, or readers who come in unexpectedly and want to give suggestions, as long as you speak politely, I am a very soft-spoken person.
right!I'll name you!If you see it, leave a message if you can!Yo yo yo ~ Going to leave a message?Didn't I write that you were disgusted and speechless?Then you still keep the books I wrote, but your collection is really dirty~~
I don’t expect many people to like it, but there are many readers who read the article with a normal mind, and many readers silently peek at the screen without leaving any comments. Whether you like it or not is entirely up to you. There’s no reason why you don’t like it. Slander, why are you so angry?Why do you feel disgusted?If you don't like it yourself, just don't read it. Everyone has different ideas, so why should you expect others to be the same as you?But since the first person jumped out, I will explain it to the fans who stayed.
I would love to write a cowardly protagonist.How can real ordinary people not be cowardly?I analyze and imagine it from the perspective of an ordinary person. In such a high-risk world, there is no plot cheat, who wouldn't be afraid?Oh you?Then I wish you a happy journey. ——You wouldn’t really think of yourself as the protagonist if you traveled through time, right?Then I am the best in the world and no one cares about me?Are you out of your mind or am I out of your mind?Are you treating readers like fools?This kind of cool article about Mary Sue killing everyone in the old days is on Xiaobai's channel. Oh, Bao'er, don't read the mindless cool article under the banner of hoping to be a strong woman, okay?The brainless novel is also written on the premise that the protagonist is a human being - what do you mean, you don't want the protagonist's morality and the rule of law?Oh, that's not possible. For a while, my heroine has to brainwash the protagonist. How can she be in a relationship with the protagonist who has wrong views and kill everyone? Don't you think so?
Also, not everyone who has a golden finger will be able to fully use it. You can use it as much as you have.Not only is the concept of the protagonist different from that of the original protagonist of Douluo, but also the protagonist I wrote is inherently good?And, did Zhao Wuji offend you?Is he ugly to your eyes?Why do we need to use ultimate moves when competing with teachers?Want to fight hard?What logic?The protagonist has no plot cheats. Everything she does is, I think, a reasonable response that a normal person would come up with.
If you want to read the kind of standard cool heroine who kills everyone or is so smart that she is almost a demon, then you should ask those great gods to write a novel specifically for you. With your imagination and plot support throughout, maybe you can Selling copyrights~ Who told me, a novice, that my writing skills are so poor that I can’t even catch your eye on plot arrangements and character settings? I don’t have a high vision and I really can’t write the big scenes in your mind.
The battle description is poor, indeed, I admit it. That’s because I can’t write well. I will try to improve myself. I have never heard of anyone who is born with such a brilliant writing style. His writing style is mature and makes everyone like it. I am a girl. Before this, There are really few fighting articles I have come across (because I like to read farming and infrastructure articles, and fan fiction is limited to English, American or HP, and there are really not many descriptions of fighting scenes), and I will work hard to learn and improve.
Let me emphasize again, this is the first time I have written such a long article of more than [-] words, in any style, novel, and has nothing to do with study! ! !I'm still a liberal arts student!I never expected that I could write a paper but not a novel!But doesn’t everything start from the basics?Everything about novels is unfamiliar to me. I was trying to find something to add to my strengths out of interest, but I ended up receiving comments like this? ?Was my expression not clear enough at the beginning?Used by students to kill time!Newbie!Poorly written!Don’t spray if you don’t like it! ! !Do I have to ask you to read the copy that says "If you're a good picker, go away"?
No matter what the situation is, this is not a reason for you to leave a malicious review.I don't care if you get negative marks or even report it. I'm just curious - how can there be such a person who, even though it's such a big deal, still uses the keyboard to show off his presence?
If you simply leave a comment like "I don't like the heroine's character, the plot is not good, the writing is extremely bad, the author is not good at writing, it is lower than expected", I won't be so disgusted - really, I never do I thought that small and transparent ones were the most stable, and only those big guys would get such sharp and detailed long reviews. I didn’t expect that someone would actually criticize the author.In fact, to put it bluntly, if the book is listed in V, I will not reply to another [-] people who say this about me - you are the one who spends the money, and if I want to make money, I must cater to your preferences.But the fact is that I write articles just for fun and I don’t get paid, so don’t mention “freedom of speech and acceptance of criticism” to me, I don’t!Don't accept such criticism!I'm still aggrieved!I am a person who leaves my homework until evening and has to squeeze out time to write essays. Why can’t I write what I want to write?
As for the last point, I want to say thank you to all the little cuties who silently read the article. Thank you for your likes and comments.And I'm sorry, after reading this chapter of my useless nonsense, I know that some readers are students, please don't learn to curse from me, don't let me teach you bad words.
Now that I see comments like this, I have no intention of writing them. I am an ordinary person, even a little sensitive. I post on the platform to find recognition and not to be angry, so I don’t like to see such sharp comments.
My writing is not good. This is not an earth-shattering matter. If readers don’t like it, they can find other books. There are so many books that you will like. It doesn’t matter if I don’t make progress, because this is not my main business and it doesn’t matter whether I make progress or not.
If you are disappointed, you will be disappointed. Please leave silently and stop looking for presence in the comment area. I don’t need your approval. What I wrote and how I changed it later have nothing to do with this kind of person. I hope you have left. No more bubbling.
I will not abandon the book. After all, I have written so much, but sometimes I am just lazy - I don’t want to update it at all. Besides, I haven’t read the original work, and I don’t know much about Shikigami’s biography. It takes time to look up all this information. .Furthermore, I haven’t done any writing for a long time during the recent exam week. I plan to do some more writing and then take advantage of the holiday to do a major revision.
What I want is to find my own writing style and determine my position as soon as possible. I have many ideas waiting for me~
Definitely not V. If I really want to make money by writing novels in the future, I will open a new account and I will never let you suffer in this account!I may put some ideas in the future, and those who are interested can check it out.
PS: This book will be updated as time goes by. Collect it and see what fate brings.
Really, it was a waste of my morning when I encountered this problem as soon as I went online.If you need to study, study. Leave it alone.
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