Make the rabbit at the beginning, exposing the deeds of the national soldiers

"dudu..."

After a while of blind tone, the phone was connected.

The director coughed twice and spoke directly.

"Old Zhang, I need to discuss something with you."

"Oh no."

"You must help me with this matter!"

"Your next issue of "Into the Heroes", can you pat our people's soldiers!"

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at the same time.

Qin Yu was cooking noodles in the kitchen.

Boil the water.

He put the torn Sanxian Yi noodles into the pot, put two eggs in it, cut a golden gong ham, and mixed with a few green vegetable leaves.

Smelling this tempting fragrance, Qin Yu's saliva began to secrete.

In less than 3 minutes, he turned off the gas and poured out the noodles.

Qin Yu walked towards the computer room while sucking on the noodles.

He will continue to help director Lin Xian watch the script.

Perhaps very hungry.

Or maybe a bag of noodles is not enough to eat.

When Qin Yu walked into the office room and sat in front of the computer, there were only a few vegetable leaves and noodle soup without oil and water left in his bowl.

He ate the last few noodles into his mouth and couldn't help sighing.

"really."

"Boiling instant noodles and soaking instant noodles are two kinds of food."

After finishing speaking, Qin Yu directly picked up the bowl and drank the steaming soup in one gulp.

"Phew...comfortable!"

Qin Yu, whose face was covered with sweat, gave a heartfelt admiration.

He put down the bowl, wiped his sweat, took out the printed script, and continued to revise it.

And on the cover of the script, there are three large characters of "Long Jin Lake"!

That's right.

Director Lin Xian's movie is almost the same as the third issue of "Into the Heroes"!

and this.

It was also the reason why director Lin Xian trusted Qin Yu so much and asked him to revise the script.

now.

Qin Yu has already filled the first two pages of the script with suggestions, and still has no intention of stopping, continuing to read and revise sentence by sentence silently.

...

Chapter 81 Annoyed Qin Yu, the actions of Huayi Film and Television Company.

at noon.

The roads in the imperial capital are extremely congested, and four-wheeled vehicles are often not as fast as two-wheeled ones. Even when the traffic jam is the worst, the "No. [-] bus" is much faster than four-wheeled vehicles.

Qin Yu put down the gel pen in his hand, put his hands on the window sill, looked at the big iron shell slowly sneaking on the road, frowned and whispered.

"This script has a lot of problems."

In Qin Yu's opinion.

There is nothing wrong with the subject matter of this movie.

But there are some problems with the emphasis inside, which makes the plot of the whole movie look a little messy, and the emotions expressed are a little strange.

Specifically, it is not rigorous.

Simplifying the battle into a battle, and letting Qin Yu fight the Eagle Aid Stick, the whole picture of this most tragic battle is very vague.

According to Qin Yu's view.

The winning point of this battle is that the soldiers used the special terrain of Changjin Lake to formulate a strategy of luring the enemy into deep, dividing and encircling them.

The key to this is that the [-] troops paid the tragic price of countless soldiers being frozen to death. They marched secretly at night, dividing and interspersing to surround the elite of the enemy.

But all of the above are almost completely omitted in this script, and replaced by a battle of communication towers that is separated from the main line.

This screenwriter would rather forcefully insert a few embarrassing literary dramas about missing the big brother, or whether he should make up for the enemy, rather than do more strategic planning and analysis.

A sentence or two of narration and the head of the polar bear's sentence "Did they come from the sky" scribbled the most epic part of the soldiers' battle.

I don't know if the screenwriter thinks that the crew can't shoot the effect of a quick march?

This is not the most deadly place.

What gave Qin Yu the most headache was the shaping of the characters in the script.

Especially the character Wanli.

Why did his reason for joining the army not make his brother look down on him?

What was the screenwriter thinking?

This is a war, a war to defend the country!

Regardless of whether this reason for joining the army seems too childish and personal heroism, Qin Yu was even annoyed by the various mysterious operations after the character Wan Li.

Disobeying the command, he left the team without authorization to find his brother.

Oh My God.