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"Shh-"

With a movement of Bai Qiu's body, he slapped the middle-aged man in the black hat flying away, protecting Ma Xianhong in front of him.

"One step further, die!"

As soon as the Awakening Sword was lifted, fierce sword energy burst out, cutting a long and narrow crack in the ground.

The persons in charge of the four districts looked sluggish, and looked at Bai Qiu in shock!

What is the origin of this kid?There are endless means, like a demon god.

They stood where they were, with ugly expressions on their faces. The person in charge of the four districts was completely suppressed by a boy. If they said it, they would really be laughed out of their teeth.

At this moment, a faint light appeared from Ma Xianhong behind him, and the body-cultivation furnace also trembled violently at this moment.

Seeing this, Bai Qiu was overjoyed: "Is it finally going to happen?"

"A brat, with a serious tone, do you really think you are invincible?!"

"Shh-"

A figure rushed over from a distance, extremely fast, and arrived in front of Bai Qiu in the blink of an eye.

Bai Qiu's pupils shrank suddenly, and he actually discovered that the energy flowing in this person's body had turned into a long dragon, oppressing him so much that his breathing seemed to be stagnant.

"Above the Grandmaster!" Bai Qiu quickly made a judgment!

"Boy, I want to see how you let me die!"

The visitor didn't pause at all, his figure seemed to have turned into a long dragon, and he pointed like a knife towards Bai Qiu.

"Buzzing—"

The air made a violent explosion, and was torn apart directly, shocking his eardrums so painfully.

Bai Qiu's scalp felt numb all of a sudden, this blow was enough to threaten his life.

Without much hesitation, he mobilized the true energy in his body frantically, and stabbed out with a sword!

Sword 23!

However, at this moment, the sword 23 actually failed, completely unable to restrain the figure of the visitor.

"Bam—"

Bai Qiu's tiger's mouth shattered in an instant, blood gushing, and the vast Yuan Qi shook his body through the blade of the sword, causing him to spurt out a mouthful of blood.

"So strong!"

Between life and death, Bai Qiu became more and more calm, the stars in his eyes suddenly flickered, and countless golden beams shot out, blasting towards the people who came!

This person didn't seem to have expected that Bai Qiu would have such a means, and he was under Bai Qiu's absolute control when he couldn't defend himself.

For a moment, his strength and speed suddenly dropped by a notch, and Bai Qiu took advantage of this gap to retreat and move away.

Feeling the same in his body, the visitor also showed a trace of surprise in his eyes, and said: "The ability to weaken the power of aliens is rare."

He raised his eyes, revealing a bit of ruthlessness: "It's just that I won't be careless with the next blow!"

With a movement of his body, he attacked Bai Qiu again.

Bai Qiu sighed inwardly, it was obvious that he couldn't stay any longer, he could only give up this task and return to the real world directly.

However, just when he wanted Xiaoman to give up the mission, the self-cultivation stove behind him trembled violently, and a trace of special Dao rhyme emanated from it.

"Buzzing—"

At this moment, the heaven and the earth seemed to have come to a standstill, and the self-cultivation furnace was spinning erratically, and this special dao rhyme gradually merged with the heaven and the earth, regardless of each other.

"Haha, it's done, it's finally done." Ma Xianhong said excitedly.

As soon as his words fell, Bai Qiu felt an extreme coercion crushing towards him, trying to push him out.

"Ding, the final task is completed, the rejection of the world's will is detected, and the real world is returned immediately!" At this moment, Xiao Man's voice sounded.

Before Bai Qiu could react, a burst of white light appeared from his body, and he disappeared in place.

chat~

Under one person... It's over, and it's time for the protagonist to embark on a new journey.

I originally wanted to write a few more chapters, but found that I couldn't move the keyboard at all, so I simply chatted to see if I could find some inspiration while typing.

For this dungeon, if the full score is 100 points, I personally feel that it may only be 50~60 points. Of course, many book lovers may think in their hearts, it’s too naive, I can only score 0 points~ well, well, even Nor object.

After all, writing under one person is purely due to my love for this comic, but it ignores the characteristics of the comic itself and my writing skills.

Under One Person is a group portrait comic. What does it mean? In the comics, each character has its own distinct characteristics, the cute and pure Feng Baobao, the unshakable Bilian Zhang Chulan, the lazy and carefree king who cares about the world Also, Zhuge Qing who is cunning and gossipy, Ma Xianhong who doesn't know the importance, and Xu San, Xu Si, temporary workers with distinctive personalities, etc., it will undoubtedly take a lot of ink to show all the characters.

This involves another problem. After all, most of the angle of view should be focused on the protagonist. It is impossible to spend too much ink to describe each character, otherwise people will definitely say that it is useless. Therefore, I changed it a little in the middle Outline, with some characters and drama removed.

The advantage of doing this is that the progress of the plot will be more compact. Of course, there are also disadvantages. Some places will seem a bit hasty and there will be less foreshadowing.

To be honest, this manga is actually quite difficult to write, because its selling point is on each character, and the plot description is actually not much, which undoubtedly increases the difficulty. For the richness of the plot, magic can only be done in many places. changed.

It’s actually a pity that I finished it under one person, because the end of the foreshadowing is still far from what I imagined. The preparations made by the protagonist in the early stage are actually for the final battle. It’s a pity that I occasionally found myself describing The big scene is still quite jerky (under reflection).

In many places, I was not satisfied no matter how I wrote it, so I had to turn the scene back to the protagonist, lacking the passion of the battle, so it was inevitable that it would feel a bit anticlimactic, hey~ I can only make up for it in the next copy.

Finally, some veterans think that the update is too slow. In fact, I also want it to be fast. After all, it is now on the shelves. One more chapter is an extra penny. No matter what I don’t think it’s less money. The method, some fast, many things I consider imperfect, and then it hurts to change it again, maybe because of the imperfect consideration, I have to change the outline later, which is even more hurtful, so I can only guarantee 2 updates per day (Da Zhang It can also be counted as two updates).

After one person finishes, all the things that should be taken are also taken. If you want to see something in the future, you can go to the top post and leave a message. I will check it regularly.

Well, having said so much, it seems that I have a bit of inspiration to go to the code word. I wish the old irons a happy new year, and then ask for a subscription. If you don’t have a subscription, come to the starting point to subscribe.

Tamron of the main world

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Bai Qiu felt that he was in the void, and countless pictures flickered before his eyes.

Subsequent scenes of Feng Baobao, Zhang Chulan, Wang Ye, Ma Xianhong, etc. appeared one after another, and then disappeared into the darkness, drifting away from him.

When he was fully awake, he had already appeared in the house in the real world.

This time, Bai Qiu got used to it very quickly.

After all, Under One Person is from an urban background, and he has not been in it for a long time, and he does not have the strong sense of age division that Fengyun has.