global pollution
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After coding the second chapter of 480 just now, I started to code the summary at the end of the volume.
However, the bigger the scale, the more unwilling I am.
This book is a challenge I set for myself. I tried to write a group portrait, a grand world view, and an intricate organization without much foundation. I will be very confident. As for the failure, I have never thought about it. I must finish writing, otherwise I am afraid I will not be able to write again in the future.
After the real world preparations for the first volume, in my expectation, the second volume, Age of Plague, is the second largest volume after the third volume. At the end of the first volume, when 76 words were written, I guess the second Volumes may require at least 80 words to manage.
But looking back, there are only less than 40 words, and the second volume is almost finished.
The slime disease, heteroopia, oxygen toxicity syndrome, star color, and mother tree of mercy I designed are all finished without writing.
I am not reconciled, I am so aggrieved.
But it's all my own fault that led to this outcome, and I can only sulk with myself.
The grades of this book have not been very good, and since the end of last month, because the grades have fallen off a cliff, the one-day subscription is not even enough to buy a bowl of eight yuan fried noodles. I have fallen into a very painful and tangled period of time. I even wanted to finish this testimonial and run away, but then I held back and wanted to settle for the next best thing, finish this book quickly, and start a new book.
I am a person who wants to do it when I think about it. After the idea is determined, I immediately start to shrink the plot and speed up the progress, but then I encountered another problem.
The complexity of the plot exceeded my expectations. I re-edited the outline, and the more I changed it, the more desperate I became.There are too many stories that need to be written later, unless I send out the outline directly, no matter how fast the progress is, it will be difficult to finish within half a year.
It was so uncomfortable all the way, and I came to the end of this volume.
Until just now, I started to code the cursive summary.
I found that I was not reconciled, how could it end so easily?
I'm so aggrieved that it's hard to describe in words. If I have to say it, it's like falling in love and getting married. I bought a house with a loan and gave hundreds of thousands of gifts. When I entered the bridal chamber, I was about to enjoy the honeymoon. , When everything was perfect, the bride suddenly pulled out a teenage boy from under the bed, and told me that he would be my child in the future, and I would support him to go to school, find a job for him after graduation, and then help him buy a house and marry a wife... …
why!
I am so uncomfortable!
I obviously haven't had time to enjoy the happiness!
(Call—calm down.)
As I said before, I am a person who wants to do it when I think about it. If this book is so confusing, I will probably never be able to write a good story in the future. Become my inner demon, I know that there is no medicine for regret in the world, if this time passes, I will never be able to do it again.
But fortunately, although it is troublesome now, at least I still have a chance. .
So I'm going to, rewrite, but not book rewrite, just rewrite from chapter 410 or so.
I will use the same or more words to replace the chapters that have already been published, and the cuties who have already subscribed do not need to pay again.
Of course, this means that I will not have any income from this book for more than half a month, but I still have a job in reality. Although the salary is not high, it is no problem to support myself.
I am very sorry for the readers who follow up, rewriting will bring you a bad experience, and the number of readers who follow up every day is already very small, less than sixty people, and there will be fewer in the future, but I will try to reduce the number of rewrites Influence, keep the plot coherent, the plot that has already appeared will still appear later, so your memory will not be confused.
Sorry in advance.
There are a lot of things that need to be prepared to start again. If you are lucky tomorrow, it may start to be replaced and updated. At that time, I will post another single chapter and tell everyone to start from which chapter to replace.
Also, Nongfu Three Fists oVo big brother rewarded 23 coins on the [-]rd. I have never had the face to thank others, and now I say thank you.
come on!No regrets!
rewrite progress
After a long struggle and sorting out the outline, I finally reorganized the ideas of this volume and started to resume updating.
The new chapters will be replaced starting from Chapter 410. The newly replaced chapters are nearly [-] words more than the previous ones. Readers who have already subscribed do not need to purchase repeatedly, and the number of replacement chapters in the future will only have a lot more words, and the plot is guaranteed to be exciting.
I saw a comment today saying that since Xia Ren started reading the book, the plot has become boring.
I reflected and found that the reader was right.
After the outbreak of atypical insectophobia, strictly speaking, the main line of the book was completely unfolded, and the real enemy began to appear. The plot also changed from a small unit drama of pollution incidents to a complex structure involving multiple forces. .
It was difficult for me to write before, and of course it is difficult now, but in order to make the plot develop smoothly, the focus of my thinking became to maintain the connection between stories and how to write more quickly and accurately. After telling the story, let the things that should appear, and the characters that should appear on the stage, completely deviate from my style. At the same time, it also turned Xia Ren and his party into puppets without emotion, being dragged away by the plot.
But my style has never been like this. My previous writing style is to set the basic elements of the story, then put the characters in, let the characters play freely according to their ideas, and sometimes even get out of my control, the characters will Leading the whole story to a path I had never imagined.
In the early stage of this book, there was only one time where I forcibly changed the behavior of the characters, that is the part where Xia Ren just met Qin Yun and then killed her. Just half an hour after it was released, nearly a hundred favorites were dropped, which scared me. Change it quickly.
But I don't regret that change, because without Qin Yun, you can imagine that the plot will be several times more depressing than it is now.
I also don't regret this revision. I'm not a person who can easily give up one thing unless I don't care about it from the beginning.
If the clothes I'm used to wear are torn, I will try to mend them. Unfortunately, I won't just throw away the newly bought clothes if they are torn.The door lock of the second bedroom of the rented house was broken, and the key could not be pulled out. I went in a few times because I had to put some sundries in it, and felt that the door lock made me uncomfortable, so I simply dismantled it and repaired it (the landlord saw the payment).
The egg yolk, the son of Preserved Dan (I used to think it was a female until its balls got bigger and bigger and more obvious) was always afraid of people because I didn’t get close to people when I was a child, and wouldn’t let me touch it, and I don’t know how to use cat litter. I have to clean the basin every time. Although I occasionally have a big head, I always feel that one day it will run over and rub against my trouser legs like a preserved egg, meowing at me.
I am such a person.
So whether it is this book or you who like this book, I will not give up.
Rewrite progress and update
So far, it has been replaced to Chapter 430 of [-], ahem, I also know that the progress is a bit slow.
However, I am no longer in the impetuous mood I was in at the beginning, and I will not forcibly skip the plot in order to end it quickly.During this period of time, I thought a lot about the plot, about the characters, and the world view in the book.
From the beginning, I wanted to write group portraits, to write about everyone's different thoughts and different pursuits, and also to bring out the cruelty of this world and the helplessness of the protagonist and other supporting characters.
But helplessness does not mean resignation.
They all know that "the world is going to end", and they all agree with this sentence, there is no hope in sight.
But do nothing?
Do not!
They have a firm belief that they have something they love to protect. Even though their power is meager, even worse than the enemy, they still have to fight, be tenacious, and open the way to the future.
How do you know if you don't try?
At least until death really came, they were still alive, able to act, and able to resist.
This book has been written for a third of the time now, and two main characters have died in total, one is Liang Wan and the other is Cheng Shuangshuang. They all died for their own ideals and beliefs, and they even used unscrupulous means to do so.
They are similar, yet different.
Liang Wan is a typical foundation thinking, and when her parents were killed by pollution, she was already an adult, and the impression was very deep, so she hated pollution deeply. Her sister Liang Rong (Liu Xiuxiu) was young at the time, so her emotions towards pollution were not as good as hers So strong, these are the reasons why the foundation chose her to be with Xia Ren instead of Liang Wan.
Because if it was Liang Wan, she might rather give up the mission, and kill Xia Ren, a pollution with great growth potential, in advance.
The purpose of Liang Wan's final actions was not only her duty as a "weapon", but also her hatred for the apostles.
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