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Everyone talks about water!

Green fox crying~

I still remember that when Qinghu wrote the plot of "Dragon Babu", he wanted to write a plot with a bit of Jianghu atmosphere and a bit of poetry.

You can see the ones coming here, and I am sure most of them still agree with that way of writing, and they don't "procrastinate".

When writing the plot of "No. [-] in the World", Qinghu wanted to cater to the world's style of painting, so the writing was very "dumb".

Except when Mrs. Ye is carrying out her own plan, other times, she is rather foolish.

Even when they surrendered, they were so rampant.

To make right and wrong is to do evil for right and wrong, full of five poisons!

It was at the end that Wen Qing fell ill, which made you feel a little abused.

But didn't I arrange for Mrs. Ye to pick him up?

Do not admit abuse (with confidence)!

When writing "The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty", Qinghu wanted to write, and everyone has seen it.

The battle of the three religions!All heroes rise together!Power overwhelmed!

This means that you can't just write about one person, everyone has a role to play, so that you can barely write those people alive, so that the characters will not become facial makeup, too dry and lifeless.

Qinghu originally wanted to write a flesh and blood chaos in the Middle Earth, the struggle between the three religions, and the rise of heroes all revolved around Ye Tai.

But the effect is too bad.

Ugh.

To tell you the truth, the average reading of the biography of Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty is only one-third of the first one...

The most frightening thing is that Qinghu himself still thinks the writing is quite good...

Afraid.

I think it's pretty good, but readers don't buy it. This is a big taboo in online writing.

You have to find your own reasons.

It may be that the protagonist has no force, and at the cost of exploding his body, he can barely use some space energy, and then he can barely balance the energy in his body with the God of War Atlas, and then he can control the space energy and open the space door to shuttle.

In the eyes of many readers, perhaps the descriptions of some other characters are advancing a bit slowly.

Internet articles are fast food, you can quickly forget them when you read them.

But Qinghu wants to ask everyone, after reading the Datang volume.

Do you remember Du Fuwei who loves to say "his grandma's" and who is a little cowardly, a little dubious, but bold and careful.

Do you remember the clumsy and clumsy Wangcai?

Do you remember the gentle and resilient Xiao Mei Niang?

Do you remember the dragon demon Li Yuanba who has the body of the overlord?

Do you remember the concubine Xuan who cut off the head of her teacher and mother in order to cross the demon with her body?

Do you remember...

If after reading it, I have a little impression of certain characters.

I also have a somewhat vague concept of the conflict between the three religions and the troubled times where all heroes coexist.

Then Qinghu is barely considered a failure.

But in the future, try not to devote too much ink to so many other characters (except Wangcai and Xu Qingwan).

Even if it is given, Qinghu will work hard to push the plot forward, so that it will not be so watery.

……

OK.

Then report the overall results of the book.

You can compare, in fact, it is really a bit worse...

Especially after the subscription to "The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty" collapsed, all subscriptions to this book were...

Anyway, Qinghu no longer looks at the backstage, just a little bit~

But in the first place, we use love to generate electricity. If you want to make money, you don’t need a diploma, and you can go out and find a job in a third-tier city, which is better than writing this book.

Although Qinghu just wants to write stories, and writing books is also a part-time job, but it consumes more effort than many jobs.

So I still invite capable book friends to come and subscribe to support~

Thank you!

Huh huh~

……

And then.

It's about Mrs. Ye's star rating, everyone can occasionally compare their hearts, and go to Dianquan to reply.

in case,

Optimistic if,

Qinghu is not calling for rewards.

It’s just that if there are big bosses who want to reward one or two dollars for this book, they can directly click on Ye Tai’s business card and send a “chicken leg” or “blade blade” or something. Increase star power.

Once again, Qinghu is not shamelessly calling for rewards.

After all, if the bosses can subscribe, Qinghu will be very satisfied.

……

By the way, I will give my book friend group another advertisement for the last time:

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