There is nothing wrong with the training method of the Justice Messenger

Wu Geng had calmed down a lot. After hearing what Li Nian said, he felt that he was seen through by this guy, but he was a little happy: "Huh... So you were watching me carefully."

Kato was a little confused. She just read the whole story without delving into it deeply. But now she felt that what Li Nian said seemed to be right.

An Yi showed a thoughtful expression: "Now that Ah Nian mentioned that, it seems to be true. The impression of Wu Geng's book declined a bit in the middle period. Sometimes it was good, sometimes it was bad. Some places didn't feel right, which made people feel a little distracted. But it got much better in the later period. It recovered all of a sudden and the impression was improved again."

Wu Geng humbly asks for advice: "Please teach me a method that can make me enter a writing state with inspiration as soon as I touch the keyboard!"

"niao..." Kato has never been used to such vulgar and casual words and phrases.

"That's easy." Li Nian stroked his beard like a master: "As long as you can be like me, you can abandon distracting thoughts with just one thought, and your mind will be like an icy lake or a clear mirror. Then you will naturally be able to quickly enter a state of focused writing."

"Wow, this method is so simple, so constructive, and so easy to learn." Wu Geng said sarcastically.

Li Nian also knew that Wu Geng couldn't do it, and laughed: "That can't be done. It's unrealistic for a person to be in the right state 365 days a year, but there are indeed a lot of ways to find the right state. However, for you, the biggest problem is not to find the right state, but to find ideas. Before writing something, you must first think about what to write and how to write it... I can't finish talking about this kind of thing, it's all written there. It doesn't matter about the mistakes you made before. Aren't you revising the manuscript now? Take a look for yourself, girl. The treasure containing all my skills is buried in that huge book. After absorbing it, you should be able to debut. Are you surprised or not?"

"……Oh."

Wu Geng responded, his eyes once again falling on the document in front of him that contained the revision suggestions, but he was a little reluctant to open it again.

"What's wrong, girl? Weren't you looking forward to my revision suggestions before?"

“…I just took a quick look and felt like I saw hell.”

"It is hell, yes, but you have to jump into it to become a Buddha. Buddha said if I don't go to hell, who will?"

"…Is it to become a Buddha in the sense of death? Are you a devil who prepared this place for me?"

"What? You just discovered such a simple fact?"

Wu Geng sighed, his previous excitement was completely gone. He finally opened the information and took a closer look. In the blink of an eye, his expression turned into a bitter one, and he began to grit his teeth.

Kato and Anyi knew that the extremely thick information was the revision suggestions given by Li Nian after reading Wu Geng's novel, but they didn't know why Wu Geng was so resistant to such a good thing. Wasn't she looking forward to the revision suggestions given by the big guys in the group? It can be seen that she really wants to become stronger, so Anyi asked Li Nian.

"What exactly did you ask Gogen-san to change?"

Li Nian replied.

“Almost all.”

Chapter 437: The all-round noise, around the lonely person

In general, the revisions that Li Nian asked Wu Geng to do were just some normal steps.

Delete unnecessary parts, add necessary content, and modify problematic paragraphs.

As for this process, Li Nian may be a little more detailed than any other editor.

He read every sentence and every word.

From my own perspective, I gave my opinions on all the things I didn't like.

The notes also clearly state why the changes should be made, what they should be changed to, how to change them, and even which book and paragraph to refer to, what information to check, and whose article to read.

It was precisely because of this level of detail that it took him a whole night to produce such an absurdly thick modification guide.

But Li Nian found the problem for Wugeng, proposed a solution, and gave an implementation method, but did not give his own standard answer.

There are so many problems, and the girl needs to solve them one by one by herself.

An Yi was silent, and immediately cast a sympathetic look: "Do you want to change everything?"

Kato was even more confused: "Not really?"

"Not really." Li Nian nodded and acknowledged Kato's statement: "I just thought about how to revise the book from my perspective, so I gave opinions on almost all the parts."

Wu Geng looked at the revised data for a while and suddenly said.

"I just rewrote it according to your idea."

"...Oh, you can tell?"

When Li Nian was reading Wu Geng's article, the thought that lingered in his mind was, in the final analysis, that is, how would I write it if I were in his shoes? This revision document was made based on this.

"I can't even see that. How blind must one be." Wu Geng looked at Li Nian and asked seriously, "You, want me to be you?"

"You can't be me." Li Nian shook his head.

"But at first glance, these revision suggestions seem to be asking me to write an article like you."

"That's right, but I'm not asking you to be like me. I gave you advice, which reflects my method. But even if you follow my method, you will definitely get a different solution." Li Nian corrected Wu Geng's misunderstanding: "I didn't force you to change everything, even though I suggested changes to almost everything. The decision is still up to you, accept it, give up... or give your own answer, it's all fine, everything is based on your own decision, and you will be responsible for the results you produce at that time."

Opinions are, after all, for reference.

"So you mean after I teach you, you do it yourself?"

"Oh, isn't this a very smart student?"

"I've been reminded to this extent." Wu Geng said as he looked at the information, restraining his distressed expression and suppressing his resistance.

No one really wants to be someone else.

But Li Nian had already made it clear, he just wanted Wu Geng to learn from him.

This is what Wu Geng has always thought about.

She is proud, not stupid.

After learning the outline from Li Nian, she was able to write a story that her friends would like to read, making great progress that she had never made before.

Now this person has given her such a revision material, which is to show her his specific thinking when writing, and to help her go further.

Wu Geng has no intention of letting others down.

Wugeng watched it more seriously.

He continued to ask.

"If I make these changes, will my book be good enough to pass the essay contest?"

"It's just that bunch of rotten fish and shrimp. I guess you can just attack them directly at that time."

Li Nian was quite sure about what kind of garbage the so-called essays on different worlds would get. He felt that if he had helped Wu Geng to this extent and still couldn't help her pass the essay contest in a small library, then he, Li Nian, was useless.

Li Nian didn't worry about such trivial matters, but just reminded Wu Geng: "Set your sights higher, just think about writing a better story."

“Is that a higher vision?”

"Of course, at least compared to being successful and famous, it is a higher realm."

"Just saying some incomprehensible and powerful words."

"Because success and fame are just a process, not a result...at least that's how it works for so-called authors. Writing a good book can make you successful. There are very few such simple things in the world."

"……makes sense."

"So you don't need to think too much. I know you have a lot of distracting thoughts. You are probably just thinking about these random things. They are meaningless things."

"Of course people who have acquired these useless things can say that."

"After we get it, we naturally care about it because we are afraid of losing it. But before we get it, what do you care about? It's a failure in the first place. If you haven't got it, you won't lose it. So there is nothing to be afraid of. Why consider gains and losses, success or failure? Just do it."

Only when I looked at the book full of red words did I feel like smiling.

"Yes, just do it. It can't get any worse."

Li Nian spoke casually as he gradually closed his eyes. He was really tired and needed to rest for a while to replenish his energy, otherwise he would not be able to start practicing at all. He gave his final instructions.

"It's okay to read during the morning meeting, but don't read during class. You're not like Amaki, planning to fail the exam and retake it, right? So study hard when you should."

"I don't have that intention!" An Yi wailed, "Stop scolding me, Master! I will definitely listen to the class carefully! I will start listening carefully today, okay?"

Li Nian could no longer hear anything. He closed his eyes and his breathing became long and deep, and he had obviously fallen asleep.

Kato sighed: "I really envy those people who can sleep whenever they want."

"Yes, yes, it's amazing that someone who never listened carefully in class can sit first in the academic year and be guaranteed admission to university." An Yi, who was always reminded of this, couldn't help but think about the possibility of failing the exam. He felt that he had fallen behind in the progress of many courses and had to study harder.

Then he smiled and said to Wu Geng: "Come on, Wu Geng, with Ah Nian's support, I believe you will definitely make your work better. To be honest, it's already pretty good now, and you feel like you can pass the essay contest. After you make it better, I believe you can strive for the grand prize that Ah Nian mentioned!"

"Yes, after being protected by him to this extent, it would be unreasonable not to win a big award."

Wu Geng said calmly, having already picked up a pen and paper to start making some trial revisions to the beginning part.

An Yi's expression froze. He thought that Gogen's personality was such that he hated being called a weakling who needed help from others.

"Well, of course it's Gogen-san's own efforts..."

"Come on, without the guidance and help of others, my efforts are in the wrong direction and will only remain at the level of self-entertainment, and I won't get the results I want." Wu Geng coldly denied An Yi's statement, and added: "The same goes for your game production."

"...You are absolutely right." An Yi nodded: "But the only way to respond to An Nian is to work harder."

"That's it." Wu Geng quickly began to write. Since she couldn't write during class, she could only write outside of class. Of course, she had to race against time: "I don't want to disappoint him... It's just a small hell, so I can only jump over it and show it to him."

"Oh! Are you excited about the revisions?"

“Hehe, my faithful believers, wait for God’s nirvana and rebirth, and return with a true masterpiece!”

"I'm really looking forward to it." An Yi said sincerely, and then left tactfully: "Then I won't bother you anymore."

Kato looked at the girl writing at the desk with a smile, as if he really saw a pupa trying to break out of its cocoon, and said softly.

"come on."

……

……

For Li Nian, sleep has become an act of restoring the spirit without dreams.

But still necessary and...comfortable.

So much so that he didn't wake up the whole morning. He sat there drunk, with his chin supported by one hand, and fell asleep steadily. He looked quite handsome.

So much so that Teacher Xiaochun, who had been persistently finding trouble with this top student in math class, had to temporarily change the punishment to using a book to hit him on the head to wake him up after walking to Li Nian's desk and seeing his sleeping face.

Instead, he took out his cell phone and took a picture of Li Nian in full view of everyone, saying, "I want to keep the evidence and tell Xiao Jing about it!" But he was completely unaware of the drooling expression on his face while taking the picture, which had already exposed to the students the teacher's sinister intention of just wanting to take a picture of the boy's peaceful sleeping face and keep it privately.

After that, Teacher Koharu continued teaching as if nothing had happened, but everyone could notice that this girl intentionally or unintentionally glanced at the boys in the corner of the classroom, and some people heard this woman mumbling to herself during the quiet time when questions were asked and solved.

"Hey, isn't this kind of guy who is strong and powerful but also has a cute contrast when sleeping also my type? How about finding an opportunity to invite him to my house? It must feel great to be hugged by a strong body..."

Will all women who are almost thirty and still can't find a husband eventually become so horny that they would make moves on their students?

The students were silent.

Li Nian, who had no idea that she had become the target of the hungry teacher, woke up at noon. However, she did not wake up naturally due to hunger, but was awakened by a gentle voice in the midst of a commotion.

"Ah, you slept soundly."

Li Nian opened his eyes and saw Kasumigaoka's face at a close distance.

Li Nian was very confused. She was woken up unnaturally. Her brain was not yet working. When she opened her eyes, she saw a familiar face. But she always felt that it was a face that should not appear in front of her at this time.

"... Kasumigaoka?"

"I read Wu Geng's work this morning, sorted out my comments, and came directly over to deliver it." Kasumigaoka walked straight into the classroom. It was a rare sight that Li Nian was taking a nap at this time. While she was talking, she came closer and looked at her carefully out of curiosity. As a result, Li Nian saw the girl's face so close to him as soon as he opened his eyes.

——"Oh oh oh oh, it's that senior from the third year! The beautiful girl is here and she's looking for that guy again!"

——"So close! Almost kissing!"

——"So the rumors are true! It looks like there is something going on between these two! Who said that rumors can't be believed?"

"You... Ouch!" Before Li Nian could react, he was suddenly pulled back by a force, and the distance between him and Kasumigaoka was suddenly distanced, and he was pressed against the chair.

"Thank you for your thoughtful revision suggestions." It was Gogen who pulled him back and said calmly, "I'll take a closer look, but you can just notify me on Line and I'll come find you. There's no need to go there in person and run into someone else's class without saying hello."

"That's great. I took this trip on a whim and got to see a boy's cute sleeping face. It was totally worth it."

It was quite rare to see Li Nian in such a dazed state, but it was a pity that he was dragged away before he could take a closer look. Xia Zhiqiu sighed inwardly but still smiled, ignoring the whispers of the people around him.

She sat down in front of Li Nian, in the empty seat that originally belonged to Totsuka Ayaka, and glanced at the information spread out on the desk next to Gogeng, which was covered with pages of red words: "But it seems that someone has already given you, Gogeng, detailed enough advice. Don't I need to do anything extra?"

"No, I just felt that someone's meddling was a bit too unnecessary, and it made me very irritable. I wanted to see if Kasumigaoka-senpai's advice would be more concise."

"Then I'm afraid you will be disappointed. Although I'm certainly not as detailed as Li Nian's suggestions, I'm not much better either." Kasumigaoka also commented on Gogen's work: "Speaking of your work, Gogen, I didn't really like this... popular style at first, but after actually reading it, I felt it was quite interesting. It was the outline that I worked on with Li Nian, right? That had a great effect. The whole story is very complete, the sense of excitement is in place, the sense of style is in place, and the connotation is also there, but to be frank, the handling of the details is very problematic, and it always makes people feel that such a good story should not be limited to this level."

Li Nian became much more sober. He looked at Kasumigaoka, who was sitting in the front and was obviously determined to have a good chat with Wu Hao at noon. He then looked at the classmates who were almost all watching this place. Listening to the whispers that came into his ears, his head, which was already feeling tired, suddenly felt heavier.

However, Li Nian was too lazy to care about trivial matters such as public opinion. She felt that it didn't matter what others thought of her. At this moment, she cared more about what to eat for lunch, so she got up and went to the cafeteria as usual.

"You guys chat, I'm going to go buy something."

Kato was only surprised for a moment when Kasumigaoka suddenly came to the class to find them, but she quickly calmed down and greeted Kasumigaoka. At this time, she explained the content of Li Nian's errands as usual in a blunt manner, and Wu Geng also told her what he wanted.

"Where's senior sister?"