There is nothing wrong with the training method of the Justice Messenger

An Yi exclaimed: "Oh! It appeared! The priest's great healing spell! Forget about small issues like staying up late. Looking at your recovery speed after being injured before, it seems like you can even reattach your head if it's cut off?"

"I suddenly don't feel the importance of staying healthy!" Sawamura couldn't help but yelled, "So, that day, Isayama-senpai, who was exhausted as a dog, lay in the coffin you prepared for a while and then stood up full of energy to continue fighting with you. For exorcists like you, Kasumigaoka-senpai's mental fatigue caused by staying up late doesn't seem to be a problem? Is it that she is at low health and you can just cast a spell to revive her at full health on the spot? It seems that no illness or pain is of any significance in front of you."

"Don't talk nonsense. Magic is not omnipotent. It is only an effect on the body. It is not as simple as restoring HP... and my injury recovery is not the effect of magic. I have never tried to reattach my head if it is really cut off..."

Wu Geng asked suspiciously, "It sounds like you really want to give it a try?"

"Just because I like fighting doesn't mean I like to die. It's just that I might really need to give it a try if I have no other choice... It's not important. What's important is that I can say that I have some medical skills. I can diagnose and treat illnesses. I can help Senior Kasumigaoka with some minor problems caused by staying up late."

Li Nian was not talking nonsense. The foundation of spiritual practice is introspection. Through introspection, one can clearly see the flow of qi in the body, and at the same time, the subtle conditions can be seen at a glance. It is easy to see where the problem is in the body. Practitioners can use this qi to regulate and heal themselves, and they can also transfer qi to others to heal them.

Li Nian once used this method to treat Qingshan's severe cold, allowing her to recover the next day and catch up with the performance of the voice actor training school. It was also natural to cure the minor problem caused by senior Kasumigaoka's staying up late.

Of course, this method can cure people's illnesses, but it can also kill people invisibly, causing people to die from inexplicable heart failure and exhaustion...

"It appears. The Hexagonal Warrior suddenly revealed a new skill." Sawamura asked curiously, "Do you want to show us your skill bar?"

"My skill list is like a huge tree, gradually extending from small to large. It's very complicated and is updated every day. You won't be able to finish reading it."

"Haha, you are worthy of being a novelist. The setting of a skill column is inexplicably sophisticated."

Li Nian stopped talking nonsense with Zemura and turned to Kasumigaoka: "That's it, I'll show it to you one day, is that ok?"

While you are thinking about flirting with someone, their mind is full of your health problems.

Kasumigaoka felt a deep sense of powerlessness. She was a little depressed and felt that she had given her love to the wrong person. She really wanted to curse this damn straight man.

But when you met Li Nian's serious eyes, you knew that this man had really been concerned about her health since he saw your not-so-good sleeping posture that night. He ignored your flirting and proposed the idea of ​​helping you cure your illness. How could she be angry about this?

Kasumigaoka sighed, feeling very exhausted, yet feeling a little warm in her heart.

She knew that Li Nian didn't care about you, but she just didn't care about you from the perspective of love between men and women.

This was indeed the Li Nian she knew, a guy that people both hated and loved. It was a pity that you wanted someone to be your boyfriend, but people only treated you as a friend.

She actually knew Li Nian very well and knew that this guy's defense was as strong as an iron wall. He seemed to be calmer than before, and it seemed that his mood had changed in the past few days.

So when I was thinking about the outline last night, I considered him as the male protagonist. There was something that Kasumigaoka couldn't figure out, and I had to find him to ask him about it today.

"What kind of situation... can make a man like this look at a girl straight in the eye?" Kasumigaoka murmured.

"what?"

"No, you want to treat me? Isn't this a good thing? Of course I agree, and I look forward to Li Nian taking this opportunity to touch my beautiful body..."

"Well, I do see the senior naked during my medical treatment."

"……well?"

"It's connected to the bones, internal organs, blood vessels and other things."

"...It's more than what it means literally. It's so scary. Can you please stop saying that?"

"Oh, come to think of it, I've been feeling dizzy, having headaches, muscle weakness, high blood pressure and insomnia lately." Sawamura pretended to be a delicate and sickly young lady, hoping to attract her attention.

Everyone has seen how extraordinary Li Nian is. Sawamura feels that seeing this person for treatment will probably give her a clearer view and a more thorough treatment than going to a big hospital for medical treatment, medication, or surgery. She is also aware that she has some minor health problems, and when she heard Li Nian suggest giving senior Kasumigaoka a shot of healing, she also wanted to learn a little bit about the priest's healing skills.

Li Nian determined Sawamura's illness without even looking at it.

"There's no hope. Wait for death. Goodbye."

"You didn't even look at me! You don't want to show me? You're treating me differently. We're both club partners. Kasumigaoka-senpai, you're willing to treat me, but you should also help show me a bit of cute blonde beauty!"

"Sawamura-kun, what's wrong with you?"

"…Your explanation is weird. I don't know, but what if it turns out to be an incurable disease?"

"Then you do have an incurable disease. I can tell at a glance."

"Don't scare me?!"

"You have lazy cancer, and you will never be cured."

"…Tsk, forget it if you don't want to watch it."

"No, I'm just kidding. It's okay to take a look. Anyway, I think if I take a look at you, I'm sure you'll find a lot of problems, and it may be necessary to treat them."

Sawamura is not much better than Kasumigaoka.

They are the type who have to go to school during the day and go home to work late at night.

Sawamura might be worse, after all, Kasumigaoka-senpai only prioritizes work, and this guy has even more bad habits.

When she is not working, this guy likes to play games and read books. She probably participates in all kinds of entertainment activities at home. That's how she got myopia. She may not stay up less late than senior sister Kasumigaoka, and may even need the healing buff more than senior sister Kasumigaoka... Oh, she is the type who is not in a hurry to do the things at hand. She should sleep whenever she wants on weekdays. She is not lacking in rest. She may even get too much rest. It's just that it is definitely not regular.

"And me..." Seeing this, An Yi also wanted to ask Master Li to take a look at his problem.

This person is also a role model of contemporary young people. He has to go to bed at three or five o'clock, and he has a lot of work to do. It is even more outrageous than Qingshan before. It is a miracle that he can live so energetic every day.

Li Nian glanced at Wu Geng again. Although Wu Geng didn't say anything at this time, facing Li Nian's eyes that seemed to say, "Do you also need to treat your illness?", she looked away guiltily.

A closer look reveals that this club is full of people who are likely to be in the news for sudden death. Kato is the only one who is not suffering from any bad habits. However, she seems to have been led astray recently and she can often be seen yawning during class.

"As for illnesses, they can all be treated. I don't mind the hard work. But I can only treat them temporarily, not permanently. Don't think that magic is omnipotent. You all need to be careful."

I got a weak response, and it was obvious that these people didn't listen at all.

After chatting for a while, Kato reminded them to start the discussion about the game production... Having said that, there is not much that needs to be revised after the plot outline modified by Kasumigaoka.

They had all been integrated and marked by Li Nian, and after discussing with Kasumigaoka for a while, they were all screened one by one.

During this period, no major disagreements arose. Such disagreements had already been discussed before, and there was no longer a situation where Li Nian and Xia Zhiqiu had to argue with each other and could not reach a consensus. Therefore, the final revision of the outline was completed so quickly.

During this period, the two scriptwriters still dominated the discussion, and no one else had the chance to say a few words.

"If there are no other questions, then this main plot outline is finalized. Next, I will assign tasks to the specific events that need to be written, and then we can just start writing, okay?"

"Yes." Kasumigaoka had no doubts about this, but at this time he said, "There is one thing I don't quite understand. Can I ask you, Li Nian?"

The script outline has been revised and the main plot line and the outline of various events have been finalized, and Kasumigaoka suddenly said this?

"What? There's something you haven't quite understood? Why didn't you mention it before? You're bringing it up now after you've revised the main outline?" Li Nian couldn't understand it. He felt that this was not a low-level mistake that Kasumigaoka would make. Whenever she discussed things with him, she always spoke her mind. Why would she bring it up now after she'd revised the outline and say there was something she didn't understand?

"Because it's not a question of revising this outline... it's about the ideas when you start writing about specific events."

"……You ask."

"You... I mean the male protagonist Kinoshita Shin. Although he has romances with various heroines in all the plots, according to your plot arrangement, it's just a very ordinary one. When the mood is right, they confess to each other and become a couple. But I really don't understand, how can such a clumsy guy easily agree to someone's confession, or even take the initiative to confess to someone else?"

"… Kasumigaoka-senpai, do you think it would be better to have a more tortuous plot? Two or three repetitions of half-hearted refusal and half-acceptance? Wouldn't that mean we need to modify the outline and add more events?"

"I noticed that you, Li Nian, seemed to think this was a matter of course. It seemed that this was how you thought the male protagonist would fall in love with someone, so you decided not to modify this part... But I want to know, is this your true thought?"

Suddenly everyone looked at Li Nian.

Li Nian couldn't help but feel overwhelmed. In the end, she kept asking herself about her own views on love after going back and forth to Kasumigaoka Hill...

Li Nian was a little too lazy to answer such a stupid question. He thought that the character of the male protagonist had been expressed clearly enough in the main storyline outline. Since Kasumigaoka did not propose any revisions to the outline, it meant that she also thought it was reasonable.

Asking such a question means that Kasumigaoka seems to have mistaken her for Li Nian... The male protagonist in her novel is a guy who would become awkward when facing feelings.

This is indeed a huge misunderstanding.

After all, it is a galgame, and the plot of confession and marriage is of utmost importance. The attitude of the male protagonist towards feelings is a point that Kasumigaoka needs to pay great attention to in the actual writing process. If the emotional changes are not handled well, the entire personality of the male protagonist will collapse. It is better to let her grasp it clearly from the beginning than to waste her efforts after she writes it and then be pointed out with problems and asked to revise it.

So Li Nian explained.

"Listen carefully, I... bah bah bah, it's the male protagonist Kinoshita Shin. It's true that he is a guy who won't fall in love easily, but he has a straightforward personality and is not the kind of person who would be shy when it comes to love. When the atmosphere is right, the feelings are right, and he really likes someone, he will face it frankly. If he is confessed to, he will look the other person in the face and respond seriously. If he really falls in love with someone after spending time together day and night, he will take the initiative to confess without the girl taking the initiative. In short, he is not the kind of person who is hesitant and indecisive when it comes to love. You must remember this, Kasumigaoka-senpai. As for the male protagonist, he either doesn't fall in love or loves seriously. That's it. Be sure to pay attention to this when writing the events."

Wu Geng muttered, "Will you face it seriously after being confessed to?"

Kasumigaoka suddenly realized. "If you like someone, will you take the initiative to confess?"

It is indeed a very simple logic and a very ordinary development... and it is indeed like Li Nian’s idea.

At this moment, Kasumigaoka no longer had any doubts.

So the outline of the script was finalized, and I could start the formal writing from now on. The design part had been completed, and all I had to do was to work hard to steadily advance the progress.

"It's not just Li Nian and Kasumigaoka who are in charge of the script that need to get busy... Now that the script outline is complete, the art department should also start moving."

The script does not need to be completely finished. Once the script outline is completed, the artist should start drawing concept drawings and main character designs.

After An Yi said this, everyone's attention shifted to another person.

The pressure suddenly came to Sawamura.

She was enjoying a delicious cake and was being looked at by everyone. When asked about her art work, she gracefully put down her knife and fork, wiped her mouth with a cloth, then showed a sunny smile, gave everyone a thumbs up, and spoke confidently.

"I can't move! I have a lot of things to do right now. I have to draw illustrations for that guy's novel and Kuailetian's book."

The answer was as expected, and everyone knew that Lazy Dog would never disappoint anyone when it came to delaying progress, so they all looked away without caring.

"What's that? You're looking at me with such low expectations of me! Just listen to my but!" Sawamura said quickly.

"We are listening to what you say, Sawamura." Li Nian said, but no one, including him, was willing to pay attention. Gogen was already whispering in Li Nian's ear about whether they should find a more reliable commercial illustrator.

"But! I will quickly finish the work at hand, and after that I will not accept any more commissions, and will devote myself to the art work of our club!"

"Oh, I know."

"Give me a reaction!"

Until now, everyone has not seen a new finished painting by Eri Kashiwagi and cannot give any reaction.

Sawamura was so angry that his teeth were itching. These guys really didn't take her, Kashiwagi Eri's promise seriously.

I clearly used to admire her statement.

When I finish the illustrations in a few days, I will definitely start with the one with the surname Li so that you will remember the greatness of the club artist Kashiwagi Eri!

Chapter 434: While the geniuses are making good progress, the mortals are also working hard

After that, Kasumigaoka-senpai had no more questions, and the main storyline outline was established.

Originally at this stage, all the scriptwriter needed to do was open Word and do the work, but there were only two game scriptwriters in this club.

Li Nian finally discussed with Kasumigaoka about the distribution of tasks, that is, who would write each of the various events.

The subjects that they are each good at are indeed very different. Ideally, the part involving the advancement of romance should be completed by Kasumigaoka, and the part involving the advancement of the main line, knowledge of Yin-Yang magic, and battle-related plots should be completed by Li Nian. Kasumigaoka also proposed this approach.

But Li Nian denied it.

In the actual writing process, we cannot really break down the events into pieces and let different people write them, as that will cause the train of thought to be scattered. Although there is such a detailed outline as a guide, in the actual writing process, there will naturally be more temporary inspirations and things that need to be added, which will cause inconsistencies. Li Nian feels that a certain part or the entire part should be handed over to one person to complete.

Specifically for galgame, it means assigning different routes to different people to complete.

The plot of a text adventure game is like a tree. The trunk is the common line, and other routes extend from the common line. Since it is the outline written by Li Nian, the trunk should be completed by him independently, that is, telling the story from beginning to end, and the line with the most content and various elements in the script. Li Nian plans to complete it alone.

This part naturally also includes the plot of the male and female protagonists getting to know each other and falling in love.

"If a virgin really doesn't know how to write about being affectionate with a girl, you can leave that part blank and let me write it." Kasumigaoka teased.

"It sounds like I really can't write about the interaction between boys and girls. Don't worry, I'm just not very good at structuring this part. With the ideas given to me by senior, I naturally know how to write it. Isn't it just writing about the kind of love that makes people feel horny? Look at what I write. It feels like it's at the same level as Kasumi Shiko, but with a different flavor."

Although Li Nian is not very good at writing about love between men and women, that is only because he did not focus on this when writing the plot and did not take the initiative to study it thoroughly. Now that this outline has been revised by Kasumi Shiko, it has a very detailed design and description of the content related to love between men and women, which makes Li Nian feel that his horizons have been opened and he has many ideas. He also wants to learn how to write about the theme of love. Now that Kasumi Hill has given him many solutions, he is naturally confident that he can produce results.

"Arousal... the feeling of heart pounding has completely lost its charm after you put it like that. I'm really worried... I will review that part carefully, and if I'm not satisfied with it, I will send it back and ask you to rewrite it."

"Of course I will let you confirm my results... and I also need to confirm your work. Even if you are writing a personal storyline, it does not mean that you can really avoid elements other than love. The personal storyline is to supplement the main storyline. Under my outline, even the personal storyline involves a lot of content related to combat, spells, and even some philosophical thinking and personal beliefs. Can you write it well?"

"This is the part I need to learn, but you, Li Nian, have already made detailed plans for these contents in the outline. I feel enlightened and my mind is broadened when I read it. I roughly know how to write it. Don't think that Xia Shizi is only good at writing about love. A capable author can write about anything. Now someone has explained the methods to me, and I will naturally come up with an answer that will satisfy you... Of course, my results will also be confirmed and revised by you, Li Nian."

The two smiled at each other. They both knew that the other had areas of strength and weakness, but they both understood that the other wanted to take this opportunity to learn from each other and make up for their respective shortcomings. They also believed that the other was a capable person and could find their own answers from the ideas given by each other.

The form of cooperation in the script was completely clear. That is, Li Nian completed the common line of the male and female protagonists to the end, and Kasumigaoka completed the personal lines of the male protagonist and other female protagonists. They did not interfere with each other during the writing process of the events, but could actively seek opinions from each other at any time. After completing the events, they also needed to give the text to each other for mutual confirmation and revision.

Kasumigaoka is a person who can't sit still. The script outline and task assignments have been made clear, and previous doubts about someone's fundamental thoughts on love have also been explained. The image of Kinoshita Kokoro has completely brightened up in her mind, so she immediately said goodbye and planned to go home to write.

"Don't stay up late." Li Nian reminded, using an imperative tone and a rare serious expression.

Kasumigaoka was stunned for a moment, then smiled at him tenderly: "Listen to my husband."

Sawamura whistled.

Li Nian was indifferent, thinking that as long as Kasumigaoka was obedient no matter what, it would be fine.

Kasumigaoka gave him a wink and left with a gust of fragrant wind.

Wu Geng was very quiet from the beginning, as if he was thinking about something. He watched Senior Kasumigaoka walk away and suddenly asked Li Nian.

"If someone confesses to you, will you respond seriously?"

Li Nian sighed. What he was talking about before was the male protagonist Kinoshita Shin in the galgame. Why did these people have to rely on their real selves in real life... But Li Nian also realized that he had substituted the male protagonist in the script for himself, so he answered this question.

"Of course, that's the basics of being a man, isn't it?"