There is nothing wrong with the training method of the Justice Messenger

While Wugeng felt a little ashamed, he couldn't help but cast a sympathetic look at the person over there who had already lay down in a few seconds and was snoring soundly, with drooling from the corners of his mouth, as if he was having a sweet dream and grinning foolishly.

As soon as Li Nian said this, it was equivalent to that An Yi's project proposal had been rejected and evaluated as worthless garbage. His hard work for a whole night was wasted and meaningless.

Poor him, at this time he was probably still dreaming of having his author proposal praised to the skies.

Turning around to look at Li Nian again, he, who had just made the comment "worthless", turned the page and continued to look at the project plan which he thought was not worth mentioning.

Li Nian clearly said that there were problems from the very beginning, but she seemed to continue reading carefully.

Even if it's garbage, I'll take a closer look...

Looking at his focused expression, Wu Geng suddenly remembered the time when he gave his manuscript to Li Nian to read... He felt warm in his heart for no reason, but he made a sarcastic remark.

"I said it was rubbish but I still watched it seriously. I didn't expect your character to have the attribute of saying one thing but doing another?"

"Since you are asking sincerely, I will mercifully tell you the truth." Li Nian showed a sadistic grin: "I am just sorting out the criticism points of the entire plan. I will criticize him thoroughly and leave him speechless."

"...Ghost, you are a ghost." Gogen felt that he had really misjudged someone. He cast a fearful look at him and unconsciously moved away: "After all, others have tried so hard, please show some mercy..."

"Of course I was joking." Li Nian's fierce expression suddenly disappeared, and he laughed and overturned his own words: "Of course I'm not that cruel, nor that boring."

"..."

This guy changed his expression so quickly that Wu Geng, who believed him, decided not to believe even a single punctuation mark in his words from now on.

Li Nianqu tapped the pages of the project plan with his fingers, making a crisp sound.

“That’s a bad sign.”

"A bad sign?"

"Even without mentioning the content, it's clear that An Yi is really working hard this time. This is really bad."

"...Hmm?" Gogen couldn't hear anything bad about this sentence.

"The plan that was brought out this time is full of various elements randomly pieced together. It can be seen that this guy has not grasped the key meaning of the term "planning" at all. He just added things that he was interested in on a whim."

"More specific?"

"For example, this project, first of all, is set in an underground street in an alternate dimension."

"Isn't this a standard start? What's so bad about it?"

"The leading actress is an idol who is about to debut."

"..."

"The protagonist is an unfortunate boy whose right hand possesses the ability to destroy all supernatural powers it touches—"

"Stop, don't say anymore." Wu Geng reached out to stop Li Nian from continuing, revealing a helpless expression: "It's really bad."

Cobbled together and copied from here and there.

Li Nian was right. The plan had already failed miserably at the beginning.

"But." Li Nian changed the subject: "Putting aside the sense of déjà vu, from the overall point of view, it is a story with a beginning and an end, and the framework is also decent. To be honest, although it is rubbish, it is already somewhat interesting. I have to say that for someone of An Yi's level, it is quite good to be able to write a plan of this level for the first time. Beginners will always copy things from everywhere in the beginning, which is understandable, and then he will probably learn from his mistakes next time and not make the same mistakes. Repeating this process, perhaps it will gradually become more and more decent."

"What's the so-called growth potential?" Wu Geng immediately understood what Li Nian meant and nodded in agreement: "Everyone goes through this."

“That’s why I said it was terrible.” Li Nian continued to turn the pages: “Wait until he finally comes up with a passing plan…”

"…You just have to fulfill your promise and join in?"

"Yes."

Wu Geng discovered that Li Nian smiled with a bit of helplessness at this time, and it didn't sound like she was that unhappy.

An Yi, who stayed up all night to write the project plan, fell into a deep sleep as soon as he lay down. He slept until lunch break and just woke up. He remembered that he had given the project plan to Li Nian to read. His confused mind suddenly became much clearer and he immediately went to find Li Nian.

"What do you think?"

Li Nian patted him on the shoulder and gave this answer with just a smile.

"Show it to Sawamura, Kasumigaoka and the others."

It sounds like Li Nian agrees with this plan.

This made An Yi's eyes widen in surprise. His first feeling was a little bit of disbelief. When he handed in the plan, he actually didn't have much confidence. He was already prepared to be rejected by Li Nian and have to overturn and rewrite it.

"Really?"

"Just go ahead, don't worry, I believe you..."

An Yi was overjoyed, and ran back happily, took out his phone and started to contact Sawamura and Kasumigaoka...

Then in the evening, Li Nian received a message from An Yi on Line.

"I got sprayed with blood!!!"

The result was just as Li Nian believed.

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Chapter 191: Kasumigaoka's Sudden Defection

"You asked me to show it to Kasumigaoka-senpai so that I know what I wrote is worthless garbage...right?"

An Yi was lying on the bed, staring at the screen of his mobile phone in a daze. An hour ago, he confidently sent the word document containing the project plan. Half an hour later, Kasumigaoka started with a sentence: "What kind of garbage is this?" and began to vent his anger by criticizing him.

Kasumigaoka's speech, with its extensive citations from classics and references, can be said to have fully demonstrated the rich accumulation of this third-year talent. In general, she belittled the plan written by Amaki without using any dirty words, and she made him so ashamed that he was speechless.

It turns out that Li Nian's intention in asking him to find Kasumigaoka was not to approve of his creation, but to show that he, like Kasumigaoka, felt that this project was not good enough...

In other words, what I wrote didn’t please either of them…

When realizing this fact, An Yi felt like a bucket of cold water was poured over his head, and the flame of enthusiasm that had been rising suddenly shrank into a small flame.

An Yi was somewhat shocked.

For the first time, he realized that Senior Kasumigaoka was actually such a strict person.

I further realized how strong Li Nian is that even such a strict person like Kasumigaoka agrees with her.

This is indeed the case. An Yilun has read the work written by his friend six or seven times. It is a complete, unusually touching and vivid story, which is enough to make people remember it deeply and move to tears. This shows the profound skills of the author.

But it has to be said that An Yi did have some luck because of this. Seeing that his friend's "debut work" was of such a high level, he also thought, "Can I do it too if I try hard?"

So he wrote this plan with great enthusiasm, not only because he had signed a pledge in front of everyone, but also because An Yi also hoped that his work would be recognized by these two people and hoped to see the display of his level as a creator.

And now he got what he wanted, and really saw his own level - how terrible it was. If before Kasumigaoka found faults, Amaki still had unrealistic fantasies, then after Kasumigaoka found countless faults in every aspect, this fluke has disappeared, and he has recognized his own weight.

There are differences in talent between people.

An Yi has completely calmed down.

Thinking about it carefully, it was Li Nian who was abnormal. No matter how you looked at his works, they didn't seem like something a high school student could write. Even compared to him, perhaps even the active writer Kasumigaoka-senpai couldn't write them... When did his friend grow to this point? An Yi had thought about this question more than once, and this time he asked it again, feeling many times more confused than before.

He roughly knew the answer. It must be partly because of the spiritual disaster that occurred during the summer vacation. Since then, Li Nian seemed to have become a different person. Li Nian once said that his body had undergone some changes due to the spiritual disaster. Looking back now, it is obvious that he has changed not only in physique, but also in personality... At that time, An Yi was deceived and did not hear Li Nian mention the details. At this time, he couldn't help but think that perhaps if he knew what happened at that time, he would understand the changes in his friend...

No, now is not the time to think about that.

Rather than thinking about those other things, the most urgent task facing Tomoya Aki is still the planning. It is a fact that the plan has been rejected and needs to be rewritten. Aki is thinking about getting back in the right direction, but he can no longer be as enthusiastic as before. Instead, he feels a little unmotivated.

"I can't do this in my current state..."

An Yi knew that there was definitely something wrong with this mentality.

But there were still six days left. He had to write a good enough plan in six days? He had to start from this "rubbish" and write a plan that would be recognized by Li Nian and Kasumigaoka, who were much better than him?

It seems unlikely.

It was not until this moment that An Yi felt that the military order he had signed in front of everyone seemed to be more difficult than he had imagined.

He browsed the chat history with Senior Kasumigaoka again.

The senior was undoubtedly irritated by his plan, but even so, she must have read it carefully. Her criticism was so well-reasoned that people had to believe it. She pointed out the shortcomings incisively and pointedly, which had considerable reference value.

But An Yi couldn't quite get into it. He felt that every word of those words seemed to be saying, "Your talent is limited to this extent."

An Yi couldn't help but start to doubt whether he could really be the chief producer of the game and control the script of Li Nian and Xia Zhiqiu...

I don’t know if it was as if she really saw through his thoughts... Suddenly, Senior Kasumigaoka sent a new message.

"An Yi, I think you should be more aware of yourself. With your level, it's probably impossible for you to write a detailed plan that will satisfy me. I think Li Nian will have the same idea."

Kasumigaoka said it.

Although he knew that this senior would definitely think so, seeing her point it out directly had another meaning, which made An Yi's heart sink and a little bitter.

Does this mean that the senior sister doesn't think highly of me? Or even dissatisfied with me being the producer?

Maybe that's the truth.

That's right, with my own abilities alone, how can I be qualified to be a leader...

——"Are the ideas I hold too unrealistic?"

If this continues, his plan will not be approved. If he cannot come up with a convincing plan within seven days, he will not be able to recruit Li Nian to join the company, and Kasumigaoka-senpai and Eriri will also give up, and his dream of making games will be ruined...

An Yi replied: "So, Senior, do you think I can't come up with a satisfactory plan within seven days?"

"After all, Amaki-san, do you think your writing ability is better than mine and that guy's?"

“How dare you…”

"That's right. To be honest, I don't really have any expectations for your plans."

An Yi didn't know how to reply and looked at the message with a pale face.

Amai also knew that Senior Kasumigaoka had come here because of his promise that he would find Li Nian to co-write the script with her. It was natural that she would not have any expectations of him since they had only met once... But he still felt more and more lost in his heart. Although he prided himself on being thick-skinned, it was still hurtful to not be recognized by others, especially by a writer he respected.

"I have seen your strength from this plan, An Yi - it is weaker than I thought. Your foundation is so weak. As I said before, no matter how hard you work within seven days, you probably won't be able to come up with a qualified plan in the end. If that's the case, there's no need to wait for Li Nian to speak. I will be the first to deny you."

An Yi suddenly became nervous.

"How could that be? Didn't you help me convince Li Nian before? Don't you want us to start making the game smoothly?!"

"Of course I hope things can go smoothly, but the plan proposed by the producer is the general outline of the game, which will have a huge impact on the game itself. Your immaturity will definitely lower the quality of the results, which I absolutely cannot allow. I didn't realize this before, but now, I will no longer make any compromises, do you understand?"

The basic principle of a creator is to be responsible for his or her own work. Can a certain factor lower the quality of the work? Kasumigaoka will never allow that.

An Yi was speechless, sweating profusely, not knowing how to refute.

The situation is not good now. Unexpectedly, Kasumi no Yau, who seemed to be his teammate before Li Nian, is about to transform and become the biggest obstacle...

At this moment, Kasumigaoka suddenly changed the subject.

"Having said that, Li Nian and I have some disagreements. He is very concerned about the fact that you proposed the project and is very persistent about it. Unlike me, he seems to have some expectations of you."

An Yi was stunned.

Li Nian had expectations for him? How could that be? Wasn't he the most reluctant one?

Before he could ask anything else, Kasumigaoka had already spoken.

"So, I hope you can bring him... and Sawamura-san and the others to the activity room again tomorrow afternoon. I think we need to talk again."

The next day, An Yi came to school again and found Li Nian.

Li Nian looked at him with a frown.

"Did you stay up late again?"

An Yi had two huge dark circles under his eyes, and looked as if he was trying to force himself to drag his body. It was obvious that he had not slept yet.

An Yi nodded, silently acknowledging.

"Work efficiency depends on a combination of work and rest." Li Nian glanced at An Yi's hands, which were not holding anything. "And I don't think you have any new plans in your hands?"

"No, I can't think of it." An Yi said in a hoarse voice: "I thought about it all night, but I couldn't think of it."

"So you worked uselessly all night... That's why you might as well take a good rest."

"I...feel like there's no time, the situation is too urgent..."

Li Nian noticed that this kid seemed a little crazy and seemed to be pushing himself too hard. Thinking that he was putting too much pressure on him, Li Nian kindly reminded him.

"It's urgent? There are still six days left."