Become the mastermind behind the Akatsuki organization
Closing remarks
The ending was a bit hasty, but at least it was finished.
To be honest, this book collapsed when it was put on the shelves, but I was unwilling to give it up and wanted to try, but in the end I couldn't change my fate.
According to the original design, this book should revolve around Yahiko, Nagato and Konan.
But they basically disappeared in the later period. It may be that I don't have the experience of farming literature and the ability to deduce later.
But this book also taught me a lot of experience.
1. If the timeline of Naruto fan fiction is too long, it will be very fragmented, resulting in a feeling that the protagonist is a waste. After all, Naruto and Sasuke have crossed from Genin to Six Paths in more than three years. The fan fiction protagonist can't be worse than them.
2. The plot should revolve around the protagonist group. Too many characters will cause the plot to be scattered and unable to return to the main line, which will feel like a headless fly.
3. The problem of plot and combat power arrangement.
Once the protagonist has the strength of a super shadow, that is, the strength to fight one of the five major ninja villages alone, the plot will be very difficult to arrange, after all, it is already invincible.
The summary is almost there.
See you in the next book, which is a story about Konoha Ninja Village. If nothing unexpected happens, you can see it this month
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