ten ring world

Summary after Chapter 63
A summary will be made after each volume is written.

1. The first volume is called Fantastic Boy in the outline, but the rhythm was not controlled well, which caused some plots to be a bit procrastinated during the writing process, which seemed not smooth.

2. The text description is a bit confusing. When talking about the main character, it is often referred to other places, and the focus is not enough. When it comes to this point, it needs to be deeply reviewed. The supporting characters were described too much in the early stage.

3. Strive to have bright spots or bright points in each chapter. This may be a common problem for newcomers, who only care about writing by themselves, but fail to grasp the key points of the novel.

4. It is necessary to describe the development of the characters in the scene from an objective perspective, instead of actively guessing by yourself. Remember that you are just a recorder, a pure bystander.

5. In addition, you need to refine your words, don't always use too much pen and ink to write a bunch of nonsense, but this is a long-term task, and you need to persevere.

Remember! ! !

(PS: This book will continue to be written and will be completed. I will make a big deal with the editor and strive to put it on the shelves in early June!!)

(End of this chapter)