Douluo's supreme white tiger

Chapter 72 Chapter 71.5 A very serious question

Suddenly found a very serious problem.

Many book friends said that this book is getting more and more watery, but I read it from beginning to end, and I didn't find any water.

If it's because the conversation with the holy beast white tiger remnant spirit is too long-winded, I'm already restraining myself. After all, talking nonsense with the holy beast white tiger remnant spirit is the style of this book, and I can't change it.Therefore, I have no choice but to experience aesthetic fatigue. No matter how much it is sprayed, it is impossible to change it.Changing the style halfway is courting death, and I still want to finish this book well.

In addition, there are also those who say that this book does not look like a Douluo fan.If you want to follow the original novel all the time, if you have to be with the original characters at any time, there is no way to change this. When I first wrote it, I didn’t intend to keep following the original novel. This can be seen from the appearance of Tang San in more than 30 chapters.

Writers must be able to create their own copies. I don’t want to dig into the characters of the original work, because I’m afraid of being sprayed and disrespecting the original work, so I can only find ideas elsewhere.

There are people who don't like any book.

I've admitted long ago that I'm just a nerd with no social experience, and I'm sorry for my lack of writing skills.

Finally, I have recently been chasing "The World of the Gods" by Eternal Flame, drawing on Huo Da's method, and also asking everyone about the book's question and comment format.

E.g.

Problem: water.

Specific description: Chapter 70 has no specific content at all, and there is no need for it to exist at all.

Suggestion: remove Dai Mubai, he has no meaning in this chapter.

Roughly...that's it.

I used to think that writing a book was my own business, no matter what you said, I just wrote according to my own ideas.

But now, as expected, people need to be educated by reality.

The so-called True Fragrance Law is indeed a universal law of the universe.

I hope to continue to improve in writing books, and I can't do it behind closed doors.

So, please describe it to me in detail when you find the problem!
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Also, I will leave a comment here at the end. If you are following up, please give me a like and let me see it, okay?I'm curious how many of my collections have been abandoned.

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