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Chapter 501: 497. Comments on "Cultivation Begins with Vomiting Blood"

Today I would like to recommend a new fantasy book to you.

"Cultivation Begins with Vomiting Blood", Longshezhi, level 5 author.

Category: Xianxia-Cultivation Civilization.

【Introduction】

The doctor said I was mentally ill.

Hahaha!
How could I be crazy?

I suspect this dog doctor wants to harm me!

I was a perfectly healthy person, but someone said I was sick and even said I had paranoia!
How can this be?

This is absolutely impossible!
This doctor really wants to kill me.

This is an invincible story about a teenager suspected of suffering from paranoia who travels to a world of spiritual revival.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter One: I'm Not Crazy. The protagonist, Xia Zuo, suffered developmental delays and intellectual disabilities as a child, leading to a diagnosis of mental illness. At age nine, he began to fear the world and worry about all kinds of dangers. Then, at 15, he traveled to a world where spiritual energy was revived and became a nerd. This nerd also kept a diary, watched short videos, and owned six life-size dolls. He felt he couldn't go back.

Chapter 2: Someone Wants to Kill Me. The protagonist dreams of his former owner, Xia You. The original owner shows no interest in his body and tells him someone will kill him in two weeks. Upon waking, he discovers the killer's identity: a warrior. In this world of resurrected spiritual energy, warriors can flatten cars. Only warriors can defeat warriors. He has money, but not a lot.

Chapter 3, Breath of the Wild. The protagonist, aspiring to become a warrior, spent the morning researching and deciding to start with jogging to improve his physical fitness. He learned the game Breath of the Wild. As a homebody, he vomited blood after his first jog. He continued running the next day and unexpectedly completed a 21-kilometer half marathon.

Chapter 2: Full Marathon. The protagonist ran for the third day and completed a full marathon, even running under two hours. He then ran a half marathon before stopping. Chu Zidong, who had been secretly observing him, stopped him. She thought the protagonist might be the genius her master was looking for.

Chapter 5: It's him. Chu Zidong stops the protagonist, hoping he'll join her Liuyun Martial Arts School. The protagonist isn't alarmed at all, even thinking the woman's salesperson and the Liuyun Martial Arts School might be a dangerous place, since they'd actually given him money. The protagonist searches online again, but can't find any useful information about the school or its owner. He himself is a martial artist, a Martial Emperor at the highest level. Then he realizes it's Xia You's prank.

【Brief Comment】

Long Shezhi, a level 5 author, is the author of two works: "The Weird World of Cultivation" and "Cultivation Starts with Vomiting Blood".

The former has 16 collections and 38 followers on Qidian, which makes him a Level 5 author. This is definitely a sock puppet.

His new book, "Cultivation Begins with Vomiting Blood," has been out for almost a month now. It has 6931 favorites on Qidian.com, 0 on Bookstore, and 24 followers. Judging by the looks of it, it's a bit iffy.

When I first read the introduction to this book, I thought it was somewhat similar to Xinfeng's "The Strong Man Who Came Out of the Mental Hospital." Surprisingly, it's not at all. The protagonist's initial description of mental illness only appears in the introduction and introduction. Later, he can be said to have returned to normal. Of course, this may also be reflected in the subsequent plot.

In addition, the protagonist becomes stronger when he spits blood. At least, it seems to me that every time he spits blood during a long run, his body becomes stronger and he can constantly push his limits.

However, what is confusing is that the so-called "Xia You" that exists in the dream is actually a person. Is he not a real Martial Emperor or Martial God? The foreshadowing is buried a little too deep. Too deep.

Putting aside the above points, this book is actually an ordinary urban supernatural novel. As for the so-called invincibility, it has not been shown much.

This will make readers who clicked on the novel for the two elements of "mental illness" and "invincible writing" lose their patience.

Comparing this to his brilliant predecessor, disappointment sets in. It can be said that this book has, so far, failed. There's a high probability it will flop.

Here is also a reminder to new authors that the beginning is really important. Don’t spend too much time laying the groundwork and don’t waste time.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

The author has already cut this book.

I had a premonition when I was writing the book review, but I didn't expect it to come true so soon.

How should I put it? The previous work was so awesome that the style suddenly changed, which is actually the same as writing a new book under a pseudonym.

Many readers will not easily agree.

Now, the road of online literature seems to be getting narrower and narrower.

It is more inclined to nonsensical comedy, just for laughs, leaving nothing behind.

Of course, when you laugh, you are truly happy.

(End of this chapter)