Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?.

Chapter 156 The newcomer’s plot will collapse!
"If you have time, please come to my humble home more often. Oh, I was so rude. This house is very nice and cannot be considered my humble home." When Oda Nobuo was saying goodbye to the landlady, he wanted to be polite, but he found that the house originally belonged to the landlady.

"Oh? Do you want me to come more often?" Mrs. Yukino stood at the bedroom door with a playful smile on her face.

She deliberately glanced at Fujido Kacheng and Namikaze Yuzuru who were almost escorting her on her left and right.

"Hehe, you two, don't be so rude. Otherwise, I'll get up by myself." Oda Nobuo was about to get out of bed.

"You're wearing flowery underwear and you want to give it away?" Fujido Xiangcheng found an excuse to stop her.

Keep Oda Shingo and the landlady away from each other to avoid them flirting with each other.

"Oh? You even know what you wear, Oda-kun. I'm afraid some people won't like it if I come a few more times." Mrs. Yukino smiled softly with her hands covering her lips.

Oda Shingo said angrily: "Don't bother with the two kids."

Before Toudou Kacheng could protest, Namikaze Youhe said, "She is not young anymore."

Oda Shingo rolled his eyes. I knew it was this sentence.

The two women sent Mrs. Yukino away, and Oda Shingo confirmed that Halo 2 was indeed ineffective.

Oda Shingo tried to ask the system what the specific reason was. He didn't know if it was a system bug that counted the landlord's wife as unmarried, or some other reason?
But the system remained silent and continued to play dead.

So when the two girls came back, Oda Shingo explained to them: "The reason why Mrs. Yukino came over so often is because of work."

"That's a lame excuse. Can I give you another chance?" Fujido Kasumi looked disdainful. Namikaze Yukaku looked similar.

"With her around, I feel my work efficiency is much higher." Oda Shingo didn't know how to explain the existence of the system halo.

Neither of the two girls answered this time, but judging from their narrowed eyes, they looked even more contemptuous.

Never mind, as long as the halo effect exists, it's fine. Oda Shingo kindly invited the landlord's wife to come over on his phone.

"If I'm free." The landlady replied.

Oda Shingo couldn't figure out her attitude, but at least there was hope.

The next day, Mrs. Yukino really came.

After reading the original drawing, she sat there and began to write comments on the photocopy.

After Oda Shingo looked at it carefully, he was immediately shocked.

Many of the problems pointed out are very accurate, some of which were not even discovered by Oda Shingo himself.

And the more we communicated, the more I felt that Mrs. Yukino was very capable. After correcting some of the dialogues according to her opinions, the expression effect was indeed better.

"It's just that I've seen too much from reading comics since I was a child." Mrs. Yukino smiled modestly.

However, Oda Shingo noticed that she glanced triumphantly at the two women.

The two women caught this micro-expression very accurately and immediately worked harder, striving to win Oda Nobuo's praise.

I don’t know if it’s due to the efficiency-enhancing effect of Halo 2, or the desire to protect the nest, cough, or the sense of competition, but the work efficiency of Shingo Oda’s studio has actually increased significantly.

The speed and quality of manuscript production are even better than before Oda Nobuo fell ill!

By the time Oda Shingo recovered from his severe cold a week later, the manuscript of "Parasyte" had been accumulated up to chapter 13!
"Oda-kun, the plot of your "Parasyte" is really great." Mrs. Yukino praised sincerely.

She feels more engaging than One Punch Man because you have no idea what the story will be next.

It is no exaggeration to say that it is a wild imagination, and the meaning contained in it becomes clearer the more you think about it.

"It still needs major revisions, and every climax needs to be scrutinized repeatedly." Oda Shingo continued to screen the problems very seriously.

If it was just a copy of the original work, it would have been confirmed as a success. But Oda Shingo is not satisfied with this, he wants to get the first place in the popularity list next month!

After "Parasyte" appeared in the main issue of "Jump", the second issue's popularity results came out.

Online voting decreased significantly, to just over 3000 votes.

Because the physical votes increased, from more than 2000 votes to nearly 3000 votes. In the popularity rankings, it ranked third. Although it dropped one place, it was a small fluctuation and its position was still very stable.

The Xinchang encirclement network LINE group made an analysis at the first opportunity.

"No way, have the readers of this magazine begun to accept him?" Kousuke Watsuki was a little worried.

Gouda Takeshi is very confident in his control over the female character settings: "Impossible, absolutely impossible! Just based on that Tamiya Yoshiko, comic fans will never support him!"

"The fans are indeed polarized in their attitude towards Tamiya Yoshiko. However, the controversy is so great that it is actually an advertisement, and it also gives him an advantage." Your point of view is too old-fashioned! Kousuke Kazuki cursed in his heart.

What era is it now? You are still insisting on traditional female characters? Don’t be ridiculous, comic fans are tired of it!
"This guy did it on purpose! He deliberately made the readers quarrel!" Minister Hayato Hyakki was very upset.

Gotada Takeshi made an angry expression: "Damn it, how come this guy always gets the upper hand!"

He has made countless figurines in his studio. Not to mention the common things like being stabbed with needles and chopped with knives, he has also made figurines of them, such as being exposed to the wind and rain, hanging and beheading, and even putting some figurines in the refrigerator.

Maybe Gouda Takeshi's expertise in curses is even better than in the comics...

Vice President Xiaoshan, who had been silent for a long time, made the final decision: "As long as his next plot collapses, everything will be meaningless! As a newcomer, he is serializing two comics at the same time, and the most likely problem is that the plot will collapse!"

"Great advice, President Koyama!"

"President Xiaoshan hit the nail on the head!"

"It is just as President Koyama sees it!"

The three subordinates offered flattery in succession.

They eagerly await the next episode, but the plot is broken!

The new issue of "jump" will be on sale soon.

In order to ensure the interests of this magazine, the online serialization of "Parasyte" is half a beat slower than the physical publication of this magazine.

So, more comic fans waited at the door of the bookstore.

"Is "Jump" here?"

"It's here!"

This time, there were not just four comic fans, but six sitting in front of the bookstore.

The bookstore owner did not drive them away.

This is a living signboard. As long as the entrance of the bookstore is not blocked, it is a good thing if someone can pass through it.

"Why are you in such a hurry this time?" the owner asked curiously.

"The parasite has entered the school! It's going to kill Shinichi in front of ordinary people!"

"Oh? Yes, that Mr. A wants to kill Xiao You." The owner was originally looking forward to it, but he was too busy running the bookstore every day to remember it.

Now that I think of the plot again, I want to watch it even more.

He opened "Jump" and thought that since he was busy taking care of the store, he might as well take a look at it and just get the result.

But once he opens it, he has no say on how long to read it.

The story of the comic begins with Tamiya Yoshiko.

"Stupid thing!" Tamiya Yoshiko felt the murderous intent of Mr. A coming to the campus and suddenly blurted out this sentence during class.

She simply left the classroom, leaving the students to study.

On the other side, Mr. A was stopped by a male teacher on campus.

Unlucky male teacher.

(End of this chapter)