Douluo: Start by taking control of the Holy Spirit Church Saint

Chapter 75: For all the readers who are impatient
It has been more than half a year since the book was first published. Although it has not received very high reviews so far, there are still some loyal fans who have read the latest chapters, such as Xukong Jiyu, Mingyunjun, Yu Jiankong, Sobchak and other fans who have always supported and spoken enthusiastically. The author would like to express his sincere gratitude here.

The original intention of writing this book was nothing special. The author was a fan of the second dimension. He heard the news of Psy's death at noon on March 8. The childhood memories and the enthusiasm of youth seemed to have passed away with him. He waited in a daze until the next day, when the second dimension animation started at around 10 o'clock.

For the book Douluo Dalu II, the author mobilized the whole dormitory when he was young. Every time a physical book came out, everyone would buy one and take turns reading it. In those years, Douluo Dalu, Tang San and Xiao Wu were basically our topics before going to bed at night. Therefore, before the new book was released, we read each volume over and over again at least several times.

Probably since Huo Gua first participated in the Xingluo competition, we, who were deeply involved in the protagonist's life, have begun to reflect on whether we could do better if we were the protagonist. More importantly, should we not do this?

The protagonist Huo Gua came with a lot of hatred, but he did receive unprecedented warmth and care in the atmosphere of Shrek, and all of this was based on his ability. However, vaguely, we young people saw the shadow of the former Spirit Hall from Shrek Academy.

Didn't the protagonist enter the academy for revenge? Why did he shoulder the glory of Shrek and fight hard in a game? How would Huo Yun'er feel if she knew that he didn't cherish the life given to him by his mother?

What is justice in Douban 2? Why do so many readers get angry when they see the protagonists get hurt in a competition, but are indifferent when they kill Sun and Moon students one after another?
It wasn't until the plot reached the chapter of Qiankun Wenqing Valley that we in the dormitory were exhausted from watching it in order to cater to the original author's bad taste.

I personally think that at that time, the story of this book had actually ended. It was a tragedy that the original hero and heroine were left behind in the desperate place of Qiankun Questioning Love Valley. The proud Huo Gua was ruthlessly beaten to death by Tang San here, and Wang Donger, the half-personality of the heroine, also died here for love.

Seeing this, it is not difficult to accept the explosive plot that follows. Then, when it comes to the story of the legend of the God Realm, Huo Gua really becomes an important factor in Tang San's downfall and destruction.

It was also on March 9th that I first had the idea of ​​creating fan fiction. If I were to create a protagonist to replace Huo Yuhao and complete the story of Douluo Dalu II, leaving aside those external plug-ins, how would he avenge his mother? How would he defeat Tang San?

After all, if you go in with all those messy things, the book might be fun, but it will still be a different experience.

First of all, the God's perspective is established, which is equivalent to the protagonist being Natsuki Subaru who knows everything. However, even if he knows the development of events and the location of resource packs, he may not be able to pass the level without dying, so I arranged for the plot of the Monster King to appear halfway in the Far North. There will be readers who feel poisonous there, but everything in the world will never go as planned.

The most important thing is that the protagonist needs to absorb power from plant souls. After watching Dou Si, I deeply understand this point. If you don’t absorb energy from the plane, it is impossible to compete with Tang Shenwang before becoming a god. Just looking at the huge energy required for Lan Xuanyu to achieve the seventh ring has fully demonstrated this point.

The author referred to his friend's experience and created this protagonist who is crazy about revenge for love. In modern society, only those who can plan those means can be qualified to be the protagonist of Dou Er. Otherwise, even if he is given prophets and resources, he may not win in the end.

The protagonist is not the son of destiny. The Huo Gua at the beginning plus the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm are the sons of destiny. Only Huo Gua who has merged with Tianmeng is the real son of destiny. Without the blessing of destiny, how can Tianmeng become a million-year soul beast? Without the blessing of destiny, how can Huo Gua meet Tianmeng? Both are indispensable.

Some people say that Tang San noticed Huo Gua from the moment he was born. The original text says that he was full of mystery, which can be understood as half luck. To give a very simple example, Beibei Tangya did not pull Huo Yuhao into the group when she first met him, which is enough to show that Tang San's divine consciousness in the Tang Sect still looked down on the useless Huo Gua. And when Huo Gua merged with Tianmeng, well, Tang San saw it and immediately pulled him into the group. Bibi Dong was a local plug-in given to the protagonist reluctantly, just hoping that his early development would not be so difficult. Without Bibi Dong, the protagonist would not even step into the gate of Shrek, let alone recruit companions to Shrek. If there was no Bibi Dong, the protagonist would have to go to the wild alone, and would not have the opportunity to show off in front of his peers in the original world line of Shrek. There would be fewer highlights in the early stage of this book.

Besides, the introduction of two groups of time travelers in the early stage was actually an arrangement made by the author after thinking for a long time.

The introduction of the beasts like Luanshigou and Chengzhangan is naturally to give the protagonist a chance to avenge his hatred, because his soul has traveled through time, and those beasts may also travel to a different world or reincarnate to do evil again. The reason why they are completely solved in the middle and late stages is that only when the protagonist's mental power reaches a certain level and the undead magic is perfected, there is a way to make them pay for their crimes in all their lives. Killing them is certainly fun, but torturing them is not fun.

Then there is Cao Jinxuan, the time-traveling character. In fact, the author also intends to use him to satirize other time-traveling fan fiction. Douluo is a fantasy world. No matter how high or low the martial arts are, they only follow the law of the jungle. A person who only has a God's perspective and intends to serve the Tang family, no matter whether he respects the Tang family or not, will definitely pay the consequences of his submission to the Tang family's power. Another issue is the character. The character of the protagonist in the early stage needs to be tempered, not to mention the modern people who entered the body sect at the beginning. Just look at A Ruheng in Douluo.

Regarding Cao Jinxuan, what everyone cares about most is the plot of forcibly kissing Zhu Lu, which is called the most poisonous point in the book. From Cao Jinxuan's perspective, he calls himself the son of destiny, so it is normal for him to do such a thing.

You see, many time travelers, after they first traveled through time, either forcefully kissed the empress or the fairy, and then fell in love with him. In addition, their team regarded Dai Huabin's team as their biggest rival, so it was not surprising that he did such a thing.

The author doesn't care much because other fans like Zhu Lu. First of all, in the original work, she is extremely noisy and malicious when confronting the protagonists. Compared with her, Cui Yajie is marginalized and much quieter. In addition, Zhu Lu is Dai Huabin's future daughter-in-law, so she is the perfect experimental subject for Cao Jinxuan.

Another thing is to tell all readers that the protagonist is not a stamp collector who collects every girl he sees. It is none of his business what kind of person a girl will meet or what she will encounter. The protagonist does not need to rush around for things that are out of his plan. There are hundreds of millions of people in the Douluo plane, and tens of millions of beautiful girls. The protagonist cannot collect them all.

Having said these points, let's talk about the protagonist going to Shrek. He has Bibi Dong to protect him, so even if Moon wants to make trouble for him, he has the ability to escape. Then why did the author give so much space to Xie Huanyue? It's not like I haven't read other fan fictions, and just like the original author, almost all of them make Xie Huanyue, the little fat guy, a villain or a stepping stone of the same age. Do you only see that he deserves to be beaten, but not his potential?
In the original world line, the three new soul masters of the outer courtyard, besides Dai Huabin and Ning Tian, ​​the other one is the fat guy Xie Huanyue, who is also the first one who almost seriously injured the three protagonists. The author re-created him and turned his leather elephant into a rubber skin, giving him the treatment he deserves for his potential.

Even in a fantasy world, there wouldn't be so many fools who would become enemies with this person or that person one after another. Instead of turning a person with great talent and potential into an opponent, it is better to turn him into a companion or a friend.

Just like what I wrote about the protagonist being trapped in the Holy Spirit Church for three years, you saw that there were so many powerful people targeting Huo Yuhao and wanting to kill him, but the vast majority of people who had a little bit of brains would have thought about making friends with Huo Yuhao, winning over Huo Yuhao, recruiting Huo Yuhao, or even - becoming Huo Yuhao.

If you can calm down and read this book carefully, you may have a different feeling. Readers who are just looking for excitement will feel that the initial plot is not exciting, but readers who really understand what the author wants to express will feel that the plot is actually always exciting.

This chapter was written out of my own feelings. I hope that after reading this paragraph, readers will calm down a little and give themselves a chance to calm down and read the book.

(End of this chapter)