CSGO Unboxing Streamer: A Charity-Driven Tycoon

Chapter 47 Skill: Artwork Enhancement!

Headquarters of Zhongdian Novel Network.

After the morning meeting, Cen Xiuhui sat down at her workstation.

He stared intently at the data displayed on the screen in front of him, his face serious.

The game "Zhu Xian" was released yesterday.

Lu Yiming posted four chapters in one go.

Seeing that the first chapter only had 2,600 subscribers, Cen Xiuhui couldn't help but sigh and say, "Only 2,600? I hope he can keep updating!"

The writing style of "Zhu Xian" is indeed quite good.

However, neither the plot style nor the pacing is quite suitable for the current online novel scene.

In her view, Lu Yiming wanted to prove himself at the end.

If we don't consider changing the plot style and pacing, then it will take a long time to build up a fanbase.

However, an initial order of 2,600 is still a pretty good result.

Take a screenshot of the data page immediately.

He found Lu Yiming on the chat software and sent the message.

He then typed: "The initial subscription results are pretty good! Keep it up!"

at the same time.

Lu Yiming was looking at his data panel.

Secondary occupation (2): Online novel writer (D-level 10021/1000000)
拥有技能：幸运光环[被动]、天命[0/3]、菜就多练白银[1855/2000]、幸运掉落LV1、老鹰之手
Backpack Items: Online Novel Author's D-Rank Gift Pack, Energy Drinks*4, Lucky Treasure Chest LV1*88, Lucky Potion*3, Lucky Thousand Paper Cranes, Parallel Universe Literary Work Extractor
"Holy crap! How come it's a million?!"

He knew he had been upgraded yesterday.

However, I've been too busy to look at it carefully.

The two of them took some time over the weekend to look at cars and bought a Peugeot 408 worth over 100,000 yuan.

Yesterday morning, I went with the people from the 4S store to complete the formalities. In the afternoon, I was busy with live streaming. When I got home in the evening, I couldn't resist trying an energy drink.

Therefore, I only glanced at the data panel.

They thought that upgrading only required 100,000 subscriptions.

The requirement of one million subscribers for the upgrade immediately dissuaded Lu Yiming from his idea of ​​releasing more chapters at once.

If it's 100,000 words, he can update forty chapters at once.

But one million.

He doesn't have four hundred chapters saved up.

At that moment, the editor sent a message.

He smiled and replied, "Your grades are great! Thank you!"

Lu Yiming was quite content.

To be frank, this novel wasn't his hard work, so whether it did well or poorly has nothing to do with him, a writing machine. However, I was still a little disappointed.

After all, this is a novel that has been rated as platinum by the system.

At first, he thought he could become a platinum author directly with this book.

My gaze fell on the energy drink in the backpack.

A strange smile immediately appeared on his face.

"Hehehe~ This is great stuff! Much more powerful than the blue pills. Hopefully, I can extract more! Five bottles really aren't enough!"

He knew about the effects of the blue pill but had never experienced them firsthand, but he was confident that this energy drink was just as effective as the blue pill.

He went to play CS:GO as if nothing had happened afterward, while Fu Xiaoli slept soundly until dawn.

Recalling my state after using it.

Lu Yiming couldn't help but exclaim, "If this thing could be taken out, analyzed for its components, and mass-produced, becoming the world's richest person would be a piece of cake, right?"

He shook his head after saying that.

"No way! If this thing could be mass-produced, it would probably be the cause of World War III!"

Unlimited stamina!
And it has no side effects.

It's a product of the next century.

After scanning the items in the inventory, he focused his mind on the D-grade gift pack.

[Congratulations, host, you have acquired the exclusive skill "Work Enhancement" for online novel writers.]

Enhancement of Works: Allows for a certain degree of optimization of works obtained from the parallel universe literature extractor. (See the skill description.)

Lu Yiming's eyes lit up.

I obtained the system in early October.

More than two months have passed since then.

From choosing game streamer as the first secondary job to choosing author as the second secondary job, the skills given by the system are basically all beneficial to the chosen secondary job.

At this moment, Lu Yiming understood a little why it was called an auxiliary system.

Its main function is to provide assistance.

At this moment, Lu Yiming couldn't wait to use his new skill.

[Will you optimize "Zhu Xian"?]

Lu Yiming has read the entire novel "Zhu Xian" carefully.

Overall, it's a very good novel.

However, its drawbacks are also very obvious.

His reading habits are stuck in his middle school years; what suits him may not suit today's readers.

Moreover, he felt that the style of the book changed drastically from the moment he came down the mountain, forming a stark contrast with the previous dozens of chapters.

From the beginning to the Seven Peaks Martial Arts Tournament, the whole story is hilarious, hilarious, and hilarious again, especially the Fire Stick part, which made him laugh so hard he almost fell over, and he couldn't wait to read it all in one go.

Several tear-jerking moments include: first, Biyao holding an umbrella for Zhang Xiaofan and dying; second, Guili paying respects to Biyao and feeling sorry for himself; third, Guili and Lu Xueqi reuniting and looking at each other in silence; and fourth, Tian Buyi's death.

If I were to give him my personal summary of "Zhu Xian", I would say that the romance is really well written. I would give the first 80 chapters a 10, the middle 80 chapters an 8, and the last 80 chapters feel a bit rushed, so I would only give them a 6. Overall, I would give it an 8.

of course.

This is from the reader's perspective.

If he were the author, this book would only be worthy of being read on one's knees, looking up at him.
My thoughts began to come back to me.

Lu Yiming silently confirmed in his mind.

【Ding! 】

[The optimization of Jade Dynasty has been successful!]

The process was the same as obtaining the Jade Dynasty sword before.

The optimized version of Jade Dynasty immediately appeared in my mind.

It is currently 9:00 AM.

He was still sorting out the differences between the optimized version of Jade Dynasty and the original version until 11:30 a.m.

The most obvious change is the reduction in word count.

For example, the original text used 10,000 words to describe fighting vampire bats at the entrance of the dripping blood cave, but the system simply glossed over this part.

At the same time, it enriches the details of the fights with others and the depiction of the warming relationship between Zhang Xiaofan, Lu Xueqi, and Biyao.

The lengthy side quests, such as treasure hunting, in the main storyline have been toned down.

The endings of some important characters in the drama were also given clear explanations.

See the final version of Jade Dynasty after optimization.

Zhang Xiaofan retires after achieving his goal and returns to his old village, Caomiao, where he finally gets together with Lu Xueqi; Xiao Huan, Zhou Yixian, Yegou Daoren, and Jin Ping'er embark on a journey to explore the martial world; Lin Jingyu eventually becomes the leader of Qingyun Mountain; and You Ji, the last demon, sets out on a journey to find the Hehuan Bell.

Lu Yiming opened his eyes and murmured, "So Biyao still hasn't been resurrected?"

So many changes were made before.

Lu Yi thought that Bi Yao's ending would also change.

It's not bad, though!

It's at least much more satisfying to watch than the original ending.

"Wait a minute! Does this mean I have to revise the entire article?"

Lu Yiming frowned slightly as he realized what was happening.

The novel "Zhu Xian" has been updated to nearly 200,000 words, and at least half of it needs to be revised, which is no small amount of work.

He immediately looked at the screen.

The above is the chat box with the editor.

After some thought, he finally decided to revise the novel. After all, the optimized version of Jade Dynasty was more in line with the current online novel scene, and the results might just skyrocket after the revision.

(End of this chapter)