first player

Chapter 1483: One Hundred and Thirty-Three·"If you keep me in my dream."

How to write an excellent script?

First, world view.

To set the tone of a world, is it a world without demons or a world with demons? If it is the latter, what level of force should be set, and what is the maximum that one person can achieve? An army, a city, a world, or even the universe?
Second, the protagonist.

Set up the protagonist's goals, divided into short-term goals, medium-term goals, and long-term goals. This will advance the direction of the script.

What are the pleasure points and evolutionary systems of the protagonist's short-term goals? What core contradictions and characteristics of the times are involved in the protagonist's mid-term goals? What kind of sublimation and world secrets are involved in the protagonist's long-term goals? What kind of actions can the protagonist take to achieve his goals? Will he have a smooth journey or will he face many setbacks? Will he be the center of attention or will he be content with himself?
This will lead to companions who support the protagonist in achieving his goals and enemies who oppose the protagonist in achieving his goals. The level of the protagonist will determine the level of these people.

Third, the tone.

Drama, comedy, tragedy.

Fourth, the points of contradiction and core relationship.

During the development of the script, the core relationship established by the protagonist collides with the long-term goal, which will lead to what kind of integration and contradiction points. If the expected climax only exists in one fragment, it will be gradually connected by the long-term core relationship.

Fifth, rhythm.

Opening → Understanding the background → Setting up the characters → Conflict → Resolving or prolonging the conflict → Laying out hidden dangers → Inserting the characters’ daily lives or emotional lines → Small climax → Situation suddenly changes and turns into a big turn → Retracting hidden dangers or foreshadowing → Lowest point → Dawn comes → Big climax → Reversal of solving the problem → A large number of characters gather or die → Closing and solving the mystery → Ending
If the story is long enough, you can insert a cycle of "prelude - climax - prelude - climax". It can be a character highlight or revealing a secret.

Sixth, key figures.

In a script, there are both companions who assist the protagonist and enemies who oppose the protagonist.

There are four types of companions: high cohesion and high freedom, high cohesion but low freedom, low cohesion but high freedom, and low cohesion and low freedom.

There are many types of enemies, measured by initiative and hostility. For example, if a person joins the enemy to help the protagonist, this person has high initiative and low hostility. For example, if a betrayer around the protagonist, this person has high initiative and high hostility.

A comprehensive script where every type of character exists and can add more detailed elements of measurement.

Among them, the most important is the existence of the mastermind behind the scenes.

In a normal story, the protagonist will face a mastermind who stands in the way. This person may not be very hostile or proactive, but for various reasons, such as simply being powerful or just wanting to build a new world order, he or she may not want to clash with the protagonist at all, and thus become the final enemy in the protagonist's process of achieving his or her goal.

This depends on the second point - the level of the protagonist's long-term goals, which determines the level of the mastermind behind the scenes.

The mastermind behind the scenes can be a person, a mechanism, or even a tragedy of the times or a social order.

However, what is more in line with the public's taste and the World Tree's taste is that the mastermind behind the scenes is preferably a human. Otherwise, how can the public vent their anger that has been observed all the way? How can the protagonist eliminate a tragedy of the times? Of course, eliminating a human is more intuitive and more satisfying.

In an adventure story, if the mastermind behind the scenes never shows up and no one knows who is behind the plot in the end, it is probably not a good story.

In the space-time recording body that I observe, I cannot tolerate the invisibility of the mastermind behind the scenes.

The mastermind behind this must emerge.

In particular, Rovatha is my favorite, most hodgepodge of space-time records. I will not tolerate such defects.

So, I will definitely...

appear.

——The Supreme Lord Tossorius, "How to Write an Excellent Script"

……

"We need to go back to the past and bring out the mastermind behind the Disciple Game—the Supreme Lord." Su Liujin put one hand on his waist and said, "I want to see Him with my own eyes and know who He is."

Amid the churning waves, he had a smile on his face, with an air of confidence that he would win.

Su Mingan was surprised when he heard this: "Can you travel through time and space?"

Su Liujin's face flashed with embarrassment, and he shook his head: "No. We are not going to rewrite history, but to memories."

He opened his mouth, as if he wanted to continue explaining, but forgot the words. He quickly picked up the mask of the Fun Devil in his hand and read the sentence engraved on the mask like a primary school student:
"I won the championship in the 0th Disciple Game. I must have met the mastermind behind the scenes, the Supreme Lord. But after the Disciple Game, my memory was wiped by the Supreme Lord. I don't remember the image of the Supreme Lord anymore."

"At that time, I finally knew the image of the Supreme Lord, and I certainly would not sit there and wait for my memory to be wiped. I must have left a backup plan and hid the image of the Supreme Lord in the Zeroth Disciple Game, perhaps in a corner of the game."

"Once the current savior - that is, you - triggers the death mechanism of the Disciple Game, it will trigger my backup plan. Let me go back to the past with you and find the image of the Supreme Lord that I buried."

Su Liujin opened the mahogany box in his hand, and inside lay a glass-like photo: "This is the negative I left behind with the power of time. It can help you and me enter the image of the past."

After Su Liujin finished reading such a long string, his golden eyes looked at Su Mingan nervously, as if he was afraid that Su Mingan didn't understand.

Su Mingan already understood.

It's very simple, just go back to the image and find something. Su Liujin said so much, fearing that Su Mingan was a stupid college student.

"The Law of the Dark Forest." Su Ming'an said, "If we grasp the image and aura of the Supreme Lord and spread it throughout the universe, it will be like lighting a torch and walking in a dark forest. The Supreme Lord will become the source of light in the darkness."

Whatever is said must be known.

For a high-dimensional being like Dieying who controls the authority of "cause and effect", as long as he knows the image and breath of the Supreme Lord, the Supreme Lord will be included in Dieying's causal network. Although it will still take Dieying a long time and energy to find the Supreme Lord, there is a high probability that he will not find him, but there is no reason to guard against thieves for a thousand days.

Therefore, this is why the organizers did not want to reveal their images when they held the meeting, and they were all covered with black fog. It was only after they fought each other that their auras were exposed, and their images were revealed. There were also high-dimensional people who took the initiative to expose themselves and wanted to fight, but the Supreme Lord, a dark bystander, was not one of them.

Su Liujin smiled like a child who had achieved excellent results: "Once we find it, we can make a deal with the Supreme Lord. If He doesn't want us to publish His image, then He should protect Luo Vasa."

Su Mingan thought of a question and asked doubtfully, "What if the Supreme Lord figured out your intention and deliberately didn't show up in the 0th Disciple Game? What should I do then?"

Su Liujin smiled and said, "Any high-dimensional being may not show up, but only the Supreme Lord cannot remain invisible throughout the entire process."

Su Mingan asked: "Why are you so sure?"

Su Liujin closed the box, coughed twice, acted like a little teacher, and said calmly, "In a script, the mastermind behind the scenes never showed up from beginning to end. This is an absolutely intolerable logical flaw. As a follower of the script, the Supreme Lord will not tolerate watching such a space-time record."

"Since He is watching and following the updates, He, as the mastermind behind the scenes, will definitely appear in front of the champion. Even if He knows that this is risky, He will definitely show up."

"Old An, you should have discovered before that each higher dimension has its own path, such as the path of dreams, the path of relief, the path of gluttony, and the path of killing. And the Supreme Lord should be the path of chasing more... Uh, I don't know how to describe it with high-sounding words, anyway, the word 'chasing more' is easy to understand!"

"In other words, He needs to pursue high-quality space-time records to maintain His existence. This has become His original desire and habit. This is both a tool for reducing entropy and His way. If He has the intention to deliberately escape or conceal, it will be detrimental to His ascension."

Su Mingan thought of a lot.

Yueyue, the spiritual dream messenger, is the way of dreams, and she has been shaping dreams.

The sixth little greedy cat is the glutton. He cannot control his desire for gluttony and will take a bite of everything he sees.

Obsession is the reason for the existence of higher dimensions, and it is also the way higher dimensions maintain humanity.

It seems that the Second Si Que and the Supreme Lord are a good match. One writes, the other reads.

"Hongchen." Su Mingan gave a more appropriate name. At the same time, he was wondering what "Lao An" was. Was he much older than Su Liujin?

The time spent sleeping cannot be counted as age. Nineteen is indeed a little older than sixteen...

"Yes... yes, it's called the Way of Following Updates! It should be called the Way of the Red Dust! It's about observing various stories and experiencing the red dust." Su Liujin also felt it was very appropriate.

Su Mingan sorted out Su Liujin's experience:
Actively participated in the Zeroth Disciple Game → discovered the image of the Supreme Lord → After winning the championship, hid the image of the Supreme Lord in the Zeroth Disciple Game → Had his memory wiped by the Supreme Lord → Many years later, the current savior Su Mingan obtained the ability of the narrator of the God of War Dragon King, returned to the Zeroth Disciple Game, found the image and breath of the Supreme Lord, and then returned to the present to discuss with the Supreme Lord.

Among them, there should have been intervention from other high-dimensional people who helped the champion Su Liujin.

Calculate the future from the past.

They will not change history, they change the present.

Su Liujin was no ordinary person, as he won the championship as a jellyfish.

This Su Liujin who lost his memory was even more innocent. If Su Mingan had lost the experience of fighting for life and death in the world game, he would probably look like this.

Su Mingan remembered that he had seen the Supreme Lord. At that time, the Supreme Lord transformed into a goat, and he should have left some of his aura, but he did not deliberately retain it at that time.

The Supreme Lord is really an avid follower of the series, and will do anything for perfection. I have read "Rovasha". Such a person will succeed in everything he does.

"Did Casadia write this information on the mask for you?" Su Ming'an glanced at the Lezi Demon Mask.

"Yeah." Su Liujin scratched his head: "But He never showed up again. Do you know where He went?"

Su Mingan coughed dryly, not knowing whether Cassadia died because of the rules: "He couldn't have told you this for no reason. It must have been Si Que who told you this a long time ago. Later, I didn't know where He was."

However, if the Devil of Fun really died like that, it would be quite fun indeed. It fits the path that He pursues.

"Let's go." Su Liujin picked up the box and stretched out his hand: "I no longer have any power or memory. I can't go back as a physical entity, so I will attach myself to your ability - the voice of the God of War Dragon King."

...The "old man" Su Liujin who is always with you?

Su Ming'an held Su Liujin's hand, and the next moment, Su Liujin turned into a white light and flowed into Su Ming'an's body.

He could finally fight side by side with the original owner in a true sense.

……

[Hehehe! The Jellyfish King is here! ]

[Little Supreme Lord, how ridiculous! ]

【Let us work together to take Him down! Hassagi! 】

……

When Su Liujin was in human form, he looked quite serious. But once Su Liujin was no longer in human form, his speaking style instantly changed to that of an emperor.

Su Mingan recalled that a group of netizens in the past were the same. They were timid offline, but their online comments were extremely open and shocking, revealing their true nature.

"Then, Your Majesty, shall we set off?" Su Ming'an picked up the mahogany box, opened it, and looked at the glass photo in the box.

……

【etc! 】

【…】

[…Although the emperor is full of passion, he doesn’t want to lie to you, Lao An. In fact, even if he catches the handle of the Supreme Lord, the emperor cannot 100% guarantee that He will help us protect Luo Vasha.]

[The most secure method is still for you to follow the steps and lead the small world out of the world game. The emperor vaguely knows the situation outside. Even if the control of the Garden of Eden is taken away by Noel, you have already gained the favor of Wuyi. You are likely to get the fifth and ninth seats to help you. The little golden retriever is only fit to pick strawberries behind you. ]

[Well... Actually, the Great Emperor also has selfish motives. Although the Great Emperor is well-educated and intelligent, he still wants to know what happened in the 0th Disciple Game, why the Great Emperor felt heartbroken when he saw the sea, and the Great Emperor wants to know the past of the blond young man who used a magic circle to awaken the Great Emperor. Therefore, the Great Emperor wants you to go back with him.]

[But everything we do is to make this world a better place. As long as this world is saved, the emperor and his subordinates will have no complaints. This is what the emperor knows in his heart.]

【You just need to choose the path that you think has a higher chance of winning. 】

[If you don’t want to explore any further, just turn around and leave this sea. ]

[Going forward may touch upon the whole picture of Luo Vasha and the final story, which may be better for the future. Going backward is more stable.]

[The Emperor will not deceive you, nor will he use the fact that you are the savior to induce you to make a choice in a high-sounding manner.]

……

Su Mingan stood there for a moment.

Su Liujin was the most sincere original owner he had ever seen. He would not induce him to ascend to the throne of Yunshang City like someone else did, nor did he turn evil and chase him down by the sea.

There is no good or bad, it is all for the world. However, the frankness and sincerity at this moment can make people feel warm in their hearts in this world full of liars and riddlers.

He looked at the mahogany box, his fingers moving slightly——

……

【About to enter the observation bifurcation point.】

[If the observer is unwilling to settle on the "narrative anchor" of this development direction, please stop observing and wait for the "Drama Memory Lens" of the new branch to be generated.]

[Observation is finalization, please observe carefully. 】

……

(End of this chapter)