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Chapter 1216: One Thousand Two Hundred and Thirteen [I heard a distant echo. ]

"Ding dong!"

[You obtain the Drama Memory Lens: "The Maid's Rejection".]

【Excitingness: E-】

[Thrilling level: E-]

[Depth: E-]

[Elements: Western fantasy, relaxed, cautious, strategic]

[Comprehensive score: 2]

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A lens appeared in Su Mingan’s palm. This was his first “Drama Memory Lens”.

The lens also marked the elements of "Western fantasy, relaxation, caution, and strategy".

In other words, if you want to write a serious drama, you need to put less "funny" drama memories. If you want to write a Western fantasy, you need to put less "fantasy" drama memories. Put the right type of plot for the right story, so that players with poor reading comprehension skills will not mix different styles of plots together.

At the same time, a new icon appeared in the lower right corner of his vision - it was a spotless white book.

After your gaze remains on it for three seconds, the page will open automatically.

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[Congratulations, you have become a trainee creator! (Creator: someone who uses his or her own life as flesh and blood to build an ideal kingdom and create stories.)]

[This is your creative editing platform. You can put the Drama Memory Lens into a blank page and perform operations such as arrangement, fine-tuning, and artistic processing. ]

[At the end of the twenty-five days, the book will automatically end, and the story you wrote will be forever frozen in the book and the score will be calculated.]

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Su Mingan looked at the blank book in front of him.

He put the fragment of the drama memory in his hand into the first page. In an instant, the data of the book changed.

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[Story name: Untitled]

【Creator: Su Mingan】

[Plot Rating: 2]

【Character Rating: 12】

【Logic score: 0】

【Philosophical rating: 0】

[World Secrets Reveal Rating: 0]

【Ending Rating: 0】

[Current elements: Western fantasy, relaxed, cautious, strategic]

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Su Mingan looked at the first page of the book. After the drama memory lenses were inserted, the story was automatically generated.

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【创世纪182年4月2日0:30，苏琉锦在床上醒来。他（？）了，因此走到落地镜前，细细品鉴了一番自己的容貌。（剧情评分+1）】

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The blank space can be freely used, which seems to be a space for the creator to fine-tune. Su Mingan clicked the blank space, and the system provided him with several reference options:

Lost his memory/went crazy/didn’t want to accept the reality/wanted to admire his own handsomeness/there were monsters in the mirror/he saw a Samoyed in the mirror.

"...What a mess." Su Mingan complained.

It seems that he is now going to set the emotional tone and narrative style of this story.

If you are writing a serious story, then "amnesia" is the most suitable, which is also the most consistent with his own situation, and there is no need to establish a character setting. If you are writing a crazy narrative with a tendency towards epilepsy, "crazy" is better, and you can also write a series of crazy behaviors of the protagonist later to trigger laughs and contradictions. If you are writing a supernatural story, then choose "there are demons and ghosts in the mirror" to create a horror atmosphere. If you are writing a funny and humorous article, then choose "Samoyed".

To write a good story for the World Tree, character setting is very important.

The system said that the protagonist is the player himself, and he can either play the role as himself or create a character to play. But no matter what choice he makes, the ultimate goal is to increase the story's rating.

So the question is - is his true-to-life performance attractive enough? Can he support a highly rated story?

"I feel like I don't have any attractive points..." Su Mingan pondered and thought hard, but he couldn't judge himself accurately. People are complicated, and it is impossible to fully summarize them with a few words. Reality is not a story, and no one's life will stand on the standard line.

After much thought, he decided to play himself.

As for the narrative style of the story, he intends to write a serious drama, focusing on revealing the secrets of the world.

Then there's the interestingness of the plot...

"Funny point... I don't seem to have much funny point..." Su Mingan looked at himself in the mirror: "Funny point... Is the status of the number one player considered fun? It doesn't seem that fun."

Oops, his story doesn’t seem interesting… Will Yggdrasil like it?

In this regard, Noel, the performance expert of the eight o'clock soap opera, and Yueyue, the connoisseur of the strong female novel Feng Aotian, should be more familiar with it, and you can consult them later.

He filled in the blank with "Amnesia" and the words continued to jump:

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[After Su Liujin looked in the mirror, a cat-eared maid came in with a tray. He proposed to leave, but was rejected by the cat-eared maid. (Plot score +1)]

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The story ends here, occupying only the first page of the book.

Su Mingan read it through and found it boring. But he suddenly found that there was an editing symbol next to the book, which allowed him to make some artistic changes.

He had not read many literary works, mostly philosophy and detective books. However, based on the style of the stories Yueyue had told him, he slightly modified them.

Soon, a story written by Su Mingan himself came out.

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[Hmm? Strange ceiling, where is this? ]

[Su Liujin sat up from the bed, recalling that he was still talking with twelve foreign heroes of unknown origins the night before. How did he end up in a foreign land overnight? ]

[A hint of surprise flashed across Su Liujin's eyes. ]

[——Could it be that I have traveled through time and space? ]

[Standing in front of the mirror, he was surprised to find that the person in the mirror had an extraordinary demeanor and appearance.]

[Gazing at himself in the mirror, Su Liujin thought to himself: Since God has let me carry your body, no matter what your unfulfilled wish is, I will devote my whole life to help you realize your dream. The dragon roars in the sky, how can I be confined to this small corner? ]

[Just then, a cat-eared waitress pushed the door open and walked in. Su Liujin proposed to explore this place, but was politely declined.]

[Could it be that the original owner's body was a prisoner? Su Liujin's heart sank as deep as water, and he had a feeling that this journey of rebirth would be full of twists and turns.]

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[Plot Rating: 4]

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"Hmm..." Su Mingan read through the story he had processed.

Something seems to be wrong...

Forget it, he decided not to intervene for the time being and let Noel and the others give some guidance later.

At this time, the system prompt sounded:

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"Ding dong!"

[Detected your remnant dream...]

[You obtain the Drama Memory Lens·"Final Scene: Red Sun Destroys Luowasha, Iju Tangent Cuts and Creates Life"]

【Excellence: A+】

[Thrilling level: SS]

[Depth: A-]

【Elements: tragedy, apocalypse, decisive killing, grand scene】

[Comprehensive score: 85]

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A blood-red lens suddenly appeared in his palm.

"...Does this count?" He realized that as long as it was a key node in the player's experience, it would turn into a memory lens.

This plot received a high rating, which was a pleasant surprise.

Su Mingan put it on the second page, and the story suddenly became chaotic.

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[In the last second, Su Liujin was still in the room asking the maid for help. In the next second, he suddenly appeared in the outside world.]

[Broken bones were scattered all over the ground, blood flowed like a river, and in the distant sky, a golden red sun was setting. Su Liujin looked up and saw a young man with purple hair and purple eyes, lying in a pool of blood, kissing the broken bones...]

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"So that's how it connects." Su Ming'an understood. It seems that there must be logic between the plots. Otherwise, Su Liujin would have seen the end of the world for no apparent reason, and his logic score would definitely be very low.

For example, he has three memory fragments, namely [The woman smiled], [Happy life], and [The woman's lover died]. So the story is: [The woman saw her lover and smiled happily. They lived happily together for a long time until the woman's lover died.] This is undoubtedly a pure love story, very warm and healing.

But if Su Ming arranged it in the order of [the woman's lover died], [the woman smiled], [lived happily], then the story would become very scary: [after the woman's lover died, the woman smiled, and she and her lover continued to live happily] - this would become a scary necrophilia story.

Therefore, the arrangement order of the drama memory lenses is very important - this is also where players can best exercise their subjective initiative.

Even if your life is boring, if you arrange it carefully, maybe you can come up with a good story?

Su Mingan tried to put "Red Sun Destroys Lovasa, Iju Tangentically Cuts Creation" on the first page and "The Maid's Rejection" on the second page. Sure enough, after the two plots were swapped, the logic of the story became much smoother.

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[Su Liujin had a dream. He dreamed of a young man with purple hair and purple eyes, lying in a pool of blood, kissing broken bones...]

[After waking up from the dream, he found himself indoors...]

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"It makes more sense." Su Mingan was satisfied. After adjusting the order, the end of the world was just a dream, not a sudden plot.

He gave the story a simple title, Closing Panel.

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[Story name: "Global Travel: The Infinite World Tree Evolution Starting from the Grounded Prince"]

【Creator: Su Mingan】

[Plot rating: 9 (a story not worth mentioning)]

[Character Rating: 12 (Superficial time traveler character)]

[Logic score: 2 (no logic)]

【Philosophical score: 2 (lack of depth)】

[World Mystery Disclosure Rating: 8 (revealing a possible future)]

[Ending score: 0 (no ending yet)]

[Current elements: Western fantasy, strategy, rebirth, apocalypse, cool writing]

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【Your story: 378 words. 】

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"Ding dong!"

[When the creator level is upgraded, you will also gain functions such as "creating supporting roles", "joining emotional lines", "multi-branch narrative", "reality fine-tuning", "inspiration fusion", and "card participation". Please look forward to it. ]

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Su Mingan walked around the room to see if there were any other clues.

Following the instructions of the [Clue Insight] skill, he flipped through several books in the room.

"Blessing to the Goddess Rovasha", "Three Rules of the Nalan Court", "Terms Used by the Hammer Man and the Bean Man", "History of the United All Beings", "Ten Guesses about the Rain of Rebirth", "The Prophecy of the Hanged Man", "Date Records of the Thirteen Lovers of the Tricky Demon"... the book titles are dazzling.

He put the unhealthy books back and flipped through the serious books to learn about the god classification of Rovatha.

"There are 27 gods that can be traced back to Luowasha." Su Mingan read:
"There are 3 first-level gods, 6 second-level gods, and 18 third-level gods."

"Let's take a look at the first-level gods first..."

At first glance, the complicated vocabulary made his scalp tingle:
“耀光母神克里琴斯，司掌诞生、太阳、火焰、眼睛。徽记是太阳之眼燃烧于火焰、众生托举婴孩。治下有六大组织：1.晨曦骑士。2.悖论隐士。3.秩序守护者。4.神临颂人。5.圣堂山。6.星际长廊……这也太长了，什么东西……”

“混沌之神奥古斯汀，司掌混乱、谜语、命运、奇迹。徽记是一团模糊不清的气海之雾。治下有六大组织：1.幽游罪人。2.命运之轮。3.混沌之手。4.永生之海。5.雾隙魔术师。6.概念之镜。”

“恶魔母神伊莎蓓尔，司掌镜子、终结、罪孽、自由。徽记是一只从镜子中伸出的魔鬼之手。治下有六大组织：1.诸天灾祸。2.死亡仲裁者。3.法则海盗。4.笼中牧人。5.旧日呓语。6.女皇之镜。”

…What a mess this is.

Su Mingan really didn't know what these terms meant. Without any conceptual explanation, he could only memorize them by force.

"The Caged Shepherd..."

"Cage what?"

"In the cage... what are you herding?"

"What shepherd?"

After barely memorizing it, he quickly read the following chapters.

He suddenly found a clue in a red circle under his pillow. He lifted the pillow and saw a piece of paper with crooked words written on it.

This is... the note that the original body left for him.

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[Hey, the guy who wants to possess me, listen carefully.]

[You are not allowed to use my body to do weird things, and you are not allowed to fall in love. If you can do these two things, then read on.]

[My name is Su Liujin. I don’t know who my parents are. Anyway, I have always lived in the sea. One day, I was suddenly knocked unconscious and was tied up here.]

[Let me introduce you to this country, which is called Hongta. It is a country where multiple races coexist. ]

[People here call me "Your Highness" - but I live in the sea, and have nothing to do with them, so please don't be too fond of me.]

[I later found out that it seemed that this was because [Game Day] had chosen a princess from the royal family, and in order to replace her, I became this unlucky new prince.]

[Why did you pull me out of the sea just for something like this? And why did you have to pull me out?]

[I don't understand why. I'll leave it to you.]

[ps: I don’t know what race I am either. ]

[Another PS: I suspect they want to eat me, I suggest you be careful. I used to live in the sea, and there were always things that wanted to eat me. ]

[PS: Burn after reading. ]

……

Su Mingan burned the note.

Seeing that there were no clues left in the room, he covered the space and went out secretly.

The castle resembles a hexagonal crystal, with a dark blue spire reaching straight into the sky like a sharp steel sword.