Pulling the female boss into the Hongyan group, I was exposed

"The lyrics and music are also terrible." Ren Jinqing said slowly into the microphone.

After saying this, there was silence.

Although He Su and Yu Xiaoxiao were strict in their previous evaluations, they only focused on performances, and were quite modest towards several songwriters.

But what is Ren Jinqing’s position?These songwriters are all juniors to him, and he can show no mercy at all.

"The meaning in your lyrics is that birds eat fish, fish turn into shit, shit nourishes flowers, and flowers remind you of your lover, right?"

After Ren Jinqing finished speaking, the audience in the live broadcast room burst into laughter. Many people at the scene were also suppressing laughter. Only Jia Yi looked embarrassed.

"Haha, the old man is so funny!"

"If you think about it carefully, his song is really like that, and there's nothing wrong with it."

Ren Jinqing continued: "I'm not saying that your word writing is not good. The topic this time is reincarnation. Your understanding of reincarnation is a bit too superficial. You went round and round and finally wrote love songs. This is not about reincarnation. ."

Jia Yi sweated on his forehead and nodded repeatedly: "The old gentleman is right."

Ren Jinqing didn't answer, and continued: "Some of the songs nowadays are a bit too market-oriented. They are all love songs, and they are all about the love between a man and a woman.

"Reincarnation, what a grand concept, why are you so obsessed with love? And your love is not compatible with reincarnation, right?

"Look, you can write like this: A pair of lovers reincarnated and became an eagle and a fish, became enemies, and then reincarnated again and became mud and flowers. Their feelings changed in the reincarnation. Isn't this right? Is your artistic conception much broader than just talking about love?"

After Ren Jinqing finished speaking, Meng Xing's eyes lit up.

This creativity is so awesome!

Why couldn't I think of it myself?
Yu Xiaoxiao was also excited and said: "It seems that if you change it like this, it will be much more interesting!"

He Su also nodded and said: "Yes, we love each other, kill each other and protect each other. This love becomes very poignant in reincarnation!"

The barrage flooded the screen:

"As expected of a teacher, an expert will know if something is there as soon as he makes a move."

“I used to think that these national team songwriters were too rigid, but today I see that their minds are much more open-minded than the popular young talents today!”

"Otherwise, ginger is still old and hot. Jia Yizhen still needs to practice."

"I'm really looking forward to Mr. Ren reviewing Chen Liang's songs and criticizing his songs like "Wumeizijiang" and "Azhen Falling in Love with Aqiang", haha!"

"+1, "A-Zhen Fell in Love with A-Qiang" is everywhere these days. It makes me sick. I look forward to Mr. Ren scolding Chen Liang."

……

Ren Jinqing added: "Besides, you said that the little girl sang out of tune. I couldn't tell what the main melody was. Just listening to the accompaniment, there are too many elements and too complicated, which can easily lead the singer astray."

"Yes Yes……"

Jia Yi didn't dare to express his anger and could only nod his head.

Just now, Jin Lan was scolded for being arrogant, and now he is being scolded for being embarrassed.Highlight a food chain.

All he prayed in his heart was that Ren Jinqing would make less comments.

If he keeps talking, his worth will be wiped out!
This is broadcast live nationwide!

The barrage in the live broadcast room also highlighted a person who was scolding against the wind and cast, and then started to spray:
"Jia Yi also bullies the weak and fears the strong. Just now Jin Lan scolded him casually, but now he can only say that he deserves to be scolded."

"It's not a scolding. If you say that others can't sing well, you can't write it yourself either."

……

Jia Yi couldn't see the barrage in the live broadcast room, but he could imagine what it was like.

His face felt hot, as if he had been slapped twice.

Fortunately, this section passed quickly.

The next one to take the stage was Lu Chujiu.

Guo Xiaoran sat in the audience with her arms folded, quite confident.

The camera also captured Guo Xiaoran's confident expression and captured it on the screen. The audience in the live broadcast room watched it and immediately started talking about it.

"Guo Xiaoran doesn't seem to be afraid of being raped by Mr. Ren at all. He didn't learn anything about how Meng Xing and Jia Yi died before."

"Guo Xiaoran is definitely not afraid anymore. He is the least afraid. Haha, inviting Mr. Ren Jinqing to come this time is the most beneficial to him!"

"Have you never heard of Guo Xiaoran's songs? Guo Xiaoran is very good at writing Chinese-style lyrics. He should be very fond of the old gentleman."

"Yes, Guo Xiaoran's lyrics are outstanding, and his Chinese folk songs are very strong!"

……

Ren Jinqing looked back at Yu Xiaoxiao next to him and said, "This is the national song, right?"

Yu Xiaoxiao quickly explained: "Yes, it was written by Guo Xiaoran."

It can be said that Ren Jinqing is an expert in Chinese folk songs. He was more focused on the stage and took out his reading glasses from his pocket.

Lu Chujiu, who was standing on the stage, took a deep breath, and suddenly a loud voice and the accompaniment exploded like thunder:
"You say kill the rich and give to the poor, I say ride on the wind and rise."

"You say that Heaven is unkind, but I say that Huang Tian should stand up."

"I hold my sword and look at the yellow sand. The sky and the earth are covered with corpses."

"When you climb high, you raise your arms, and the yellow flag is replaced by a green flag."

……

Lu Chujiu has explosive power that is completely inconsistent with her appearance. Just looking at her appearance, it is hard to believe that she can sing such a chilling song.

At the beginning, the audience in the live broadcast room, including many people at the scene, were directly shocked.

"Wow, Chujiu's stage performance is simply amazing!"

"Yes, I thought she had a good foundation before, but this time she burst out with a good song."

"Teacher Ren should be satisfied this time, right? He shouldn't have anything to criticize, right?"

“Although I don’t understand it, I feel it’s very interesting.”

……

Meng Xing was quite happy before Lu Chujiu came on stage.

He was originally very unconfident in this round of competition. The performance of the gold and blue group was a disaster and he was already scheduled to be at the bottom. But he suddenly felt that he could do it again.

He even fantasized that Jia Yi overturned and Lu Chujiu remained silent, looking average, but he might not perform as well as Guo Lichuan.

So in this round, is there a chance to take second place? ?

Even if Mr. Ren Jinqing is here, it will be detrimental to a prankster like Chen Liang. Maybe he still has a chance to win first place?

As a result, Lu Chujiu came on stage and overturned his fantasy with just one voice.

This little girl usually looks so discreet, but she didn't expect to be so stunning all of a sudden.

"She has evolved." Chen Ya stared at the stage and said.

"What?" Qin Yunshang tilted her head and looked at him.

"Lu Chujiu has evolved," Chen Ya said. "Some singers will suddenly break through after a long period of precipitation and pressure, transforming into a cocoon and evolving like a butterfly. That's the case with Lu Chujiu."

After saying that, he turned to look at Qin Yunshang: "You should have a sense of crisis."

Qin Yunshang was speechless, feeling a little unconvinced.

It seemed that Chen Liang had never praised her so much. Suddenly, she had some hope and wanted Chen Liang to truly recognize her for once.

……

Soon, Lu Chujiu's performance ended.

She stood on the stage, sweating profusely, and her chest was heaving with excitement.

Everyone's eyes were focused on Ren Jinqing's face.

Ren Jinqing slowly took off his glasses and rubbed his face.Guo Xiaoran was sitting upright on the surface, but the string in her heart was trembling with every move of the old gentleman.

If you can get a word of praise from Ren Jinqing, it will really be a precious word of praise for Hua Gun.

For him, not only did he get a compliment from his seniors, but he also got recognition from the national team, which shows that his national style words are not only popular online, but also recognized by the academic community.

By taking down Ren Jinqing, he can make further progress.Especially when other poets have their net worth dropped, he can be praised so much that his net worth skyrockets.

That's why he was so nervous.

Not only was Guo Xiaoran nervous, many viewers in the live broadcast room were also looking forward to it.

Most of the people who like Guo Xiaoran's Chinese style poems are young girls. They think the Chinese style poems are very cool, but they are still subculture in nature and are usually not welcomed by their parents.

If Ren Jinqing could praise him, it would be different, and he would be able to straighten his back and behave in the future.

Ren Jinqing didn't seem to notice that everyone was nervously waiting for his comments. He wiped his glasses for a long time before looking up, startled and said:
"Is it my turn to say it?"

The host quickly said: "Mr. Ren, please comment first."

"Oh."

Ren Jinqing picked up the microphone and said casually: "The song is indeed very good and very contagious."

As soon as he heard this opening statement, Guo Xiaoran felt happy and calm.

Ren Jinqing didn't talk to you about "euphemism" before. He criticized you as soon as you came up, without any mercy.

It is unprecedented to get a "very good" evaluation from him.

Ren Jinqing continued: "This lyrics is also about reincarnation, but it is about the reincarnation of history. The peasant uprising army rebelled and led the people to conquer the world. After conquering the world, he became the domineering person again, and then he Be rebelled.

"From this perspective, the way the lyrics interpret the theme is very novel and more clever than the previous two. This is something worthy of praise."

After Ren Jinqing finished speaking, Guo Xiaoran was still sitting upright, but he was already fainting with happiness.

The barrage in the live broadcast room was also filled with the sound of champagne:

"As expected of Guo Xiaoran, his Chinese folk poetry is more popular!"

"I am also very excited when I hear this song. I can't wait to go to the battlefield to kill the enemy!"

"Indeed, it's very well written."

……

After a pause, Ren Jinqing continued:

"Next, it's time to talk about the shortcomings."

After thinking for a while, he added: "When I just listened, I counted several shortcomings. I just counted them...ten of them are not there, but seven or eight are there. Forget it, I won't count anymore. When it comes to It doesn’t matter where it comes from.”

"First of all, there are word and grammatical errors. Many of the lyrics in your song are deliberately written in classical Chinese to pursue a Chinese flavor, but they are mechanically applied. Many words are used very rigidly. The ancients did not use them this way at all... …”

"The second point is that the concept is still too superficial. In China, there is only one dynasty with a truly successful peasant uprising, and it has not formed reincarnation as your lyrics say. Your lyrics are a bit far-fetched in order to make up for the theme of reincarnation. ”

"The third point is that rhymes are forced in many places..."

"What about the fourth point..."

As Ren Jinqing talked, Guo Xiaoran fainted again.

I was dizzy with joy just now, but now I am dizzy with fright.

He had previously thought that Chinese-style lyrics would appeal more to Mr. Ren, but he never thought that for Mr. Ren, Chinese-style lyrics were his specialty!
If you use this to criticize other people’s expertise, there is a saying that can describe it well - doing what they do best.

Although Guo Xiaoran is very confident, his lyric skills are indeed far from enough.

Ren Jinqing, as the vice president of the Jianghe Province Writers Association, is very knowledgeable in ancient poetry.

The more you know, the more you can criticize, and whatever you say is irrelevant, but in the end, there were as many as 9 shortcomings in this song.

Fans of Guo Xiaoran in the live broadcast room were immediately dumbfounded.

The champagne is open early!

Ren Jinqing said that although other players were not good, they were not so miserable.

Guo Xiaoran was really miserable. He kept talking for 10 minutes without repeating anything. It could be said that he was hung up and beaten.

Many barrages broke the defense on the spot:

"Is this old man here just to scold people? Isn't it true that no one can get his praise?"

"What's wrong? I think what Mr. Ren said makes sense. I learned a lot from what he said."

"Being able to say so much shows that Mr. Ren still attaches great importance to Guo Xiaoran! It shows that he has unlimited potential in the future!"

"Don't be a future soldier here. Meng Xing can still be saved. Guo Xiaoran and Jia Yi can just go to their graves."

"Some Chen Liang fans, please don't jump. They are gloating now and will be liquidated when they come on stage!"

"It's just that I parodied two songs with Jin Lan and unexpectedly became popular and caused trouble for them. Can I really say it out loud based on my strength? It's not popular."

"Someone has broken through. I won't say who it is."

"Chen Liangfen comes out to scream again! Why don't you scream anymore?"

……

Although Guo Xiaoran was criticized, Lu Chujiu's performance still received a lot of recognition.

The first two groups were all cannon fodder, anyone with a discerning eye could see that, and then Lu Chujiu and Qin Yunshang were competing for first place.

Qin Yunshang has a background and strength. If she can't compare to Lu Chujiu, it only means that Chen Liang's level is much worse than Guo Xiaoran.

This implicitly proves that among these people, Guo Xiaoran has the strongest lyrics and music skills.

And Jia Yi's fan base has never gotten used to Chen Liang.

So all of a sudden, before Qin Yunshang came on stage, countless barrages began to attack him, insulting and cursing Chen Liang.

Not only that, there are also barrages trying to divide Qin Yunshang and Chen Liang, saying that "being in the same group does not mean sharing the same fate, and Chen Liang's difference does not affect Yunshang's strength."

There are also those who use Jinlan to compete with Chen Liang, saying, "A village cannon like Chen Liang is best suited for a village beauty like Jin Lan. He can't even use a Yun Shang'er."

All in all, the live broadcast room highlights a group of demons dancing wildly.

In the studio, Qin Yunchu felt very angry when he saw these barrages.

But there were too many rhythmic barrages, and she had no way to interfere, let alone let the navy help Chen Liang speak.

She didn't listen to Chen Liang's new song in detail. At this time, she couldn't help but feel a little worried:
Wouldn’t Chen Ya still write the kind of funny songs?

If they happen to encounter Mr. Ren Jinqing's minefield and get smacked with poisonous words, the two instructors would not dare to give Qin Yunshang high marks.

At that time, Qin Yunshang's fans will be offended, and they will think that the song you wrote for our Yunshang'er is bad. If they vote against it in revenge, they may lose the first place.

Although being No. 1 in this round doesn't matter to Chen Ya, Qin Yunchu still doesn't want him to lose in his heart.

After all, he is JX. Qin Yunchu admires him so much. If he really loses, he will be a little disappointed.

……

On the stage, Chen Ya turned to Qin Yunshang and said, "Are you confident?"

Qin Yunshang pouted and said, "Of course I have it, unless you don't have confidence in yourself."

Chen Ya smiled. At this time, the host was also calling Qin Yunshang to come on stage.

Qin Yunshang picked up the guitar and went up.

The host was surprised: "Is Yun Shang'er going to play and sing by herself again? Is it the same as the last round, another ballad?"

Qin Yunshang sat down on the stool and said, "That's right."

Hearing her singing folk songs again, many people in the live broadcast room frowned.