Holding the book-traveling script, conquer the villain Immortal Lord

It has been three months before I know it. As the first story with a beginning and an end, I have to thank many people, including helping me to review the manuscript for the third time, pointing out my editor, and even more readers who have accompanied me along the way them.

Although you are very cold and don't like to leave messages (in a low voice, I didn't like to leave messages when I was a reader), but the circle of book friends has witnessed the traces of the existence of every reader.

thank you very much.

In fact, this book still has many deficiencies. For example, the male protagonist is very ordinary (not very ordinary, very, very ordinary!), I felt this way when I wrote it. So far; as another example, the transitions in the early stage of this book are actually very blunt, but they are relatively natural later on.

For another example, the title of the book is Raiders of the Villain Xianzun, but the book does not reflect the heroine's strategy against the hero (I don't know why no one has complained about this), but the hero has a feeling of self-raiding, I think this is The biggest bug in this book.

Because I wanted to teach myself a lesson (or vigilance?), I didn't ask the editor to apply for a title change.

And so on, I won't list them one by one.

Of course, there are parts in the book that I feel satisfied with.For example, I personally think that the male protagonist's character is established, what about you?

There are also some supporting roles that appear shorter but have their own characteristics, such as Shaman Wang Banqing, the head of Sansheng Yaye, Chong Yin, the elder brother of the Chong family, and even Fozi Changui (the only character in this work who has an appearance test number) Well. It doesn’t matter, the next Nv Goose will be there, because I have already thought about (#^.^#)), Feng Yanying, and Lu Jianyu.

Maybe it's because the playing time is too short to prevent the writing from crashing, maybe I prefer this kind of characters with few appearances and personality. I like each of them very much, and I like them more than the pro-daughter goose in the novel (please don't spray, hug head).

Because it is still the May Day holiday, the application can only be completed after the holiday is over.

It is expected to open a new one at the end of May, and I wrote the beginning, but the outline and character design have not been finished yet. I took advantage of the holiday to work neatly, and I will report it to the editor directly when I come back.

The first version of the copy already exists, but it will not be published without editorial review.

It's still fairy tales.

That's all for now.

So, dear children, let's meet for the next book!