Koi system: Little Milk Bag is full of luck

Chapter 294 I am afraid that one day you will be caught by the characters in the play

Then Bai Leiyuan asked her to take out her mobile phone, downloaded a novel app for her, then searched for her novel, and finally handed her the mobile phone a little embarrassedly.

"You...let's take it slow."

After saying these words, Bai Leiyuan left her room in embarrassment and went back to the study to start thinking about the new plot of the novel.

After he left, Bai Qingyue immediately opened the novel and read it quickly.

After unlocking the skill of Wenxin Diaolong again, her reading comprehension ability has been greatly improved. Not only is she literate, she can read ten lines at a glance, and her memory is far superior to ordinary people.

Children of her age, not to mention reading novels, even have difficulty reading Chinese textbooks, but now she can read novels better than young people and effortlessly.

Bai Leiyuan's new pen name on that website is "Three Bowls of Love Words". The new book has a grand background and involves a variety of elements, including fantasy, rebirth, time travel, suspense, revenge, system, space and love.

Although there are many elements, he writes it with ease. The beginning is fascinating and suspenseful. What Bai Qingyue sees is praised again and again, and he reads it down with a lot of fun.

Xiaobai on the side yawned boredly. Seeing his little baby's engrossed appearance, he couldn't help but leaned up and stared at the screen of his mobile phone curiously, wanting to see what the novel was about.

"Baby, what story is this novel about, you are so fascinated by it?"

Bai Qingyue glanced at it and said, "Uh, it's a long story. I can't tell you in a short time. If you're interested, just watch it with me."

After speaking, he continued to read the novel. Xiaobai was also aroused by her words. He leaned against her, stared at the screen for a while, and couldn't stand it anymore.

"No, no, your human words are too complicated. My eyes hurt and feel uncomfortable. Movies, cartoons and comics are better."

Xiaobai ran to the side, ignored her, and pulled out her new tablet from her bag, clicked on the screen, and began to leisurely watch a cat-related cartoon.

At the other end, Bai Leiyuan sat on a chair in the study, facing the laptop, typing ten words in an hour.

He had just had some new inspiration, but when he was typing, his brain became blank.

He flipped through the book and read the news online, but his mind was still empty. Feeling agitated, he couldn't help but took out his mobile phone, opened the novel app, and began to read the reader comments under his novel.

At first, his novels were all well received, and readers praised him for his writing well, creative, and unconventional, but in the middle, his inspiration was cut off, and there were scumbags, and readers began to complain wildly. When he came, he kept asking him to write quickly.

"The author is great, why haven't you updated yet? It's been a day. The donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest!"

"Red umbrella and white pole, just lay on the board if you don't update it."

"Thousands of thousands of mountains are always love. Can you do more chapters?"

"Author, eat me a bowl of love stories! I want to update!! Don't always write so short, hate it!"

"I don't like the plot of the new chapter, one-star reservation!"

"Oh, this chapter is too watery, and the author is lazy again!"

"I can't accept this plot, I have to give up the text."

……

In fact, he can understand these urging readers, they just want to read the novels they like, but sometimes he feels very lost, and feels that the content he wrote with his heart is not recognized and liked, and he is both frustrated and disappointed. .

But what made him speechless the most was his editor Jiang Qingqing, because he came to this new website with a new vest. His original intention was to get rid of the shackles and start anew, but he didn't expect the editor's attitude to change after signing the contract. Very cold.

Jiang Qingqing's online status is always busy, he doesn't reply to him in seconds, he speaks politely, is cold and heartbroken, because his new vest is not famous, and he doesn't have much works, so he is taken for granted as a newcomer, often condescending.

In fact, he doesn't mind the editor's attitude. After all, the quality of the work is only related to him, but he didn't expect that the recommendation of that website needs the help of the editor. If he doesn't build a good relationship with the editor, then the work will be 100% suppressed.

These days, Jiuxiang is also afraid of deep alleys. Without corresponding traffic promotion, it is difficult for readers of good-looking books to know.

For this reason, Bai Leiyuan asked her several times, but all the answers he got were: "You are a new author, don't think about it, write a million words first!"

"I've been very busy recently. You can revise the novel yourself. Don't disturb my work."

Maybe it was too smooth before, no editor ever spoke to him in such a tone, so that his mentality was a little broken, and he heard some bad things about the editor from other authors, and he became more and more Feeling uncomfortable, I began to ask for leave and break frequently.

"If you are such a scumbag, this novel will be scrapped. Haha." Jiang Qingqing took the initiative to tell him three days after noticing that his novel was discontinued.

"Your recommendation is gone, you will blame yourself when it gets cold." Jiang Qingqing had already given up the recommendation to other authors at this time.

Bai Leiyuan was a little indignant when he heard the news, "Okay, then I'll keep updating, I want to finish this novel soon!"

Since then, he has completely let go of himself, wrote the novel in a wrong way, and wrote the various characters in the book in a mess.

Because of this, many readers gave up the article and made negative comments angrily, complaining very much about him, while a small number of readers who were still chasing updates just marked his novel as a pastime, wanting to see how it ended.

Later, he lost interest, lost inspiration, and refused to even type. The novel was discontinued for half a month, and readers lost 90.00%. , I just want to finish that book quickly so that I can restore the original state.

"Forget it, I won't write it anymore, let's write all the characters to death in the next chapter, so that the novel can be finished, and everything will be over."

Bai Leiyuan thought in frustration, then reopened his laptop, started typing, and wrote the last chapter.

Just as he was halfway through writing, there was a knock on the door outside the study.

"Boom, boom, boom-"

"Who?"

"It's me, Xiao Yueyue!"

"The door isn't locked, just push in."

Bai Qingyue pushed open the door and entered. After seeing her come in, Bai Leiyuan quickly stood up and asked, "Little Yueyue, what's the matter with you coming to me?"

"Seventh brother, I have already read the latest chapter of the novel you wrote!" Bai Qingyue raised her phone and showed it to Bai Leiyuan.

Bai Leiyuan was shocked: "This... how is this possible? Could it be that you have the ability to read and write hundreds of thousands of words easily? I haven't finished writing a chapter of the novel yet..."

She nodded and said, "yes, I read books very quickly. It's not a big deal for me to read a novel of this size. I came here to talk to you about my thoughts and feelings."

Bai Leiyuan was a little uneasy, but he still wanted to hear her thoughts. Children are innocent, innocent and simple, so they shouldn't be rude.

"Okay, just tell me what you think after reading it, I'm listening."

"Seventh brother, the beginning of this novel of yours is very good, creative and fascinating, and it makes me more and more fascinated, but halfway through you write it, as if you have changed a person, the plot has taken a sudden turn for the worse, making people incomprehensible. Mind, it's no wonder readers abandon the text."

After a pause, she looked at Bai Leiyuan and said, "Seventh brother, I finally understand your predicament, but I feel that you have written too much later, and you feel a little self-sacrificing and self-defeating."

"More importantly, you messed up the characters in the book, abused the protagonist, and continued to add drama to the villain. Are you not afraid of being beaten by the characters in the book?"

He sighed dejectedly and said, "Okay, I admit that there is something wrong with the plot I wrote later, but I'm too lazy to revise it now, I just want to finish this novel as soon as possible, so that I don't have to suffer anymore. ."

"Ugh."

"I really don't know what to say about you, I'm really afraid that one day you will be caught and beaten by the characters in the book..."

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(End of this chapter)