After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 215 The middle part is about human nature?
Crossing the morning and evening line, it is eternal night!

When a ray of light shines into darkness, then this ray of light is sinful, and if light can always shine into darkness, then it is salvation.
It's just that I have never seen the light, it will only make my world more desolate.

This is what old man Li thought of when he saw the protagonist in the book seeing the sun for the first time.

But now when he reads in the book that human beings are going to take their own planet to escape into the universe, only shock is left in his mind.

Old man Li subconsciously searched his knowledge storage, trying to find a wonderful copy to describe his feelings at the moment.

But in the end, what can be described is the phrase "this idea is too fucking awesome".

"Old Li, what's the matter? I think your face is a bit wrong! What did you just mutter? Did you find it?"

Hong Tao excluded another manuscript. He couldn't hear what old man Li was saying, but he saw something wrong with his expression.

"Didn't say anything! Didn't say anything! Haven't found it yet, keep looking for yours, leave me alone! I'll tell you when I find it."

Hearing this, old man Li tightened his grip on the manuscript in his hand, but his face pretended to be nonchalant.

He was completely sure that "The Wandering Earth" was written by Chen Tianhong. Other than him, no one else had such a big brain hole. "Country Teacher" gave him a great shock.

It's just that the shock of "Country Teacher" was in the late stage, while the opening chapter of "The Wandering Earth" hit people's hearts directly.

Old man Li said that he couldn't find it because he was afraid that Hong Tao would snatch the manuscript if he found out. They are all old colleagues, and they know each other's style of work.

He still wants to read the follow-up, maybe there will be more shocking scenes later, and the mystery in the book has not been completely solved.

For example, why do you have to take the planet to wander? Isn't it more convenient to use the spaceship plan!
From a scientific point of view, the "Wandering Earth" plan will consume most of the energy on the useless internal load of the earth. In addition to generating gravity, the thick material inside the crust is actually just a burden to escape in the interstellar.

In fact, the spaceship plan that old man Li thinks of is also a plan recognized by many people in the book. For this reason, they are divided into two factions, one is the "Earth faction" who flees with the earth, and the other is inclined to the spaceship. "Spaceship Pie".

Even some extreme "Spaceship Faction" people formed a rebel army to fight against the coalition government and sabotage it.

The reason why the scientists finally determined the "Wandering Earth" project was explained in the article through the teacher's explanation to the protagonist in class.

The reason is actually very simple and realistic, the ecosystem.
The adults are divided into factions, and so are their descendants. Among the students, there are also children who belong to the "Spaceship School". Among them, a student named A Dong did a design assignment for a nature class.

It is a sealed glass ball with a diameter of 10 cm, two-thirds of which is filled with water, a small shrimp, a small branch of coral, some green algae, and of course some invisible microorganisms and bacteria.

They form small interdependent circular ecosystems.

Shrimp eat seaweed and excrete organic feces, which are decomposed by microorganisms into inorganic matter and carbon dioxide. Seaweed uses inorganic matter and artificial sunlight to perform photosynthesis for growth and reproduction, and at the same time release oxygen for shrimp to breathe.
It can be said that this glass ball embodies the dreams of Adong and all the spaceship school children, and is the epitome of their dream spaceship!

If the small world in the glass ball does not collapse, and you can see the big from the small, then it means that the ecosystem in the spacecraft can also support the survival of human beings.

However, after only ten days, the small world in the ball has completely collapsed, and the ecological system is completely out of balance.
The teacher explained that this is because the ecosystem is too small, no matter how rigorous we are to carry out accurate calculations, it cannot withstand the storm of time, and similarly, the shortcomings of spaceships are also here.

Because they can't make the spacecraft as big as the earth, and they can't completely copy the earth's ecosystem.

Another student raised a question, saying that it is possible to emigrate to a new planet in a spaceship.

The teacher said that among the alien galaxies that have been explored so far, the planets suitable for human habitation are hundreds of light years away, and it would take them 17 years to get there by the fastest spacecraft, and the ecosystem on the spacecraft cannot support them for so many years.
The students were silent, and old man Li was also silent when he saw this.

And what the teacher said next hit old man Li's heart once again.

That's what the original text said.

[Children, only an ecosystem on the scale of the earth and such a majestic ecological cycle can make life last forever!Human beings left the earth in the universe, just like a baby left its mother in the desert! 】

"Only on the earth can life last forever. Human beings leave the planet they live in, just like a baby leaving its mother."

Old man Li read the teacher's words over and over again.

He is also a teacher and a scholar, and he realized that this sentence is unusual.

From a scientific point of view, the human beings in the book wander with their own planet because only the earth's ecosystem can allow them to survive. This is the most suitable and scientific solution.

From the perspective of human feelings, the earth is one's own hometown and homeland.
In the vast and boundless universe, human beings are so weak and insignificant. It is the earth that gives us shelter, allows us to live a carefree life, and allows human beings to have a habitat in the universe.

But now that the disaster is coming, and the solar catastrophe is about to swallow our "Mother Earth", should we abandon her and run away by ourselves?
Reason tells us it's okay, she won't blame us, how can a mother blame her own child?
But human beings are not cold-blooded animals, but advanced animals with emotions
All human beings in this article know that their departure is a farewell, and when they never return, even if they can come back, their "earth" mother will also be gone at that time.
They love this land, their hometown, and their mother planet!

Therefore, the human beings in the article did not choose to leave anyone behind, took all the bottles and cans, and took their home planet to escape and wander!

Even if the journey is long and dangerous!

But they are fearless!Even if their plan fails, they perish on the way of wandering!

They can accept death, but what they cannot accept is abandoning Mother Earth who raised them.

Because what she carries is not only the capital of survival, but also their dignity and confidence as human beings!

Even if they die at this time, human beings will die with pride, because they have tried their best!He didn't give up his home until the last moment!
In a word!The family is alive, the family is dead and the people are dead!

"It's really shocking! Perhaps only we Orientals can write such science fiction, and only we have such attachment and love for our homeland and homeland. With just this sentence, the whole novel has been sublimated!"

Old man Li was very emotional, he wanted to understand the deep meaning behind the words.

In fact, he didn't think about it a little bit. The teacher's words also have educational significance. They are educating the children to know how to protect their homeland, protect their mother planet, and take care of the ecological environment she bred.

Therefore, no matter from the scientific or emotional aspects, the human beings in the article finally chose the "Wandering Earth" plan, and this escape plan is divided into five steps in total.

The brake era written at the beginning of the first step uses more than 1 engines to stop the rotation of the earth, and the protagonist in the book was born at the end of this era.

Because of the stop of rotation, coupled with the high temperature brought by the engine, continuous tsunamis on the ground, extreme cold, extreme heat and other environmental disasters, human beings have turned to underground life.

The second step is called the Escape Era, to start the earth engine at full power, to accelerate the earth to the escape velocity, and to fly out of the solar system;

The protagonist in the present book is in this era.

As for the next three steps, they are called Wandering Age I (accelerating in space and flying to the Proxima Centauri, which is the new sun).

Wandering Age II (when it is about to arrive, let the earth resume its rotation and start to slow down).

New Sun Era (Enter the orbit of Proxima Centauri after slowing down, and live again.).

This process will last for 500 years, a hundred generations. And it has only been more than 300 years.

In the end, the first part of "The Wandering Earth" also ended in the memory of the protagonist.

When he was born, it was also a day of sailing, and it was also a day of sorrow!
The earth is on the road, human beings are on the road, but the grandfather who loves him the most has passed away.

The last words left by the grandfather when he was dying are a sentence often said by the generation of humans in the book.

【Ah, the earth, my wandering earth...】

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Now seeing the phrase "Wandering Earth" at the end of the chapter, Old Man Li understood what it meant.

I also know why the title of the novel is called "The Wandering Earth". Except for these four words, no adjectives are suitable, let alone appropriate.
"Would it be better to change it to "Wandering Wenxing". Forget it, don't make random ideas, the sense of substitution is the same, the earth is Wenxing, Wenxing is the earth, and the humans in the book are us in reality!"

"It's just that the background of the story at the beginning is so big, can the following plot be covered! If it is top-heavy, it will be broken!"

After reading the first chapter, old man Li was both happy and worried.

From his current judgment, it can be concluded that based on the first chapter alone, it is already a masterpiece that is not inferior to "Country Teacher". I dare not say that it is sure to win the first place, but the top three is definitely no problem.

In this way, with anticipation and worry, old man Li turned to the next page.

On a new page, there are still six big characters, [Medium: Escape Era]

The era of escape has begun, and the earth has already set sail, but it does not fly directly out of the solar system. She has to orbit the sun 15 times to warm up before acceleration. Each circle accelerates a little bit. After 15 circles, the acceleration reaches the escape calculated by scientists. speed, and head to your destination.

From the perspective of Mr. Li, these 15 rotations are more like a farewell ceremony for the earth to the sun.

Human beings live in her body, and the earth has also revolved around the sun for billions of years. The relationship between her and the sun is similar to that between human brothers and sisters.

It's just that the human beings at this time have forgotten the light and heat brought by the sun. They only remember that the sun will explode, and the explosion will destroy human civilization.

They began to fear the sun, fled underground, no longer longed for the light, and liked to stay in the dark, and at the same time passed this sense of fear to the next generation.

The protagonist grew up in darkness and fear, that's why he was so scared when he saw the sun!
"When a ray of light shines into darkness, then this ray of light is guilty. I have never seen light, it will only illuminate my world even more desolate."

Old man Li recited the words that he thought of at the beginning of the chapter again in a low voice
The protagonist finished elementary school in the dungeon and entered middle school. At this time, school education has been concentrated on science and engineering, and only mathematics, physics and chemistry are studied. It can be said that education such as art and philosophy has disappeared. As for theological beliefs, early abandoned by humans.

God has no way to save them, human beings can only rely on themselves, to borrow a sentence from the book, 【Even if there is a God, he is a bastard. 】

Of course, there are still history lessons, but the human history of the pre-sun era in the textbook is like a beautiful dream to the protagonist, which is illusory.

Old man Li deeply agrees that the human beings in the book no longer believe in religion.

To put it bluntly, religion is a product of ancient society. Its advantage in ancient times is that it can unify human thinking and allow people to implement relevant specific rules, but at the same time, its disadvantages are also obvious.

Not to mention that religion is easily used by some people to satisfy their private desires. The biggest drawback is that religious belief is useless in the face of disasters.

Human beings can rely on science and technology in essence. Human beings can only save themselves by constantly developing science and technology instead of pure fantasy.

Therefore, no matter in the previous life or in this world, there is a slogan that belief in science is the only one.

However, Old Man Li disagrees with the fact that they only care about science and engineering and complete pragmatism.

He is engaged in culture and teaches humanities, whether it is art or philosophy.

In the eyes of scholars like Mr. Li, culture can not only improve the material and spiritual life of human beings, but also promote social progress.

Complete pragmatism lacks creativity, even mathematics, physics, etc. also need creativity, and a large part of creativity depends on humanities, that is, spiritual culture.

Once a person loses his spiritual culture, his life will be boring, he will be insensitive, like walking dead, and he will lose the correct judgment of right and wrong.
This is very dangerous, and the consequences are extremely serious. It will cause social turmoil and eventually lead to the collapse of human civilization.

"Could the middle part be about the changes in human nature in the face of disasters? That's what the description in this paragraph is about!"

"In the era of escape, the threat of death and the desire to escape overwhelm everything. The fear brought about by the catastrophe of the sun has fundamentally changed the psychological state and spiritual life of human beings. All people think is to survive, which is human instinct. "

"The background of the opening chapter is very grand and there is no problem. The structure of the middle story and the development of the plot are also very reasonable. But it is very dangerous to write like this! You are a young man under 20 years old, talking about human nature. Where did you get so much confidence? what!"

Old man Li frowned tightly, feeling more and more worried.

Human nature is complicated, and no one dares to say that he can fully interpret human nature, not even Zhu Yanlin, who Chen Tianhong met back then.

You must know that Zhu Yanlin is a modern literary giant. His book "Human Nature and Human Heart" has won the highest international literary award.

However, old man Li didn't know that Chen Tianhong knew Zhu Yanlin. If he knew, he might be less worried.

(This little foreshadowing, I don’t know if you still remember)

The next few paragraphs of description undoubtedly proved what old man Li had guessed.

The first paragraph is about the protagonist’s father who suddenly told his mother one day, I fell in love with another woman and I want to leave you to live with her.

My mother was very calm when she heard the words, and just asked who she was.

What's nonsense is that the protagonist answered this question for his father, saying that he was his elementary school teacher.

In other words, he knew that his father had cheated, but he didn't feel angry. Instead, he was curious about when the two of them met.

What's even more ridiculous is that my mother said "Oh, I see, then you go!"

Dad's next words were even more damaging. He said, "After a while, I will definitely get bored. Then I will come back. What do you think?"

Mom said no problem, and turned to watch the fireworks happily.
Then after a while, Dad really came back, and at this time, Mom even forgot about her husband's cheating partner.

This means that human morality has been distorted, and there is no love between husband and wife, let alone passion.

In this article, human beings don’t even understand the concept of love, and they are amazed that people before the Sun era were suffering or seeking death for love. In their view, love is not as important as life and death.

In the second stage, due to the constant acceleration of the earth and the change of its orbit, the balance of the earth's core is disturbed, resulting in rampant volcanoes and frequent accidents where magma seeps into underground cities.

Finally one day, magma invaded the dungeon where the protagonist lives, and it is impossible for tens of thousands of people to escape in time. This involves an ethical issue, who should be saved first?
The original text mentioned the ethical question, [When the flood comes, a man who can only save one person, should he save his father or his son? 】

Normal people will be very entangled when they see this problem. Saving anyone will make the survivors suffer for a lifetime, because they have family ties.

In the eyes of the humans in the book, this question should not be asked.

Definitely save my son!Because the son is young, he has more value in living.

In the same way, the escapes arranged by the coalition government are first for babies, then for kindergarten children, then for primary school students, and so on.

This is typical materialism, which only considers the maximization of overall interests and does not consider other factors.

The rescue sequence is okay, but it is too cold-blooded. It can be said that they are about to become cold robots in the article.

And the result of this disaster is that the protagonist survives and his mother dies.

Although the protagonist is sad about this, he accepts it quickly. After all, in this harsh and frightening reality, life is the greatest happiness, and there is no need to be sad
Seeing this, old man Li is already extremely sad. This kind of pain is stronger than the description of death he read in the previous article. To be precise, it is sorrow.

What is more terrible than death?
I live to live, but I don't know the meaning of my life!

If a person becomes like the human being in the text, he has no love, no family affection, and no basic moral concepts. He only knows that he wants to escape!
What's the point of surviving like this?

Old man Li remembered a sentence, some people are alive, but he is dead, some people are dead, but he is still alive
The body can be destroyed, but the spirit of a person can last forever.

Spirit is not material but culture!
After thinking for a long time and being stunned for a long time, old man Li seemed to have figured it out suddenly. He slapped his thigh fiercely and said.

"No, this is not just describing the human nature when the disaster strikes, but pointing out the way, the brightest way, to the people caught in the disaster!"

ps: Say a few words!These two chapters are written with a lot of thinking. The novel "The Wandering Earth" is really heavy to read. I read it repeatedly for a long time before deciding to write. I can't guarantee that what I wrote is what the author wants to express, but I have worked hard!Don't spray if you don't like it!
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