The girls in this world are super fierce

Chapter 81 Asking for leave to correct the loophole at the beginning

I took the time to read the opinions of readers, and I found that there are many problems, not my outline, but my description.

For example, the main line is not clear, but the main line has always been clear. I want to get rid of my sister and go to the Vajra Sect to practice. I think of the holy land of immortal cultivation in the Central Continent. Bai Fumei or something...

As a result, many people still said that there is no main line, and I have to go back and add details.

There is also the problem that the protagonist has no brains. This is different from what I set. The protagonist is very smart. Some of the previous details should be due to my failure to deal with this illusion, or it seems that I am not smart enough.

There is also the issue of Shen Qianshuang being an adopted daughter. There are still many people who don't know that she is not related to the male lead (`), it should be because I didn't write clearly enough.

There is also the problem that the plot is too bland. I have this cool point, but my description is not good, so it makes it boring. I have to see if there is a way to strengthen it.

So I'm revising today to see if I can strengthen these details, it won't affect the plot, you don't need to re-read it.

Finally, thank you again for your opinions. Although I will not change the outline, it still gave me a lot of inspiration.

I’m sorry for any inconvenience. I’ll show you my wife, Rem. I apologize. You can see the starting point by pulling it to the back.

(End of this chapter)