lost narrative poem

Chapter 145 Verbal Violence

"It's really unflattering to do such a thing while the girl is sleeping soundly."

Looking at the photos taken by the mobile phone in his hand, Yukinoshita said so calmly, and pressed the delete button without any hassle.She doesn't seem angry, but that's what makes her so flat that it's scary.

In fact, you can speak more clearly. This kind of rhetoric is a bit misleading... Although I thought so, but Xia Ran, who knew she was wrong, sat upright, without squinting, and had no intention of arguing aloud at all. .

What else can be said?After all, he was caught when he was preparing to take a screenshot... Destiny is such a terrible thing. He just wanted to choke fate's throat, but fate beat his head to pieces instead.

"Student Xia Ran, don't you have anything to say?"

Yukinoshita looked at the silent party, although the voice was calm, it sounded as clear as ice, exuding an overly sharp aura.

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Hikigaya Hachiman and Yuigahama Yui sat on the other side, and they seemed to have developed a great interest in the manuscript of the novel in their hands at the same time.

Without even raising their heads, they clearly expressed their desire to stay out of the matter.

"That... under the snow, aren't you angry?" After thinking about it for a while, Xia Ran cautiously asked a question that she was most concerned about right now.

"I'm not angry." Yukinoshita said calmly.

Ah, it really is this sentence, Xia Ran has heard it countless times, and there are all kinds of people who say this sentence.The only thing they have in common is that they are not what they appear to be, and they are actually angry.

Just like the sentence "You tell me the truth, I won't be angry", whoever believes it is an idiot.

Of course Xia Ran is not an idiot, but now he is willing to believe this statement, and hastily prepared to facilitate this established matter: "That's really great, Xueshixia, thank you for being so..."

"Hello! Is it 110..."

"Please stop! Don't call the police——!"

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This farce didn't last too long before it was interrupted.

Because someone knocked on the door of the activity room roughly, which attracted everyone's attention, and then Saikiza Yoshiki walked in from the outside in a hurry.

To be honest, after yesterday's blow, Xia Rangao really dared to come to the door to lead him to death today, which made Xia Rangao take a look at him.Coupled with the fact that the other party was so stuck in such a standard door visit, it resolved his crisis very well.

So Xia Ran felt that maybe he needed to reciprocate, and later talk about the advantages of the other party's novel as much as possible.After all, after everyone else has given severe criticism and blows that may be fatal, he must consider Saikiza Yoshiki's ability to bear, and give him a hope of surviving, right?

Staring at the burly boy who moved a chair and sat in front of everyone, he thought so.

"Then, let me hear your thoughts—"

At this moment, Yoshiki Zaimuka sat down on the chair, which made a painful creaking sound.He crossed his hands in front of his chest unconsciously, his face full of confidence, with a sense of superiority from nowhere.

Wait, is this guy a fish?Is it only seven seconds of memory?Yesterday's painful experience was forgotten so quickly? !

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Hikigaya Hachiman and Yuigahama Yui looked at each other in disbelief, a little confused as to whether this guy's psychological endurance was so strong that he reached the level of shaking M, or there was something wrong with their memory.

"Huh? Wait, classmate Xia Ran, why are you looking at me with such sympathy and pity, as if you were looking at a corpse..."

Yoshiki Zaikiza also felt that something was wrong, and subconsciously looked in the direction of the source of the strange feeling, only to see a certain devil classmate looking at him with sympathy and pity.

He never knew that this kind of emotional gaze would not only make people subconsciously feel at ease, but on the contrary, it could make people feel utterly horrified and the hairs stand on end!

——The only difference lies in who casts the gaze.

Thinking of what happened yesterday, Zaimuza Yoshiki's heart trembled suddenly, and he quickly said: "By the way, please don't be too harsh, student Xia Ran... Otherwise, I will really die directly!"

"Don't worry, I will try my best to pick the merits of your novel..." Xia Ran said with a serious and reliable expression, "But you'd better be mentally prepared, after all there are three referees, especially Yukinoshita, she Will kill you with words..."

"...Xia Ran, you are absolutely sure that I will forgive you today, aren't you?" Yukino Yukino glared at him and interrupted him unceremoniously.

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"Ahem, since Yukinoshita is so considerate, that's really great." The young man once again resumed his posture of sitting upright and not looking sideways, just like a debtor who is always natural when facing his creditor. It's like a head weak, as long as it's not Lao Lai.

The same is true for him. When he did something bad, he was stolen by someone who happened to be on the spot. Now it is naturally impossible to behave more righteously than the other party.

Yukinoshita snorted slightly, ignored him, but flipped through the brand-new copy in his hand unconsciously, as if thinking about something.

Speaking of which, the two sides had a tacit understanding today and didn't talk about the phone call last night, as if it never happened at all.There might have been some unavoidable embarrassment at the meeting, but it was completely eliminated because of Xia Ran's behavior of forcibly collecting CG.

She was a little confused whether this guy did it on purpose, but out of her keen intuition, she always felt that it was probably like this.

"That... Yukinoshita?" Saikiza Yoshiki asked tentatively, not knowing whether he should believe Xia Ran's words just now.

Taking a breath, the girl quickly restrained her thoughts, raised her eyes and stared at Yoshiki Saikiza who was being judged by everyone in front of her:

"I'm sorry, I'm not familiar with this kind of works... Strictly speaking, I've only read one person's work before. It's not a complete light novel, it's more like a story like a game script."

While saying this, she turned her head to look at someone beside her.

That script really left a deep impression on her, but apart from the fringes in it that didn't conform to the core values ​​of a harmonious society, the implication contained in it was really quite profound.

The girl also admitted that the heavy criticism and shocking impact made her a little curious about the related ACG field. Although she was only a little curious, she still didn't take the initiative to understand various light novels on the market, Anime or something.

But it did make her subconsciously feel that maybe this kind of works are of this type with profound meaning and connotation.

What I didn't expect was that... Yoshiki Zaikiza's novel was very successful in disappointing her.It was really a mistake to stay up late to read it, although it was not because of this reason that she decided to stay up late, it was just that she couldn't sleep last night.

"Hahahahaha... It's okay, I just want to hear the opinions of the world, so you can just say it." Saikiza Yoshiki seemed to be relieved all of a sudden, pretending to be heroic and laughing, and then said so.

And he seemed to be relieved in his heart, as if the difficulty had dropped a lot all of a sudden.

If you have never read this type of subject, you must not have been influenced by too many works, and your vision and taste may not be so picky?It's like an old bookworm who dislikes this and that, and despises everything, while someone who has just started reading novels thinks even Xiaobaiwen is very exciting.

The truth is indeed the truth, and theoretically speaking, the plot is indeed possible to unfold like this.

however……

"Then let me just say it straight. It's very boring to read, and even painful. This work is beyond imagination and disappointing." The girl closed the copy in her hand, and directly put a sentence to death.

Zai Muzuo was severely injured in an instant, his face was pale, his whole body was thrown back greatly, and the chair made a "clicking" sound.

This is not over yet, Yukinoshita is a very serious and direct person, since he has made up his mind to speak up, naturally he will not mention it all in one stroke, but listed out one reason after another very seriously, explaining his feelings .

From the grammar transcription to the development of the plot, Yoshiki Saikiza was criticized to nothing.

The latter was hit hard, and subconsciously cast a look of help to the person next to him, with tears in the corners of his eyes.

then--

"I, I think...you, you know a lot of difficult words." by Yuigahama Yui.

"Anyway, the illustration is the key point, so don't worry too much about the story." by Hiki Valley Hachiman.

One minute later, Saikiza Yoshiki was lying on the ground sprawled on the ground, his eyes turned white and looking at the ceiling... He felt that he was going to die, and now there was only one person left who could save his life, which was like a dying candle in the wind.

Under the gaze of everyone, Xia Ran thought about it seriously, picked up the advantages of the novel as much as possible, organized her words and said carefully:

"It is very domineering to use the last paragraph to confess, and it is also in line with industry rules. It can be regarded as an open ending. In this way, even if the first volume is cut in half, it will not be said to be unfinished... ummm , Zai Muzao has done quite well in this regard.”

"puff--!!"

"Didn't you say that you would try to pick out the good points? Why did you give him a fatal blow?" Yukinoshita looked at him who was cruelly making up the knife in surprise, and asked a question in confusion.

"But... I'm trying to find out the advantages, and other aspects are really..." Xia Ran looked at the corpse of Zai Muzao in surprise. This kind of surprise did not seem to be fake, he really felt that he Try to speak out the advantages in a tactful manner, and praise it.

"That's right... that's right..."

While listening to his explanation, Yukinoshita let his eyes wander back and forth between the copy in his hand and the dead body of Zaimuza not far away, and then nodded in understanding.

Even she has to admit that it is difficult to forcibly pick out the good points from Saikiza Yoshiki's works... beyond imagination.

"That... there's something like a mochi slipping out of this person's mouth, is it really all right?"

(End of this chapter)