When Lu Yin was young

Seeing Li Liying leave, it was too late for Xu He to stop her, so he had to give up.

Li Jie suddenly said in a strange way: "What? Can't bear her to leave?"

Seeing the gossip expression on Li Jie's face, Xu He was speechless, and said directly: "What are you thinking? I just want to ask Mu Yang a question."

Hearing this, Li Jie also became silent.

To be honest, he was also full of doubts about this matter.

Why did Muyang withdraw from the assessment suddenly?
He sighed and said, "It's really a pity for Muyang!"

Li Jie also believed that Muyang's withdrawal was a huge loss to the Jinguancheng [-]th Colonel, and he also wanted to clarify this situation.

Xu He said: "It seems that we can only wait for the regular school meeting later."

Li Jie nodded slightly and said, "Yes!"

Today is Monday, which is the day for the regular school meeting, and Muyang will definitely appear.

The two made up their minds, and then returned to the classroom for class.

There is still a Chinese class, and then the whole school regular meeting will start.

The two planned to go to the playground to find Muyang after finishing the Tang language class, to find out what was going on.

At this time, Xia Yu, the Chinese teacher of Class [-], walked into the classroom.

Xia Yu was still wearing a Tang suit and holding a folding fan, she looked different.

But now that the weather has turned colder and colder, he is still holding a folding fan, which makes Xu He and others criticize endlessly.

Xia Yu didn't seem to feel that something was wrong, and held this folding fan in class this time.

Moreover, according to the introduction of the senior students, Teacher Xia Yu has always been like this, no matter it is hot summer or severe cold, he always holds the folding fan in his hand, and the handle of the folding fan is covered by him.

Xia Yu put the textbook in his hand on the podium, and then said: "We don't give lectures today, let's talk about the composition about 'family affection' that we asked everyone to write this time!"

Upon hearing this, Xu He and the others all had joy on their faces.

Because if we talk about composition, the learning task will not be so heavy, and it will be much easier, so they are naturally happy.

Xia Yu said: "All the students in our class have written the topics for the primary selection of new concept essays for middle school students across the country, and some of them have been written very well. Those of you who came to write this composition, you all have to study hard."

Xu He and the others nodded one after another, expressing their understanding.

Looking at the reactions of the students, Xia Yu nodded slightly. The reaction of these little guys was not bad.

Xia Yu said: "This topic is actually very clear and simple. There is no need to review the topic at all. Everyone should understand it. I don't think anyone will write off-topic or go off-topic, right?"

Everyone shook their heads one after another, it was indeed difficult to digress.

Xia Yu was very satisfied, and then said: "So I don't need to talk about the review of this topic. It’s not easy to write well and brilliantly…”

Xu He listened carefully to the class and listened very carefully. He is a good boy who studies hard.

Xia Yu said: "When writing a similar composition, you usually see the big from the small, and see the extraordinary from the trivial things around you. These require very detailed details, and they also require very delicate emotions... This kind of composition actually doesn't need to be too gorgeous. To embellish the rhetoric, as long as the true feelings are written, it will be a good composition..."

To be honest, Xia Yu had already spoken clearly and easily understood, but some people were still confused and didn't understand.

Of course, Xia Yu also knew that this was easy to say but difficult to write.

Even if they are Chinese teachers or some writers, it is very difficult to write the topic of "family love" well, so it is even more difficult for these first-year students.

However, this time there is no lack of well-written works in the composition.

Of course, when this is outstanding, it is relative to the level of junior high school students.

Xia Yu said: "There are quite a few people who wrote the composition well this time, such as Zhou Zheng, Lin Xinya, Yang Juan and Xu He..."

When Xu He heard his name, Xu He's eyes widened, he didn't expect to have himself.

To be honest, Xu He felt that he should not be able to get a high score.

Because when he wrote this composition, he didn't use gorgeous rhetoric, nor did he use overwhelming parallel sentences, and he didn't frequently click questions.What he wrote were some trivial things that happened between him and his mother Tang Qian, especially those things that had extremely strict requirements for his study.

He felt that his writing was a bit messy and trivial, and he shouldn't be able to get a high score. He didn't expect that Teacher Xia Yu thought his writing was very good, which surprised him a little.

Teacher Xia Yu continued: "Among them, Xu He's composition is very different from everyone else's, but it is very brilliant!"

Xu He's eyes widened, and he never thought that Teacher Xia Yu would praise him by name.

At this time, Li Jie turned his head to look at Xu He, and gave Xu He a thumbs up.Of course, the other students also turned their heads to look at Xu He, their eyes were full of envy and shock, and they didn't expect Xu He's composition to be so brilliant this time.

However, Zhou Zheng looked at Xu He with jealousy and suspicion.

Xu He ignored these gazes and looked up at Xia Yu.

Xia Yu picked up Xu He's composition, looked at it and said: "Xu He's composition does not have any gorgeous rhetoric or too many rhetorical techniques, it is more of a straightforward narrative, and the description is also Some trivia about the daily interaction with his mother. However, the few things he selected are more representative, and they are the current hot spots in mother-child and education. The more important thing is that these things and details are real. You can You can clearly feel the true feelings from the lines, and you will feel that these things are happening in front of your eyes, and even similar things have happened in your life. His ordinary words have aroused the resonance of readers And empathy...it's hard, hard..."

When talking about this, Xia Yu looked up at Xu He, his eyes were full of encouragement and admiration.

To be honest, he really didn't expect that a student in the first year of junior high school would write such a good article, and his true feelings really hit his face.

The simplicity and youthfulness in the text is also very strong, which is even more touching.

This article is definitely the best one written in their class this time, and he himself gave it full marks.He even found other Chinese teachers in the office to refer to and mark the papers together, and the other Chinese teachers also agreed to give Xu He full marks.

Of course, this does not mean that Xu He's composition is completely free from problems.

In fact, there are still some obvious problems in Xu He's composition. There are still some problems in the choice of words and sentences, and there are also some typos.Logically speaking, such a composition would not be given full marks.However, at Xu He's age, it is indeed very, very rare to be able to write with such true feelings and empathy for readers, and it is worth cultivating.

Therefore, with a lot of praise and encouragement in it, they gave Xu He full marks.

After all, it is easy to correct the problems of words and sentences and typos, but it is not so easy to cultivate the ability to write true emotions. It is even more rare for the written things to resonate with readers. This is due to talent.

Xia Yu continued: "Xu He's composition is the best one written in our class this time, and it is also the only composition with a perfect score in our class, and it is also the only one with a perfect score in the first grade of our school this time." Composition. Xu He studies very hard, everyone should learn from him."

Everyone turned their heads to look at Xu He again, as if they only knew Xu He now.

Xu He was also dumbfounded by everyone's eyes, and he was a little embarrassed.

If Xu He would attract everyone's attention in terms of playing football, he would definitely look down on the audience with pride and shame.But in this regard, he really didn't dare, feeling a little shy.

He really didn't expect his composition to be so brilliant this time, he even wondered if Mr. Xia Yu and the others had misunderstood it.

Xia Yu also said: "I won't read this composition to you, because this article will be published in our school newspaper, and you can read this article from the school newspaper at that time. Of course, if you wait If it’s not enough, you can go to classmate Xu He to borrow his composition to take a look after class. You have to study hard from him..."

Immediately, the eyes of all the students looking at Xu He changed again, as if Xu He's compulsiveness became much higher in an instant.

This is the first one in their class to appear in the school newspaper, right?
No one thought that the first person in their class to appear on the school newspaper would be Xu He, which made many people feel incredible, especially Zhou Zheng.Even Zhou Zheng couldn't hide the envy and hatred in his eyes anymore, and he looked at Xu He in a bad way.

Xu He didn't notice this, he was shocked.

Is my article published in the school newspaper?

wow!

I really didn't expect myself to be so powerful?
Xu He, you are really great, you are usually too low-key!
Li Jie even stared at Xu He with wide eyes, and said after a while: "Old Xu, should I call you a great writer now? Oh no, I should call you a great writer!"

Xu He stared at Li Jie speechlessly, and said, "You don't speak in a weird way, we are still good friends!"

Xia Yu on the stage said: "Okay, everyone, don't discuss it! Now listen to me, apart from Xu He's article, Lin Xinya's composition is also very good. Her composition is completely different from Xu He's composition. The two styles of her article, the rhetoric of her article is much more gorgeous, and the words and sentences are also much more delicate. It can be seen that it is written by a girl, and it also writes a certain amount of true feelings. It is very good. You can also read more and learn more. Later, I will read this composition to everyone..."

Everyone looked at Lin Xinya again, envious.

Xia Yu continued: "The candidates who have passed the primary selection of the National New Concept Composition Contest for Middle School Students this time are...Xu He, Lin Xinya, Zhou Zheng and Yang Juan. Come to your best level, compete in style and compete in level..."

Hearing this, Xu He thought he was going out to play football.

Li Jie immediately congratulated Xu He: "Great writer, congratulations! Keep working hard, strive to win a new concept composition contest, and become the next Mu Han!"

Xu He was really speechless, he stared at Li Jie and said, "Can you talk well?"

Li Jie chuckled and said, "I hope I can have a friend who is a great writer? In this way, won't my writing level be improved? And if I tell it later, I can pretend to be more aggressive!"