Meiman's four-dimensional pocket

Chapter 65 Summary
I like summarizing, because it's a recollection and a look into the future.I like drawing pancakes!
This volume ends at Chapter 23.

This volume is just like the comments said, Namor is a bit abrupt, and it is true.The original design was that Namor approached Shuwen because of the power of Neptune, and the two had a fight, which was a small plot.But later, because of the reminder from the comments, I think it can be written as a big event.Because Namor had the power of the phoenix, and flooded the Black Panther's hometown.

But I didn't write it well, not just because everyone didn't know enough about Namor, but because I didn't write it well enough and not interesting enough.The part about ascending the dragon sword is quite interesting.

This volume takes over what happened in the first meeting of the original Avengers.However, it was not well written. The disaster occurred and the description of the disaster was not well written. I only wrote a little bit about the impact on the people. The next volume will deepen this point, and at the same time continue to write after this volume.

Regarding the problem that the plot and ability are scattered in the comments, er, I didn’t design it well. I originally designed to use various props to solve various troubles. By the way, I designed a few major events caused by props.But I found that the props I knew were not enough, and it was not easy to control the balance, so the ability appeared complicated.As for the storyline, this is also true. I still laid the groundwork for a lot of things, that is, the next few volumes.

The character itself is not well shaped, and the protagonist who is too passive makes it difficult to develop the plot, or the effect of the development is very awkward, so the protagonist will be more active in the future.Although the plot of the character change of the protagonist is not well written, at least it is not without reason, and it will continue to improve afterwards.

Summary is over.

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